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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

So they went back to Spike's apartment and hence the chapter title. Wow.. but I would say Buffy was a bit drunk even if she was clear enough to know what she did *gg* and to enjoy it. ~ Look there.. Spike was trying to get to know her better because he is interested in her. Well that didn't go the way he had planned it. But I'm glad she didn't run! And she wants to talk now? Uh-huh... what now. And a good chapter I think.

Reviewer: Rachael Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 01:14 pm Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

I was so happy to see two updates!!! I'm very excited about this story. Ok Spike said that Buffy was too young, how old are both of them?
I cant wait to read more, I ABSOLOUTELY LOVE this one!
VERY good work!

Reviewer: cresst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 08:47 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

Wow, you waste NO time. I hope that Buffy doesn't bugger this up, especially since we know that Spike/Will wants more than just a fuck-buddy. Whee!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 06:43 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

good so far

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 05:29 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

Good update. Rather an intense introduction and the speed with which their encounter progressed spun me a little but the honesty and maturity in it is encouraging. Oh and that Spike switched shifts to get a little closer to her? Delicious. More soon please 8-)

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 04:08 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

love that she stayed, hate it wheb the girls run off

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 04:01 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

Two updates was great, but I am over the moon about the third : )
I do see the effect you were trying to get here..And it was very gritty, and rough. I was actually a bit worried about Buffy being taken advantage of, until you switced to Spike's POV. So now I get the feeling Buffy is getting ready to hurt Spike's feelings. I hope I am wrong though!
I really like how this chapter was writen..with the *hot* sex scene, then the next morning in Spike's POV. It really worked well. I am so glad that you decided to post this fic. It is completely engrossing!

Reviewer: Albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 03:50 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

Nothing at all to worry about. You got this chapter exactly right. The right emotion, the right movement, the right build of tension and not overly descrptive to the point of gagging. you got it all just right and I am so enjoying this story. I really can't wait for more of this.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 02:46 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

Wow- that was some ... wow. Sorry, don't quite know how to express here, but there was definetely a sadness around this, even though not much was said. It is interesting to see that Spike... I mean, Will actually liked her. I think that the scene was rough, but that was the point of it- to be rough, calloused, kind of like Buffy, right? I do wonder how this will turn out. Will's right, "we need to talk" is never a great opening line.

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 01:53 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

I really like this story :-) And I think you did a really good job with this chapter..things happened, it seems, jsut how they needed to and you did a really good job showing Buffy's thoughts at one point, then Spike's...now we just need to know what Buffy's thinking again ;)

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 01:03 am Title: Why Don't We Get Drunk

damn! not only a two-fer but hot savage sex! i bow at your feet!! LOL

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