Date: 09/09/2007 - 01:42 am Title: The Surprise
Okay, so far I like your story, but I'm a little confused here... It's supposed to be an early season 4, but Dawn *and* Magic Box appeared only in season 5, so... what happened? lol. Did you just decide to go a little AU, and mix some stuff from the seasons? 'Cause it really appears to be a season 5, only with Buffy still living in the dorm.
P.S. Don't know how the story will unfold, but hope Spike's going to claim Buffy back and "fix" her, 'cause she *is* a little off at the moment. Hmm... am I the only one clueless as to why? lol
Date: 07/03/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: The Surprise
You know, I have to force myself to slow down and actually write a review, cause I am just too curious to see what happens next.
You know, your Buffy is genuinely terrifying in a bad way - veiny Willow times ten way. And the sad truth of the matter is that she is right. The others don't really care about Spike.
And I hope Xander is punched - cause he is just a git.
Date: 05/09/2006 - 06:44 am Title: The Surprise
finally dawn is in the picturwe... love the updates!!! waiting for more!
Date: 05/09/2006 - 02:36 am Title: The Surprise
oh....i....wow...THIS IS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE!!! dawn will be the perfect person to help spike. i'm not sure how or when though. it doesn't matter. just let me bask in my happiness. lol. buffy's still a bitch in this but hopefully time and a lot of payback from spike will get her on the right track. i hate that she's doing this to him but i know that you wouldn't be makin' us readers suffer if it wasn't for the greater good for the story as a whole. continue with the great work. please post soon. loved it.
Date: 05/08/2006 - 09:06 pm Title: The Surprise
Oh my.. Primal!Buffy has taken over again and is questioning Spike. And when she (Primal!Buffy) indeed stays longer every time.. then maybe at one point it will be difficult to bring 'normal' Buffy back. Dawn did it? Brought Buffy back for now (and maybe will be able to help Spike later? Good :)
Date: 05/08/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: The Surprise
Great chapter!
Date: 05/08/2006 - 02:17 pm Title: The Surprise
The way you are writing Buffy when she is "out of control" reminds me of how abusive husbands treat their wives. They isolate them and make them feel like it is their fault that they are pushing them to abuse them. I am sure that you have this all planned out, but I will be glad when they figure out what is causing Buffy's episode's. It is very hard to read all the cruelty being heaped on Spike and also to know how deeply ashamed and afraid Buffy is at the same time.
Date: 05/08/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: The Surprise
ooo. a twist. goodies. i love this story. Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!!!!!!
Date: 05/08/2006 - 01:42 pm Title: The Surprise
interesting putting the key in like that. cant' wait for more. soon please
Date: 05/08/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: The Surprise
Looking forward to how this will play out with Dawn now in the picture. It seems as if she suddenly materialized...