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Date: 06/30/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Secrets

Giles as Spike's family. Another marvelous twist. A bit of Irony to that, too. And to get Spike to kill the Slayer, There isn't a thing in this world... At least, I dont think there is... Great story, looking forward to more. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: There isn't. But Travers will be having "fun" trying to find his price.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2006 - 10:36 pm Title: Secrets

Oh no! I can't even imagine what that monster Travers is up to now. I kinda had an idea who might've been part of Spike's family, I just love this new twist. *crosses fingers* I hope Giles opens his mail soon, I just hate seeing poor Spike suffer. Great update.

Author's Response: I hate it too. But if you can stand it just a little longer... Giles and Buffy, and Dawn too, will be coming very soon.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2006 - 09:05 am Title: In Camera

Oh my gosh... poor Spike!!! I'm hating Travers so much right now, the man is truly a monster. I gotta hand it you, you really have a knack for fleshing out your villians. Travers is shaping up to be one of the evilist characters you've written for. I shudder to think what Travers wants Spike to do. I liked the twist about Spike's family. And I think you captured Spike's thoughts and emotions throughout the chapter brilliantly. Great update.

Author's Response: Thanks. This means that for the time being Spike will have to stay put, no matter how much he may want out. I always thought an aloof villian was better than one who tell you what he wants. I was never sure what the Council wanted. I mean they had a "Wet work" division, that's never of the good.

Reviewer: O.B. Joyful Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2006 - 07:56 am Title: In Camera

I love the twists in this story, waiting eagerly for next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was really worried about this one.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2006 - 06:09 am Title: In Camera

I mean "Great-grand niece or nephew" of course!

Author's Response: An easy mistake. :-)

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Date: 06/24/2006 - 06:07 am Title: In Camera

Curiouser & curiouser, cried Alice.

Nice sensory details in this chapter! And you've got me on the edge of my seat (OK, at least metaphoricaly!) wondering who the grandchild turns out to be...

Author's Response: "I'm late!" cried the rabbit. If I told you that, it might ruin the surprize.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2006 - 05:12 am Title: In Camera

They defanged him. That's inhumane. And they've threatened his family, hell he has descendents, that's a bit of a twist on Spike lore, and sure adds a marvelous element to this story. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I had to give him another reason, a compelling one, why he might do what Quentin wants him to.

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Date: 06/22/2006 - 02:25 am Title: Goodbye, Professor Marvel

Quite the chapter, so many things happenning, and still so much left to happen. And Lydia's forward thinking... A telegram to lead Giles to actual information to be found elsewhere. Could be a very brilliant thing. And the whole dynamic between Spike and Traver's is just captivating. I love that I don't quite know what's going on with them, though I'm very eager to find out. Please, update soon!

Author's Response: You will be finding out what Quentin's been doing "behind the curtain" very soon. I've been puting off posting this part because, even whin I'm the one who writes it, I hate to see Spike hurting. :( Hope you read anyway.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 04:49 am Title: Goodbye, Professor Marvel

I really enjoyed Buffy's musings about Spike at the beginning of chapter. The flashback was very well written. I just love little glimpses of tender moments between Spike and Buffy. I'm so glad Lydia sent the parcel, I really hope she pulls through. It's so great that Quentin is gonna get blindsided and he doesn't even know it, i'm so happy he underestimated Lydia. Here's hoping Giles gets to his mail soon. Great update!

Author's Response: Tender moments were so few and far between on the show. I had to fill in the gaps somehow. I always thought Lydia was smart. I mean, she had a thing for Spike, didn't she? That's a discriminating woman. ;) Now... if Giles would just check his mail...

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Date: 06/17/2006 - 02:34 am Title: Whitewash

“What did you make me do?”--There's a twist, keep Spike drugged, who knows what's going on. And will Lydia survive and what was in that telegram. Loving it! Please, update soon.

Author's Response: Keep in mind-this is psychological warfare. He may not have done anything. Quentin may get more by using Spike's worst fears against him.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Whitewash

No! Damnit!

Author's Response: Did I say she was dead? I don't think I did.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: Whitewash

I just love how the suspense and tension keeps building with each new chapter. I'm on the edge of my seat here waiting to find out what's gonna happen next!
I enjoyed reading Spike's memories of his family. It was great to see Spike's demon come out and play. Poor Lydia, poor Spike, I am so gonna enjoy it when Travers gets his due. Wonderful update!

