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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

Great story, I look foward to the point where Buffy tells Spike about the baby.

Author's Response: Thanks! It will be coming within the next few chappies. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

Great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!!! ^_^ Glad to see you're still with me.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

great chapter :D

Author's Response: Thanks hun!

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Date: 10/02/2006 - 08:53 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

Uh-huh.. Dawn is in BIG trouble now. At last Spike is together with Buffy on the hunt for her, has a trace now.
~ Oh good! They were in time; nasty fate John had in store for Dawn. ~ And it seems one thing Buffy did play with with Spike's cell was the ringing tone *g* and more. ;-)
Loved the last part, going / getting along well not only literally, they were talking too. Really talking :))

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, Dawn got herself into some hot water, yay, go Buffy and Spike,lol. So now that they are getting along I wonder how long it will take for Buffy to really open her eyes. ^_^

Reviewer: SarhandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

more please

Author's Response: More to come soon, I hope,lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

Great chapter. The two of them are just so cute. I can almost see them toeing the ground and stuffing their hands in their pockets. ; ) I loved it. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks hun, for the review! ^_^

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

Ok, don't get mad but while I think you have their character voices down, there is some stuff that bugs me: IMO, Joyce and Dawn being all TEAM SPIKE is kind of convoluted, especially considering by FFL Dawn and Spike weren't even friends yet on the show and when they were she still favored her sister over him.

And then this: "She’d never understand the concept of friendly, harmless demons." Huh? Didn't Buffy allow Clem to crash her birthday party, as well as give him a great big hug in "Potential"? I think Buffy understands gray just as much as anyone else. It's just with Spike... "I can't trust you enough for it to be love." As far as canon goes, the girl did have a point, and I'm not just talking about the AR alone.

I realize this is highly AU so anything goes I guess. And I have a soft spot for baby fics that aren't too schmoopy, with Buffy and Spike acting recognizable with their squabbling, and hurting, but also caring for each other despite themselves - you have their confused dynamic down pat - which is why I want to read more despite this fic pinging some of my pet peeves.

Author's Response: Awww, Ari, sorry I'm digging into your pet peeves, but as you pointed it out its not cannon,lol. I know Sawn was more Buffy than Spike, but I figured in this ficcie, he needs all the support he can get. And hey, who's to say Buffy isn't friends with Clem, and Spike just doesn't know. *wink* Thanks for taking the time to leave me an awesome review!!!

Reviewer: candace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

will she ever tell spike? well of course she will..but will it be soon? loved it as always.

Author's Response: Yup, you know she will, if not there wouldn't be a story now would there? lol Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

Well, good...progress finally.

Now Dawn can share a story with Cordelia...demon impregnation is an old standard, lol. Ewww for reptile demons!

Author's Response: ROFL, ewww demons are right! Yes, progress, and more to come, so I guess one can say it gets better from here on in. ^_^

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 01:09 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

Yay, finally they're making some progress. Maybe she'll be ready to tell him about the baby soon. If he would just stop saying stupid things and prove that he can be decent. I was hoping she would have just come out and asked him if he liked kids, you know, as in not eating them...lol! She should say something like that to start the conversation and then mention that she's carrying his child. And Dawn going out with a demon? Like sister like sister...lol! At least Buffy's demon's were hotties. Anyway, glad to see an update. Can't wait for more=)

Author's Response: You have me cracking up. "So, Spike, I was just wondering, do you like kids. In the whole non-eat-y kinda way?" ROFL. Poor Dawnie, I guess she just attracts the wrong kind of guy. Got chappie 9 off with my wonderful beta, so hopefully an update will be posted next weekend.

Reviewer: aoife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 01:09 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

good update, can't wait for spike to find out!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping he finds out soon too,lol. ^_^

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2006 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Eight: If I Forgive You Like This... And You Forgive Me Like That

thanks for the update - really enjoying the story!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you are liking. And thanks for the review!

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