Date: 06/25/2006 - 12:31 pm Title: Blood Sacrifice
Thank goodness for Joyce or Spike would be suffering at the hands of more than just a possessed slayer. Love this tale (even though I get all teary-eyed every time Buff stomps all over Spike with such evil glee). Glad she's giving him blood - hopefully it will give him some insight or at least some sort of defense against UberEvil Buffy when she decides to come out and play again. So, is Willow every gonna fess up to what she did with the spell so they can figure everything out, or is she gonna wait until someone dies at the hands of the Buffy-bitch? With Dawn's green-glowy help, I'll bet Giles and Anya can figure out how to help Buffy kick her evil twin right out of the ozone! Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 06/25/2006 - 01:44 am Title: Blood Sacrifice
Joyce is awesome!
Date: 06/24/2006 - 10:02 am Title: Blood Sacrifice
Seems besides Dawn (and Buffy) nobody cares a lot about Spike... thanks to Joyce to get them back on track (when Giles was questioning Buffy). (And Willow would be able to do the spell wrong anyway. Better not let her doing it.) Internal bleedings.. that is indeed the worst state Spike was in so far after Buffy's treatment. Yep, Slayer's blood is the best (and quickest) cure at the moment (isn't it always?) and they need him to have his strength. ~ Looking forward to the next part! :)
Date: 06/23/2006 - 09:59 pm Title: Blood Sacrifice
Go Buffy! I'm glad she's helping as mucha s she can! I was worried she wouldn't think of doing that! I hope Spike gets well soon and their relationship gets MUCH better!
Great chapter! Update soon please!!!!!
Date: 06/23/2006 - 03:34 pm Title: Blood Sacrifice
woah...... love the updates!!! keeps u on a rollercoaster!!! love it!!
Date: 06/23/2006 - 07:09 am Title: Blood Sacrifice
Ohhhh!
Date: 06/23/2006 - 12:59 am Title: Blood Sacrifice
About time she does something right. Pig's blood isn't going to help fast enough when he has internal bleedng. Not when they need him well enough to move soon.
And I've so had enough of Xander and Giles.
Date: 06/23/2006 - 12:30 am Title: Blood Sacrifice
You know, I'm almost afraid to say something because I'm sure that someone will accuse me of being a troll or having multiple sockpuppets. You have a talent for descriptive writing, no question, and I enjoy reading your stories. But I'm having a very hard time with the characterization.
There's a lack of balance that's giving me trouble here. Joyce, Dawn, Spike and Anya are all perfect: loving and caring, yet still (in the case of Spike and Anya) abused by the people they love. Xander and (to a slightly lesser extent) Giles and Willow are the villains: bigoted, uncaring and cavalier in their attitudes towards the woobie Spike. These are Buffy's friends. She loves them. There's no need to tear down the other characters to make Spike (and Anya) into saints in comparison.
And then there's Buffy. I'm glad that you've finally separated the real Buffy from the force that's controlling her, and I hope that no one lays any guilt on her for something that she can't control.
Also, I think that writing Spike as an abused innocent lessens him as a character, frankly. He's not an innocent. He's not some trembling, weepy sap who loves everyone and just wants to be liked. He's a demon who, at this point in the show, still violently hated all of the Scoobies (including Buffy) and would have no problems at all with killing them off, if he could.
I'm enjoying your stories. I plan on reading them in the future. I just think that your writing could be strengthened by a little more balance towards the characters. None of them are perfect, Spike included.
Date: 06/23/2006 - 12:03 am Title: Blood Sacrifice
Hope Buffy's slayer blood can help Spike......
Date: 06/22/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: Blood Sacrifice
Share the blood.. share the demon???
Date: 06/22/2006 - 11:33 pm Title: Blood Sacrifice
f'in right! update soon! love this story!!!!!!!