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Reviewer: wilywiccan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

It never even occured to me that she would think it was Riley's. Ha.

Author's Response: LOL, poor Willow, but I guess no one would have though Buffy would have slept with Spike. ^_^

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

I just started this story, and am enjoying it. Your writing is very, very good.

Author's Response: Yay, I have a new reader *happy dance* I'm gald you're enjoying it so far, I hope you continue with me. Awww, you think my writing is good. *blushes* Thanks! ^_^

Reviewer: nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2006 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

apsalutly bril i want more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked! ^_^

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 05:57 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

No, she can't think the baby's Rileys. That's just not fun. Okay, well, I suppose a little misdirection is always useful. Great chapter. Good to see her letting in a friend. Knew they were both right...

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, not the brightest idea. *sigh* But the truth will come out, to everyone.

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

I like how Buffy didn't even consider it was Riley's until Willow mentioned it.

Author's Response: Yeah, she knew just didn't want to face up to the truth just yet. She was to scared as to what her friends and watcher would think. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: aoife mc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

luv it! plz update. shud totaly av an ultrasound ware babies got fangs!!!

Author's Response: hee hee hee, I like that. Could you see Buffy's face when she spots the fangs,lol. Glad you liked the update!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2006 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

Well one lie on top of another.What is going to happen when Spike finds out.him being a Vampire will know the child is hi. o boy can't wait.

Author's Response: I know, poor confused Buffy, but not telling the truth never helps. We'll have to wait and see how Spike reacts, I hope good, right?

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

If Willow goes along to the appointment then she might find out that Buffy isn't far enough along for it to be Riley.

Let the coverup begin!

Author's Response: *shhhh* I can't have you guessing what comes next,lol. Hopefully we'll find out soon.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

Oh no don't want Riley involved at all. Get an ultrasound so we can see when she conceived. We need to know. Great chapter btw

Author's Response: Thanks! Well the doctor visit is up next so we'll see. Riley... isn't he in South America? *g*

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

I like!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

I like for sure! lol Will we be getting any flashback-y goodness? Please? With sugar on top?

Author's Response: I don't want to promise anything,lol. So I guess we'll have to wait and see. *g*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

Just found your fic and love it! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

Uh-huh.. well it would have been to easy if Buffy told have everyone. She didn't really lie... she just let Willow believe that Riley is the father of her child. I wonder what trouble that will bring in the future. Till next part!

Author's Response: Yes, she didn't say it was Riley's out right, but sadly the truth will come out sooner or later.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

lovin this. more please

Author's Response: Yay, glad you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

*disbelieving face* Buffy's not gonna tell Willow the truth about the father? Well, what would happen if they found out? And how? *LOL* So many questions.. um... no need to answer them...

Great fic... can't wait for more... :)

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're enjoying it so far. Yes, so many questions,lol. But all shall be answered, I think. ^_^

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

good update but i wish that she would've told her that it was spikes' and not riley's


Author's Response: Buffy might have a change of heart, we'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

I really like this, so far. I hope that Buffy is honest from the get go that the baby is Spikes .....

Author's Response: Well you know Buffy, but who knows, she could have a change of heart.

Reviewer: Suzanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:31 am Title: Chapter Two: Best Friend Buffy

Good start, looks like it'll be fun. Just a small suggestion though - I'm not sure if it's a typo or your not being aware of the difference but you're confusing "where" and "were." If it's a typo then you probably need to proofread a bit more closely (I know that's easier said than done since I write myself) but if you don't know the difference then please check the dictionary.

I just put an example below:

The bell over the front door gave a small ding as Anya raised her head. Smiling the former vengeance demon announced; “Welcome to the Magic Box how may I... Oh, it's you, Willow. I though you where someone important, someone with money. Hurry, out of the way, you're blocking the entrance for people who come in here to give me their money.”


It should be "were" someone important.

I'm not trying to be picky or make you feel bad but I noticed it in chapter 1 and again a few places in this chapter and so I thought I'd bring it to your attention because errors like that are very distracting to the reader and take away from your wonderful story.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, and no you're not picky, thanks for the heads up. *hugs* I'm not joking I'm forever typing them "where" and "were" like that. It's like my brain can't keep up with my fingers, and for some reason I always miss it in the read through *sigh* Again thanks! ^_^

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