Date: 11/17/2006 - 11:57 am Title: Origins
I've caught a mistake! Sorta. Buffy's not the active Slayer, Faith is. So I don't think its possible that if the demon in Buffy dies, there won't be anymore slayers.
But of course, its not like your fic is canon. Thanks for the great fic tho, I'm enjoying myself and working my way thru the chapters, lol.
Jen
Date: 07/01/2006 - 01:02 am Title: Origins
Willow and her spells.......
Date: 06/30/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: Origins
Oh wow, this doesn't seem good. How are they going to stop it then? If you can't kill it, what can you do? I don't want Spike or anyone else hurt because of the demon's essence. I hope they figure something out before it's too late!
Great chapter! Update soon please!
Date: 06/30/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: Origins
Mmmmmh-hmmmm when Buffy's demon is fighting against Spike telling the story of the first slayer than it is important that he tells it. End of the line? That would be pretty bad indeed. So they have to find a solution without killing the demon. Yet I wonder if Spike claiming Buffy back would do the trick b/c it's only her... but there was something in the first spell. I have to read it again. Maybe it would work... Till next chapter!
Date: 06/30/2006 - 12:43 pm Title: Origins
Great chapter
Date: 06/30/2006 - 06:14 am Title: Origins
Ta! It´s out, finally. I can´t wait to see how you will let them react when they find out how to stop the demon - through a claim - right?
Date: 06/30/2006 - 06:12 am Title: Origins
Good update!
Date: 06/30/2006 - 04:31 am Title: Origins
Yes - NOW do you see what Wilow's lack of knowledge and preparation has wrought??? Now do you see what your arrogance has wrought, Giles? You're more of a spellcaster than Willow - if anyone should have done a spell to release Spike's chip, it should have been you. And, you never should have allowed her to do that spell without checking what spell she was using!!
Your friends truly are going to get you killed one day, Buffy - especially since your Watcher uses them as excuses to be lazy.
Remember the language of the spell about *bounding*. Read over the spell now, guys, and it should be obvious what needs to be done. Buffy needs to submit to being bound in some manner, or the only other choice is to kill her to prevent the demon's escape.
Date: 06/30/2006 - 04:23 am Title: Origins
Nicely written-- no real surprises, as you did a nice job of foreshadowing in the previous chapters. But I liked the "end of the line" for Slayers-- that was a nice touch.
Date: 06/30/2006 - 04:23 am Title: Origins
Nicely written-- no real surprises, as you did a nice job of foreshadowing in the previous chapters. But I liked the "end of the line" for Slayers-- that was a nice touch.
Date: 06/30/2006 - 03:11 am Title: Origins
Excellent chapter and explanation of what's going on. Still waiting to see what else Willow did to screw up things.
Date: 06/30/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Origins
Great update! I'd like to smack Giles and Xander upside the head with a big stick. More please.