Date: 04/04/2006 - 04:20 am Title: illusions of the mind
good update
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 04/01/2006 - 12:48 am Title: illusions of the mind
Well, again, I only vaguely remember the story, but it's coming back to me as I read it again. So, I'm not remembering anything you've changed, but it's really well written, so I'm gonna say that your revisions are good. Really good chapter! Riley is grating on my nerves, which he did in the show too. It's kind of difficult, because the guy, Marc Blucas, is actually really hot, but the character, Riley Finn, is an annoying pain in the butt. Anyway, like I said, excellent chapter. Looking forward to more! =)
Author's Response: Ohh, see the problem with me is that my dislike of the character has a bad habit of transferring to the actor who portrays the character. I can't watch anything with either David Boreanaz or Marc Blucas in them because I'll get pissed off and throw stuff at the TV. Very bad.
Date: 03/31/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: illusions of the mind
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Ohh, thank you :)
Date: 03/31/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: illusions of the mind
Excellent chapter.
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 03/31/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: illusions of the mind
Excellent chapter.
Author's Response: I guess you liked it enough to respond twice, thank you ^_^