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Reviewer: ~Eris~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2006 - 07:05 am Title: Too Many Stories

Wow. Just read chapters 1-4. Amazing job! I'm thoroughly hooked! The way they got together was interesting, love to see how they interact now. And can't wait to hear some more of their backstories...

Author's Response: This is just a quick note to say thank you for all the reviews. They are extremely helpful - not to metion just plain great to recieve. For the record, anyone interested in a few url's or learning more about 9-1-1 dispatch leave a note. (there's one board with a "weird call" thread i found completely hilarious) Soon I hope to have time to respond in more detail and with more effuse thanks, when real life slows down just a bit.

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Too Many Stories

Can I just say I'd like more? It's really good. I didn't think it would be like this.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 03:07 pm Title: Too Many Stories

So Buffy feels good (except the hangover) the night after... so I wonder what she wanted to talk about? Being friends with benefits? *reads on* Oh my.. that almost went wrong. So many misunderstandings.But it seems to me they'll try to make it work.. whatever they are planing to do in the future (if they know it themselves yet). Looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 06:37 am Title: Too Many Stories

good update

Reviewer: Rachael Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 05:34 am Title: Too Many Stories

Awesome! And you totally cleared up the age thing, thank you! I hope Spike doesnt just decide to give up I hope he fights for her ans Buffy fights for him,...but they have to right, i mean there Spike and Buffy.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:59 am Title: Too Many Stories

Whoa! That was a good scene. I'm glad that they are better now. I really think that the emotion was there and came out well- that was good writing. I'd love to know the back story on their reps, but I'm guessing we'll get to that soon, yeah? Another great chapter- well done.

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:35 am Title: Too Many Stories

Yay. A fight that didn't end with make up sex.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:26 am Title: Too Many Stories

Whew...that was close! Something tells me that these two strong willed people would have never hardley talked again if she had made it out that door. This relationship is going to be very interesting to watch unfold.. Looking forward to more : - D

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:16 am Title: Too Many Stories

Great chapter again :-) Glad that (after quite a bit of yelling) they did talk some thigns out

Reviewer: cresst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 01:59 am Title: Too Many Stories

Hee. Relationships are messy and fully of mixed signals and misunderstandings and you captured the beginnings of that wonderfully.

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