Date: 04/14/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: how do you explain an invisible claim pain?
Read this today from start to here. Have reas your work before, but don't remember this story. It's great - but not finished!! Please post quickly. We're reading. We reallly are.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you are, and I'm glad you're enjoying it. Trust me, it will be finished... it's my other stories that I have to worry about ~_^ Look for Chapter 9 Saturday night.
Date: 04/14/2006 - 07:37 pm Title: how do you explain an invisible claim pain?
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! Look for the next update tomorrow night ^_^
Date: 04/14/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: how do you explain an invisible claim pain?
as i've said time and time before....I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the great writting!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ohhh, thank you, thank you! Stick with me, please... I might add something extra at the end...
Date: 04/14/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: how do you explain an invisible claim pain?
I noticed an inconsistency. When Buffy goes to save Spike from Riley and has chased him away, she says to SPike that she is going to go close door indicating that it is open, but just a few sentences earlier you have written that Riley's pleads were met with a closed door. otherwise, great chapter
Author's Response: *snort* Ooops. You caught me :) Actually, that's something that I didn't even notice, which is weird, since I wrote the whole door-slamming-in-Riley's-face dealie. Thanks for mentioning it, and I'll figure out a way to reword it ^_^
Date: 04/14/2006 - 02:38 pm Title: how do you explain an invisible claim pain?
Enjoying the story
Author's Response: I'm glad, thank you!
Date: 04/14/2006 - 02:12 pm Title: how do you explain an invisible claim pain?
Definitely worth the wait. I was checking for your update too.
Author's Response: I knew I wasn't the only one! Everybody's gotta get their Spuffy fix!