Author's Response: Well hang on then 'cause there's more to come. Lydia left a paper trail and Buffy will be in England very soon. We'll be getting an idea what it is that Quentin really wants with Spike.

Reviewer: O.B.Joyful Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 06:21 am Title: A Different Drummer

really enjoying this story. excellent writing, thank you

Author's Response: You are welcome.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 04:30 am Title: A Different Drummer

Wow! That was unexpected, but all in all not surprising. Spike always does put his loved ones first. I have faith in the direction you're taking the story. The thought of *gulps* dissection is pretty terrifying though. I hope Giles contacts Lydia soon. I really enjoyed the Spike/Dawn flashback. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: I have to show the monstrous side of Quentin before I can show Travers how wrong he is about this particular vampire. Plus, Spike his to get REALLY mad before he'll let the demon out. How better to do that than this?

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 03:44 am Title: A Different Drummer

Eep!

Nice resolution to the Dawn-Spike story. I miss that relationship!

Author's Response: It's not over yet. Who's headed to England? ;-)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 02:44 am Title: A Different Drummer

Well, that's not good. Dissecting Spike, it's a soul, a special way of mind, not something you'd see in bits and pieces. Council is filled with barbarians, I suppose. And Spike surrendering his safety and freedom just for the knowledge that his Buffy is safe. I suppose that is not un-Spike like. Not allowing her to bring him freedom because it would surely mean the end to her life... So very deep. And with Spike sending Lydia out to find info about Buffy and Buffy searching for Lydia for info on Spike. Guess they're gonna go full circle. Love this story. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: But if Quentin just staked him then he woud be seen as a monster- by everyone. Best to keep him out of sight and out of mind. That's how dirty little secrets work. Buffy knows that- too well.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 12:14 am Title: A Different Drummer

That's usually what that means, Buffy...LOL.

Nice Dawn memory.

Aww, Spike...don't lose hope, sweetie.

Author's Response: She can be dense sometimes. Not all hope is lost, there's a dawn to every day. ;-)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 10:57 pm Title: A Different Drummer

AHHHHHHH!! Get him out of there....

Update soon.

Author's Response: Soon, okay?

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Date: 06/09/2006 - 02:17 am Title: Back To Basics

Thought that Lydia had some redeeming qualities. Dawn seems to be coming around, Buffy is back in action, and Spike seems to be making a break for it. (Even though Spike mulling over his situation and the perils of torture were really very intriguing.) Really looking forward to what happens next. This one sure is pretty exciting. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: Spike is observant. Right now, he needs a friend, not a cell mate. Freedom may be delayed,

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 02:50 am Title: Back To Basics

Yes! Yes! I was waiting for her to come. I think I might have an idea of what Spike's going to do next. Such a mischievous little devil.

Yep, Giles is the biggest wanker around. Buffy, hurry up.

Good choice, Dawnie.

Will they bring Panya, too?

Author's Response: *Big Grin* Do yo think you know? Well keep reading and find out if you're right. And, don't worry Panya will be back.

Reviewer: M.G. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 11:59 pm Title: Back To Basics

I'm so happy Lydia made her move. I just hated to see our boy suffering like that. I don't know what Spike has in mind... but it should be interesting to see what he does to Travers. *crosses fingers* I really hope Spike and Lydia's escape plan doesn't fail. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: I think you'll be surprized. Would I let our hero down, M.G.?

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 10:45 pm Title: Back To Basics

Love this story *So* *Much*!

Author's Response: Glad you like it!

Reviewer: O.B. Joyful Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: Heart And Soul

this just gets better and better - great story, great writing

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Keep reading, okay?

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2006 - 02:14 pm Title: Heart And Soul

Nice transitional chapteer. I assume we're heading to England now? Continuing to really enjoy this one!

Author's Response: The focus will indeed be England. But Nibblet will be looked in on soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2006 - 05:06 am Title: Heart And Soul

As sorry as I am for Spike suffering in his current situation, thank heavens that Giles and Buffy seemed to have pieced together the events of that night. And his name for her... so very touching, and very Spike. And even if Panya didn't get it right at first, he really is such a fascinating character with such heart and loyalties. Hope they save Spike soon. Great, fabulous chapter.

Author's Response: Yep, they're on the same page now. I like Panya too. He will be back in later installments. And about Spike? What can I say, in my head, he talks louder than the other Jossverse characters. So, I tend to get him right more often than not.

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