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Reviewer: ScarletRose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2006 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Oh no... poor William, poor Buffy. *sniffles* Can't they just tell each other how they feel?

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2006 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

OK that's a curve ball ... rational caring Faith bearing excellent advice!!! Cool. If only the dynamic duo could only get their act together.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Holy crap; they don't know anything but fighting! Help!

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

poor williqam and buffy, thay never seem to know how to communicate! thanks for the great story

Reviewer: monica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

I love this story. Buffy was reacting the way anyone with a broken heart would. And William making comments like 'you can come to the party if you want' wasn't helping the situation any. I also feel for William. Here's someone who isn't used to expressing what they feel, and when they try, it comes out all wrong. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Well that went well!': Dam are they ever going to get together? This is exhausting.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

When will these two stop fighing and just talk?

Reviewer: buffymon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 09:03 am Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

I love this story. I recently watched Jane Eyre (the Timothy Dalton version) and Spike in this story reminds me of him. Except for the locked-up wife of course. Or maybe....*lol*

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Wow! That was one explosive argument between William and Buffy, it's a shame they did get a chance to talk things out. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: Alyxandria Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Awesome chapter! I love how they fight with one another. It doesn't seem forced. You guys have really captured the passion between them.
And although Buffy is *almost* at the point of being unreasonable - she does have some valid points. I'm afraid William may do something stupid to deal with his anger and hurt...maybe at the party? I dunno. Maybe he'll forget the party and try to make-up with Buffy. I'm just so excited about this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I *so* adore this fic.
-Alyx

Reviewer: trusty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

OMG, awww poor william and buffy, did not expect him to give up and go but understandable because she's so stubborn. Great chapter

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

she's being an idiot, big shock there. everything is always about her, well, cry me a river. i'm not too happy with william right now either, he should have tried harder to get through to the blockhead. i hope they both realize how stupid they're being soon.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Uh oh.......what's gonna happen now? It seems like William has given up. Update soon please!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Dumb Buffy! I wish she would just for once give William the benfit of the doubt. I hope she does some groveling in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

William just doesn't think.....Great chapter!

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

I can sympathize with Buffy to a point. But she likes to forget that his life also changed dramatically after Angel and Dru's death, and while she has to adapt to a new way of life, he has to adapt to new feelings and wants developing in him...I still don't quite understand her reasons for flying completely off the handle, but she sounds like she's trying to find reasons for not having any sort of relationship with William. She says she wants to be loved by him, but she hasn't shown it to him at all...its not all about him showing his feelings, she has to step up to the plate at some point.

I'm really tryin to refrain from calling Buffy an out right bitch in this chapter, because they are both still under a tremendous amount of stress with the death of their loved ones and having to raise a child, then to add whatever feelings they are developing for each other...but she really was unfair to Will in this chapter, he was trying to do what she has hoped he would do, talk and explain his feelings, and she just inserted her own words in his mouth...for reasons that have no real basis...I could go on and on, but I really can't wait to see how you guys work this out. :)

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Argh!!! Screams of frustration are filling my home now-- but only because you guys did such a great job of writing this sceen. Buffy can be so stubborn, and she can make herself feel so worthless. Great job on cranking up the tension about 1000 degrees; hopefully, better communication will ensue. Too bad that "fine" wasn't what she needed to hear.

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

I know everyone else was mad about this chapter but, I can't hate Buffy. I was put in her position, minus the child and dead siblings. I liked a guy who only wanted the sex, and for me to be there but didn't want a relationship. It hurts and from that hurt comes the anger. You start think that everything he tells you is for the soulpurpose to get youn into bed, so I wouldn't have let him speak either. He needed to tell her before now. She feels outta plsce in a whole new contry and is unsure about her whole life around her. He's just going to have to be more ......verbal if he wants to let her know that he does feel something. In this situation he's not going to be able to show her by making love her her, it will still feel like sexthat is taken out of convienace, or to take her to a party, that would feel like he's pretty much saying she's there she can go and look good on my arm. I'm really rooting for him to get his ass back there and to fix this.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

we are so stubborn, aren't we? people that is. we'll cut off our noses just to spite our faces, like buffy and william are doing. everyone is insecure, lonely and wanting to connect to someone. hope they get their heads out of their asses and get it together.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

WOW - such emotion, great chapter, I can feel the sparks coming off the page

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Um, anyone else want to slap Buffy for being an idiot? Ok, she wouldn't let him talk, she was shoving words in his mouth, interrupting him everytime he tried to say anything. Couldn't she have just shut up and listened to him for once before jumping to stupid jealous conclusions?

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

SO not funny leaving me like this! More soon PLEASE!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Wow, Buffy is being a first class bitch unloading on William like that. They're both under a lot of stress, and in a new, scary situation. Their communication skills are crap, and they both are easy to anger...I don't know when you're going to get them to sit down and really talk about how they feel about one another, but I hope it happens soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Dinner Plans

Faith is right: How is she supposed to know these things if you don't tell her? *sigh* They are fighting again. If William is clever he won't go at all to the dinner and try to talk to Buffy instead. Buffy is hurt and lashing out indeed. I'm not sure William knows why she is doing it. ~ Looking forward to the next part; hopefully it will get better again then. William talked to Faith and told her what Buffy means to him. It would be time he tells her.

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