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Reviewer: Lo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2009 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh my, Spike doesn't even know how to tie a shoe? That's really really bad.
*check* Yes, Buffy was looking for a Dr. Giles but she was only researching, I didn't know (or forgot) that Buffy sent a letter.
Not a good timing for him.
Ah well Elizabeth better tell him soon before Spike notices that she gets 'fat'. *gg*
Especially that Spike gets so frustrated, being stuck in the hospital and still not well.

Author's Response: Buffy sent her letter while she was panicking over the pregnant realization. And promptly forgot all about it herself, so it's cool that you did too! (adds to the surprise of his arrival nicely)

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2009 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 17

Poor Will, that feeling of being trapped in a hospital and trapped in your body that isn't doing what it's supposed to is such a difficult, frustrating thing to deal with. His misplaced anger at Beth was also understandable, as she's his one reprieve and she was late. I liked his realization as she had flipped from being angry to understanding that he would have to marry her.

And what an interesting development of this new arrival! Curious to see where this goes. But poor Beth, things always getting in the way.

Really looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Glad you like it. Once again, Spike is the one with the inherrent understanding not only of himself, but of her. It's one of the things I like best about the relationship - usually people make it the woman who's emotionally clued in!

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