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Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2009 - 09:25 pm Title: Alone

I've just read this all through in one go and wow - I'm loving it. Your writing is fantastic, and this is a very orignal plot.

Gah, cliffhanger! I hope Spike will be all right, and poor Elizabeth. I did want to mention that I liked how in the past couple of chapters we've seen the separation completely from her PoV, it makes you empathise with her missing Will even more.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I am so very glad you mentioned this. One of the things I had thought about changing is that we never really know very much about what Will's doing in this part. But I wasn't really writing about the "case", I was writing about the relationship. If that makes sense.

Reviewer: veronika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2009 - 09:48 am Title: Alone

no no no cliffhangers are definitely not good, especially the evil ones =)

Author's Response: All cliffhangers are evil. But without them, most stories would be one massively long "chapter".

Reviewer: Readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2009 - 12:29 am Title: Alone

I've read all of this in one go, and am completely and utterly addicted. More, please! While I have at least some fingermails that are unbitten!

Author's Response: Thanks. Posts are on Mondays or Tuesdays, depending on my work schedule. I try for Monday every week though. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 08:28 pm Title: Alone

I'm patient, don't worry for me because more smut will take time. I'm just glad for them when William will be back. At last I hope it's a good thing when he comes back.

Awe :) William was right, Beth needed him indeed.
LOL and the pregnancy really does really a thing to Beth.
At the moment it doesn't sound as if William will be back soon. Evil cliffhanger *nods*

Author's Response: William is apparently "super-boyfriend" on occasion in this. I admit it. He doesn't mess up nearly enough to be totally in character Spike.

Reviewer: Tanit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 11:51 am Title: Alone

Oh NO. I had that sinking feeling in the pit of my belly when he was talking to Liam, trying his hardest to be done with it all, and ... oh NO. :(

I feel so for Elizabeth, having to go through all of this alone. And oh god... I did the whole groan/sympathy chuckle when she tossed her cookies into the boss' waste bin only to have it hit the Lieutenant's shoes. Awwwk-waaard. Poor girl needs a hug and someone to confide in if she can't have Will ... and that's not looking like an option for a while. :(

I'm anxious for the next update. :)

Author's Response: Elizabeth really does need someone else to talk to. But then again, if she'd had someone else to talk to, Will probably wouldn't have become so important to her so very quickly.

Reviewer: Julia Le Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 06:35 am Title: Alone

Looking foward to the next chapter! Very good so far.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 03:51 am Title: Alone

GAH! Poor Beth, poor Will. Bad news bears all around. Love the angsty goodness.

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 02:32 am Title: Alone

Oh now that's just evil. This is as bad as "Lost" - now I just have more questions and no answers!!

I've definitely enjoyed this story so far, keep up the good writing.

Author's Response: Okay, possibly evil. But surely not Lost evil. That's just - reeeeally evil.

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