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Date: 11/04/2006 - 08:13 am Title: Peanut Butter Needs Jelly

Nice analagy! Loved this chapter. Poor little Spike though! And I really hope Dawn comes around- Spike needs her.

Author's Response: First crushes are always hard on a young girl's heart. But, they never really go away.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 04:22 am Title: Peanut Butter Needs Jelly

Love the title of this chapter. Love the way she realizes things about their relationship. Love how Giles decided to stay and help bring Spike back to health. And Spike still has the chip, right? He couldn't really hurt Giles. Not that he would anyway... Great chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Nope, the chip went bye-bye. The soul burned it out. So he could hurt someone if he wanted to.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 12:46 am Title: Peanut Butter Needs Jelly

Fantastic chapter! I loved the scene between Spike and Giles. It's nice to see Giles showing so much kindness toward Spike. Very realistic conversation between Buffy and Dawn. Dawn's closing line summed up her feelings at the moment very well. I'm glad Buffy is following her heart and is not letting Dawn or any of the Scoobies stand in the way of what she needs to do. Can't wait for the Spuffy reunion!

Author's Response: Sorry but you'll have to wait just a little longer. At least you'll still be reading. LOL!

Reviewer: kcarolj65 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 11:12 pm Title: Peanut Butter Needs Jelly

Very, very nice thus far. I'm eager to read more!

Author's Response: Glad you like it. More is coming soon.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Peanut Butter Needs Jelly

I really like the way you're handling this story. Post grave is one of those times when the story could have gone so many different ways; and it's fun seeing a different vision.

I like the way you handled Dawn's reaction. Dawn and Spike's relationship was one of the things I liked best about season 5, but they didn't ever reconcile on screen. I'd like to think they would have, but ran out of time. Yeah, wishful thinking. I'd love for Spike and Dawn to be reconciled, but making it easy would make it too unrealistic.

i also like the way you deal with Buffy's relationship with her father. I think they only ever have a couple of scenes together; but her relationship with him ( or rather, the lack thereof) is clearly profoundly important in shaping Buffy's future relationships with the men in her life.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, to have been a fly on the wall during M.E. story-breaking meetings. But alas, 'twas not to be. This is what *I* would have wanted to see. I am so glad you're liking it. As for the father daughter bond. I always have believed that a girl learns how to love from her father. Buffy's wasn't around at all and we all know how that ended, I think this will be a little better. At least I hope so.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 09:41 pm Title: Peanut Butter Needs Jelly

Wonderful job, again. A very fitting analogy.

I'm loving this relationship between Spike and Giles. Oh, but what could have been....

And Dawn...how like a teen, eh? All she feels is the pain of losing her constant, so she will not go. But...she can't hold a grudge forever.

Author's Response: I always thought the relationship between the two males could have been handled better. Especially after season six. That was supposed to be the "Oh, grow up" season. So how come Spike's the only one who did? Oh well, at least there's fanfic.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Peanut Butter Needs Jelly

Excellent start. I love this story already. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: More is on its way!

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