Date: 07/11/2006 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 10: 'Hurt'
The plot is really progressing nicely. That was one intriguing meeting between Xander and Angel. I found it very interesting that Frank is so concerned with Anya's feelings. I enjoyed Spike and Buffy's interaction with Giles. And I loved the way you closed the chapter. Fantastic update!
Author's Response: Thank you. Frank is Xander's conscience, kind of, and hopefully he'll sway his brother in the future.
spuf
Date: 07/11/2006 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 10: 'Hurt'
Thanks for the spot of spuffyness. They are always so cute together. Can't wait to find out what Xan has up his sleeve (how to hurt Buffy through her fam without really hurting them - should be interesting). Sounds like tne evil characters are really outweighting the good guys in this one so I'm anxious to see how you work this all out. More please.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, there are bad guys, but some good guys too.
spuf
Date: 07/10/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Hurt'
I don't like Xander.
Update soon please!
Author's Response: Finally, another chapter. Thank you for reading and your reviews.
spuf
Date: 07/10/2006 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Hurt'
Loved the spuffyness! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. Here's another chapter and I hope you enjoy.
spuf
Date: 07/10/2006 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Hurt'
Angel isn't everything he appears to be? Undercover maybe? Nope.. not when he is killing (killed one before) cops. ~ Faith is digging herself in a hole here.. ~ Hehe..the flirting was a bit too much for Giles. Loved the Spuffyness :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Here's another chapter.
spuf
Date: 07/10/2006 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Hurt'
Xander... cruel. Hopefully, Spike to the rescue.
Enjoyed the update.
Author's Response: Xander is cruel.
Thank you, spuf
Date: 07/10/2006 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Hurt'
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you. Here's another chapter, finally.
spuf