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Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2006 - 09:05 am Title: In Camera

Oh my gosh... poor Spike!!! I'm hating Travers so much right now, the man is truly a monster. I gotta hand it you, you really have a knack for fleshing out your villians. Travers is shaping up to be one of the evilist characters you've written for. I shudder to think what Travers wants Spike to do. I liked the twist about Spike's family. And I think you captured Spike's thoughts and emotions throughout the chapter brilliantly. Great update.

Author's Response: Thanks. This means that for the time being Spike will have to stay put, no matter how much he may want out. I always thought an aloof villian was better than one who tell you what he wants. I was never sure what the Council wanted. I mean they had a "Wet work" division, that's never of the good.

Reviewer: O.B. Joyful Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2006 - 07:56 am Title: In Camera

I love the twists in this story, waiting eagerly for next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was really worried about this one.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2006 - 06:09 am Title: In Camera

I mean "Great-grand niece or nephew" of course!

Author's Response: An easy mistake. :-)

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Date: 06/24/2006 - 06:07 am Title: In Camera

Curiouser & curiouser, cried Alice.

Nice sensory details in this chapter! And you've got me on the edge of my seat (OK, at least metaphoricaly!) wondering who the grandchild turns out to be...

Author's Response: "I'm late!" cried the rabbit. If I told you that, it might ruin the surprize.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2006 - 05:12 am Title: In Camera

They defanged him. That's inhumane. And they've threatened his family, hell he has descendents, that's a bit of a twist on Spike lore, and sure adds a marvelous element to this story. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I had to give him another reason, a compelling one, why he might do what Quentin wants him to.

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