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Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

hi spufette!
i just begun reading this fic... and it seems really interesting! i read your warnings but i'm ok with them (i totally appreciate that you wrote them, anyways....). I don't like xander so much, so i don't mind him as the bad guy... I do like anya though, but surely i can read about an evil anya (i think she has the potential... lol). As for the good guys.... well, with the exception of the saints (and not all the times!), nobody is completely good!
i do wonder about spike obsession with buffy... i'll hope to discover more in the nezt chap! (good thing it's already written!! lol)

Author's Response: Thank you for giving this a chance. I usually don't write really dark fan fic but thought I'd take a chance this time. It will get darker. Everyone in this story is pretty damaged for one reason or another. While Xander plays the really evil bad guy, Angel will be pretty good along with some other characters. I'm going to make this a fairly long one; try to suss out the different characters tortured personalities and all. I will tell you that through it all, Spike will remain the constant anchor in Buffy's messed up world. I love a strong; protective Spike, especially when he plays the other half to Buffy's heroine. Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2006 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

This chapter brought it all together, Thanks. She was right in not having the baby, it would have given Xander power over her. At least more than he has now. Thanks for giving her William.

Author's Response: I agree, whether you are pro-choice or anti-abortion; this is a desperate situation. William is Buffy's salvation in this tale, so be assured that he's not going anywhere by choice. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: jadedmidnight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

Great start. I can't wait to learn more about Spike's obsession with Buffy and how it came about.

~Diana

Author's Response: Thank you. Spoiler alert: A picture of Buffy is involved in how Spike became 'interested' in her! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: hunni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

AM REALLY INTO THIS.......NO REALLY I'AM ! ! ! !

Author's Response: Okay! No, thank you, really. I hope to post another chapter soon. spuf

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

That's right.. with parents like his Xander could have gone to the dark side easily like he did here. Interesting start! I really love the first chapter so far. :) Looking forward to your next one!

Author's Response: Thank you. It's interesting you picked up on that part of Xander. I always felt it's what made him so damn bitter in the show. spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

Glad you decided to go ahead an write this new fic Spuf..
First chapter really reeled me in..You managed to set the stage, and give a little introduction to all the main characters. There is so much I like about this..So many different layers to be explored!

First, Xander being evil and bad is an interesting twist..I have read fics where he was an ass..but not blatantly this evil..(I kinda imagine him like the Vamp Xander from the espisode on BTVS)..So he is a bit obsessed with Buffy here? That adds another layer to the plot.

I also really like that Spike is obsessed or in love with Buffy before they even meet. That was a good idea. I am interested to find out how that came about. Also glad that Buffy is a bit tarnished. Looking forward to reading more about tougher, gritty Buffy.
Good work on the first chapter...Looks like this will be a real tale : D

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm hoping to be able to update this more often. Yes, I loved vampire Xander and Willow. I thought they were a hoot in that epi! Buffy is slightly bent, but not broken, yet. Spike will try and help her. Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

How about you name him Dick Synder? It is very fitting. Like the new story. I agree Xander and Anya could work the darker edge.

Author's Response: Good name! Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

absolutely loving it so far

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I can post more soon. spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

Fantastic start! Very interesting so far. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you. More soon I hope, spuf

Reviewer: bev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

i have always been a fan of your wrighting and i think this may be your best ever!
please give me more!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope to keep up on this one soon. spuf

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 04:49 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Disarm'

What a great start! Can't wait for the next chapter. Bonnie and Clyde weren't that hot or smart, seems you are making Xander and Anya a lot better. Can you ice Harmony? Maybe by accident by Buffy or Spike, it will get Anya a lot more ticked mainly if Harmony owe her money or took her shoes she got murdered in. Anyway great start! You are the best.

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry this response to you review is so late. I'm having some RL issues (again) and have been really out of the loop here. I hope to post another chapter of this one soon. spuf

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