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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2006 - 03:58 am Title: Cradle of Civilization

Poor, well all of them. At least Dawn has reached the anger portion of her grief. One more step to forgiveness. And that poor elephant seems to have met his end for reasons other than evil poachers. Hope Buffy catches up to him before the evil men with night vision goggles do. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Some things should stay in the dark. Run, Buffy run.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Cradle of Civilization

Yikes!!

Very nice update; esecially like the Dawn scene. Great characterization!

Author's Response: Yikes is right! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 09:53 am Title: Cradle of Civilization

Great Spike/Dawn flashback, I found it very insightful. Darn that Travers! I can't help but wonder if Quentin's operative was behind the poaching incident. I hope Giles and Panya are alright wherever they are. Can't wait to find out how or if our hero's get out of this mess. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Getting warmer, M.G.! ;-)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 08:20 am Title: Cradle of Civilization

Why aren't more people reviewing? This fic is so well done.

It would have been easy for her to calm him down with saying it was elephants as soon as he started asking about the blood. Is she still that dense? You're supposed to be helping him, Buffy, not being your usual contrary self and making people wring answers out of you.

Giles should have known better not to leave her with Spike alone - she's not prepared to help his condition. Buffy should have gone with Panya to help bring back supplies.

If Spike keeps running at full speed, then this tracker guy won't be able to keep up. Otherwise, I'm very worried. And Quentin is a creepy bastard. I'm worried for Lydia.

Author's Response: I couldn't tell ya. Sometimes reviewing can be scary. If Buffy was *Completely* out of character, no one would read the fic. (And Giles had to be the one to go, there's a *Telegram* he needs to read.)

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