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Reviewer: Henrietta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2009 - 03:22 pm Title: Hold On I'm Comin'

Hey, I followed Kristi's [Tanit] rec to read this and I'm really glad I did. I can't wait for the next chapter, really enjoyed getting to this point. Little typos don't really matter in the grand scheme of the story, because you're so good at creating this atmosphere and these characters. I want to know what happens next so more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Hopefully, now taht Tanit has agreed to check behind me, the typos problem will decrease. I never catch my own mistakes until someone points them out, then they taunt me in my sleep!

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2009 - 11:26 pm Title: Hold On I'm Comin'

Omigosh! Okay, haven't been over to this site in a while and what a shock it was to come back and seeing this story updated and has been updated several chapters already! This is one of my most missed stories and I'm so glad to see it back and also welcomed the excuse to reread all that I'd read in the past.

I've really enjoyed the updates and where the characters are being taken. This chapter was so great, for Elizabeth to see this support she never knew she AND Will had and the revolving glaring, especially from Xander was hilarious. And Andrew's role was also just so much fun.

I'm really looking forward to see what happens next and welcome back!

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2009 - 11:26 pm Title: Hold On I'm Comin'

Omigosh! Okay, haven't been over to this site in a while and what a shock it was to come back and seeing this story updated and has been updated several chapters already! This is one of my most missed stories and I'm so glad to see it back and also welcomed the excuse to reread all that I'd read in the past.

I've really enjoyed the updates and where the characters are being taken. This chapter was so great, for Elizabeth to see this support she never knew she AND Will had and the revolving glaring, especially from Xander was hilarious. And Andrew's role was also just so much fun.

I'm really looking forward to see what happens next and welcome back!

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2009 - 08:25 pm Title: Hold On I'm Comin'

And the "Scooby Gang" comes to the rescue. I'm so glad you've brought them into it. I wouldn't want to have a glaring contest with Xander.
Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2009 - 05:33 pm Title: Hold On I'm Comin'

Uh-huh... I'm glad to discover that Spike isn't dead (well that would probably been the end of the story, huh?).
It wasn't nice (but understandable) that Elizabeth wasn't aloud to see Spike.
Loved the glaring and the SpikeWatch though. A lot :D
And that Spike seems to be better now.
Looking forward to more (soon?).

Reviewer: xaphania Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2009 - 04:20 pm Title: Hold On I'm Comin'

Great chapter! Really liked how you had the call come through to Beth, and then the disjointed time-jumping in the scenes after.

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2009 - 02:56 pm Title: Hold On I'm Comin'

Best chapter yet - great job Alvarii!! I love the way you have the group coming together to support Beth, and the glaring thing was funny and touching all rolled into one.

You seem to have capture Andrew completely - he made me giggle. Tara of course is rock solid as ever.

Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks. Honestly, Andrew is one of my favorite characters. I had to have him in there somewhere. :)

Reviewer: djonie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2009 - 02:19 pm Title: Hold On I'm Comin'

Love this story! Great chapter, although you gave me quite a scare when they found the body in the park! Hope you'll update soon!

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