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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 10:09 pm Title: Home of the Blues

Oh that is the description I was looking for: Buffy is beat because she seems so have the "weight of the world on her shoulders". I'm glad that William fell for her... very hard. He'll be there to care for her, take care of her. The problem? I'm not sure Buffy will let him do this so easily. *reads on* But maybe she'll take his help. At last she told him everything how. Must have done her good, to lift a weight from her. ~ Good chapter, love the update :)

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 07:13 pm Title: Home of the Blues

I think you are doing an anazing job with this story. Yoy're really giving the real emotions of having a job in this field. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 06:58 am Title: Home of the Blues

good update

Reviewer: effection Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 05:30 am Title: Home of the Blues

I love your writing. And it really sounds like you researched everything thoroughly... for a few chapters until one of the A/N's i thought maybe you've worked as a cop before or something like that. It's very real. Great job.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Home of the Blues

Elizabeth is a lucky woman. I say lucky, because she was on the edge of the abyss..and it seems at the last moment someone is going to be there to pull her back. She is lucky that William reconized something familiar and is willing to be there for her as a boyfriend or a friend... but it sounds as if he is there regardless..

Everyone who suffers from depression, is not as lucky as Elizabeth to have someone willing to smash through the barriers that go up with depression. Since you promise a happy ending, I am going to bet that she will eventually be able to overcome this.

Such a wonderful story...looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 03:58 am Title: Home of the Blues

It's sweet and sad. Lovely really. Wish I could help but I don't know anything. :)

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 03:04 am Title: Home of the Blues

I have to tell you- this is one of my favourite fics out there right now.

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 - 03:01 am Title: Home of the Blues

You continue to have a real ease with the language here, and are very able in sliding in the introspection without it being heavy-handed.

And you also continue in doing some great character work. I truly felt the tension deflate from within Buffy here, hold much she has held herself back and how she was able to breathe a bit. And I'm really looking forward to the future developments between the two.

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