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Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2007 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

I'm loving the story so far......great stuff ladies.....just thought I'd point the one thing noticed. one chapter you have Ella's eyes brown and in this one blue.Now I'm off to lose myself in the rest of the story.....


Kimber

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2006 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

great chapter

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2006 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Good Lord! One minute nice-nice...the next.... This is a struggle. But it's a fun one. Make no room for Riley though or I'll just die. :-)

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Wow that got spike pissed.Keep going I love this fic,

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Oh yeah now it's on!!!!

Reviewer: fallen_angel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 10:05 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

trouble in paradise, sort of. update soon

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

realy good chapter!!! update soon! (just pleas dont make buffy all kisses and stuffy with the dope aka Riley)

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Whoa..Those are some mighty strong feelings and thoughts that William is having! Doesn't excuse his stupid behavior though..*tsk tsk* Can't blame Buffy for being angry..He's trying to pull the rug out from under her by using Ella..

About Riley..Was there really construciton in his building...Would Buffy be the only one showing up at his house? *can't help it..I am very suspicious of ole' Riley boy!* lol Great update!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

will was a little harsh in this update but i think i understand why. this is riley ater all. i mean....that's reason enough to be an asshole to buffy. IT'S RILEY!!! lol. great update.post soon. hope buffy puts william in his place....again! loved it.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 02:15 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Thanks for incorporating that part about William wanting to take yoga classes, too! I like how he feels like he's home with he's with Buffy and Ella, and how he feels they are "his girls." Unfortunately, all of that bullying and barking won't endear Buffy to his heart. It's such a fine line to walk-- women want men to be a little possessive, yet to not be total jerks in the way they express it. They want men to open up and be vulnerable, but if they are too vulnerable, that is also unattractive. Poor William-- expressing anger is much easier to master than hurt! Great chapter-- please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Great chapter! Too bad William couldn't have been a little kinder.

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Oh boy...is she gonna let him have it for that one. Who wants to go to see Riley do yoga anyway. William is just going to have to come back and defend his right to commander Buffy into his life. Can't let Riley get "his girls".

Reviewer: rusty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

aww so good.

Reviewer: vs in nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Showdown!!!! Loved this chapter. Great work!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

arrrrg.....i don't like ass hole spike....but i do like your fic! :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

William's jealous snit has certainly riled Buffy up. Too bad Buffy can't read his mind. I'm looking forward to Buffy giving him piece of her mind.

Reviewer: Myselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

I saw the update and could not help myself and snuck to read it at work. I always love a jealous William and the Buffy fall-out. The idea of Riley being with "His girls' should make William a little Spike angry lol. I don't want to beg for more chapters but I feel I must.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: RecordBreakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Oh I see a fight coming! And where theres a fight theres passion! Can't wait to see what happens next.
I love how he didn't want to leave them and she is missing him and now this should bring something to boil between the two

Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Ah the spark of jealousy. I really love your work on this fic the characters have levels and dimension to them. Riley needs to bugger off but he's always good for that in a fic lol. I like how you have both Buffy and Spike having the beginnings of pulls towards each other you can just see how badly they need each other. Extremely well written and a must read for all Spuffy fans out there I give this fic a 10 out of 10

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Good idea of William to take yoga classes ;-) Awe for William now seeing that he'll miss his girls. But it got worse again, thanks to Riley. And first Buffy could only think that she misses William too *sigh* And now she's angry (and all because William got jealous). Looking forward to the next part :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Jealousy rears its angry head... maybe William might come to grips with his feelings and emotions.

Yet he needs to give Buffy some space.
Oh, relationships. How complex.

Loved the update.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

*sighs* It's a shame William and Buffy had an argument. It was great to find out that Buffy is more interested in the yoga class than in Riley though. Of course William doesn't know that so I completely get why he's jealous. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Good update!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Someone is getting very possessive.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 11:33 am Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Away

Great chapter! I love a jealous William

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