Reviews For Button, Button
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: 8. Obedience, part 2

Spike could be right: This could be a plan of Angelus if Buffy will do like he told her. And he is right too: I don't think Angel will give Buffy to Spike again. Buffy is prepared to day? She noticed that Angelus has power over her.. but just to give up? There must be another solution *hopes*

Author's Response: Of course I wouldn't end it there. Much more to happen. And Angelus does have a reason for his actions. its just not obvious to any of the characters yet. But he'll confide in Spike eventually, hoping to find a ally.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 08:40 am Title: 8. Obedience, part 2

What a great chapter: brutally honest from both sides but lacking malice or any show of sinister enjoyment on Spike's part, just a silent admiration for the 'chit'. She, too, is addressing her predicament full on without hysteria; rather, she almost calmly tries to decipher all the angular codes of Angelus's behaviour and rationalise them. When she can't, she just accepts that she can't and realises, almost stoically, that she has let her Slayer guard down - big time - and the only person who has put her in this dire position, is herself.

Buffy's whispered request to Spike may seem like Buffy is giving up, in, whatever - but in fact it is a spanner in the works, wrongfooting Spike (in his wheelchair!) as she asserts the only power she feels she still has, on her own life, before Angelus takes that from her and drains her into a cursed unlife.

Great moment for the start of your next chap.

Author's Response: Glad I could convince you of Buffy's response. It was a difficult chapter to write. Hope that you find Spike's reply just as believable.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 07:55 am Title: 8. Obedience, part 2

Ohhhhhhh!

Author's Response: Eeeeeeeh! Thanks.

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 04:30 am Title: 8. Obedience, part 2

Thie just keeps getting better and better. Wonderful job of creating the confusion she must be feeling. I am so eager to see what develops with Spike and Bufy....

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope that the characters continue to make sense to you. You're gonna have to wait just a little longer for the Spuffy though.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 - 03:38 am Title: 8. Obedience, part 2

good update and cliffhanger

Author's Response: Thanks. Still hanging.

Reviewer: Toshie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 11:39 pm Title: 8. Obedience, part 2

Still loving it! Bring on Spike's contrary nature.... When she's nervy and fragile he wants her to fight... wonder how an actual death wish would go when he DOESN'T have a chip??? Can't wait to read the next bit :)

Author's Response: Spike's contrary nature continues to be contrary. Unfortunately, even w/o the chip, Spike isn't really free to do what he wants.

Reviewer: riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 08:56 pm Title: 8. Obedience, part 2

very good, I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. But you'll still have to wait a bit more for the good stuff.

You must login (register) to review.