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Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2009 - 12:30 am Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

I am really enjoying your story. Please don't take it down.t

Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 03:19 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

Please post the whole thing. I am really enjoying it.

Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 03:17 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

Please post the whole thing. I am really enjoying it.

Reviewer: Tanit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 11:00 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

Okay, so I just sat and read the WHOLE THING in one go. This is just phenomenal, really. Not a plot we see often, and so well done. And you've got me absolutely in love with the characters and empathizing with all they're going through (and have gone through). It's just brilliant. :) Totally favoriting this so I know when you update.

As far as reworking the story goes, could you do it a chapter at a time and simply repost the edited chapters as you finish making them shiny? Sort of a compromise between taking it down entirely or leaving it as is, maybe.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've decided since this is an older complete story, to just give a quick once-over before posting each chapter. If I decide to do more later, I can always go back and edit a bit without taking it down. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Admiral Morgan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2009 - 08:13 am Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

This story is awensome!! If you are even better you are probably a pro.

Don't give up on those two officers, they deserve a ending !!!

Thank you and read you soon.

Reviewer: Kallin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 08:27 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

I love this story so pleace don't take it away.... keep updating this, want to know ow it ends =)

Author's Response: Thank you. Updates are on Monday or Tuesday of each week. I appreciate you reading.

Reviewer: survenante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 12:02 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

Definitely post the whole thing. I enjoy it so much. It's great stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: whenimfree Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 04:38 am Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

Hey there...

I'm enjoying your story, and my vote would be that it not be re-written. If you're looking for honest criticism, I think it would benefit from a good beta reader, as I've seen several places though the past chapters where a word has been missing, misspelled, or misused, but all in all it's a very engaging story.

Author's Response: Yeah, I've noticed a bit while looking over before posting. And fixed quite a bit, but I know there's more in there. Plus, I went a direction with this story where now I'm reading it I find I wish I'd put more emphasis on certain things and less on others. But finished is finished, and people are in the middle of it, so I'm not changing it. I will, however, do more than just spell-check before posting from now on. I'm calling it a compromise. Find the places where I left out the verb and typed the word two or three times and that's it.

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 03:44 am Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

OMG - PLEASE don't take this one down and re-write. I just found it, and I am feeling every word you have written so far. This is such a wonderful story, with B & S wanting to become the people they want to be - Will and Beth, the way you have slipped actual story lines from the show, and the information regarding 911 operators.
Don't stop, please....

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 10:08 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

I like this story a lot.. and I would be sad if you took it down. It reads like a movie and I love it. Very original storyline, and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 05:50 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

Another update already? :D
Chapter was good, I think it worked.
Sad to have to say goodbye (but it could be careful if Spike tried to meet her).
And what does Buffy want - painting a picture of Spike's mom or dad?
Heh heh (She wondered if he’d think she was a pervert if she made him swap the necklace for a nice leather collar. With a little tag to dangle from it with her name on it so everyone would know who he belonged to.).
Oh no! Please don't take it down, post more instead.
I know of other that re-wrote a story. Some took it down but some simply edited the chapters (that will let you keep your reviews at last).

Reviewer: Dar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 01:25 am Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

What a sweet but painful goodbye. You left it with so much to look forward too. Nice job!

Reviewer: veronika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 12:21 am Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

please continue posting, you got the characteristics and emotions so good that it'd be really sorry if we can read how it ends up.

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 10:59 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

I like where this is going! Keep it up! =P

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 09:25 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

I am glad you are continuing, I had read it a year or so ago and liked it then. Keep it up please!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 09:11 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

Please continue - I want to know what happens next! You can always re-write later if you decide to.

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 08:58 pm Title: Love Will Keep Us Alive

Beautiful. Heartbreaking at the same time having to let someone go when you were just figuring out how you felt about them. Gorgeous writing and can't wait to see where it goes.

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