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Reviewer: melissab Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

i just started reading this and can i say how good it is



i read all the chapters in one day i coundnt stop

keep up the good work


Author's Response: Wow, one day huh? Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Glad you like what you're reading. Thanks for the review ^_^

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Date: 05/10/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

Duh... no picture of the 1923's slayer? That's odd indeed. ~ Three days? Very long for Spike indeed. Glad he decided to come back to talk to Buffy, even more because of Joyce. But who knows if that was enough. And Spike made himself rare again. In these times Buffy must miss him even more.

Author's Response: Yes, no pic of hte slayer is a strange thing. Don't worry things will smooth over soon and Spike and Buffy will come to an understanding. Just took a bit to get there.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

brilliant chapter but what on earth is Giles thinking letting her patrol? one good kick and Baby Summers would be history. Poor Joyce, hope things work out OK
looking forward to more

Author's Response: Well I think their all on the lines of thinking that Buffy is the slayer her body is built differently and therefore patrol is still ok even with her being pregnant. Thanks for the review. ^_^

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

Hope Joyce feels better and Spike stops acting like a jerk. Great chapter! Loved it!

Author's Response: Yeah me too I hate when Joyce is sick. You think Spike's being a jerk? Aww darn, lol.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

Hmmm...

Poor Spike.....life ain't easy for a vamp.

Author's Response: LOL, nope it's not. But it does get better.

Reviewer: kitty fluffakit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 12:42 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

not wanting to be impatient or anything, but can they make up already? please??

Author's Response: Well you're not being impatent, but you do have to have some. They'll make up when the Muse is ready lol. Have to go with the flow of the story. Don't worry your patience will be rewarded. :D

Reviewer: infinitecrisis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

Great chapter, although no Spuffy interaction. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah I know, no Spuffy, but soon. Glad you liked the update. ^_^

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

Your killin me! Love the story hate the wait. Appreciate the long chapters.more please

Author's Response: Awww, I don't want to kill you, lol. But I have to build up to the Spuffy loven, but it's coming. :)

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

grrr, no spuffy in this chapter. i was hoping he would have shown himself, i have to say that his staying away from her is really stupid. i get that he's upset, but he needs to get over the fact that she didn't tell him. she had her reasons and was going to tell him, she just didn't get the chance. what he needs to realize is that he's going to have a baby, something that he never thought he would have and he should be more happy about it. i can't tell if he cares about that at all. i'm glad he was able to get joyce to the hospital, but i hope these two will stop being so stubborn.

Author's Response: Well I don't think he's being stupid. You have to remember he's hurt, Buffy hurt him and he needs time to get over that, plus hey, he's going to be a dad. That's a lot to chew when your undead lol. Don't worry this wouldn't be a Spuffy romance if they stayed away from each other forever. Things get better the next chappie, promise.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

it has only been a few days smlcspike.

more please.

Author's Response: Yes it's only been three days Spike is still adjusting. More coming soon, I hope.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: What's Eating William the Bloody?

Oh how much time is Spike going to need can't he see he is hurting her by not being there.

Author's Response: Well it's only been three days, remember Joyce said that. *smiles* But to answer your question, I don't think he'll need much longer. You have to remember Buffy hurt Spike also. I mean that's a big thing to keep your pregnancy from the man who helped get you that way but everyone else knows. Just let him breath, things will sort themselves out. ^_^

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