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Reviewer: julez Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2014 - 04:08 am Title: The Meetings

Love the plot and a great read! Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: MKay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2013 - 05:02 am Title: The Meetings

Loving this story, hope to see more soon! 

 

Reviewer: TheNaug Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2013 - 11:41 am Title: The Meetings

I've loved the story, but the grammatical errors really interfere with the story. There are many instances where one word is used when another should be. One instance is when you refer to Harmony wanting Buffy seven foot under. Common use when referring to someone being buried is being "six feet under," which is the correct depth for burying someone. (And dear God why do I know that fact?) :)

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2013 - 12:22 pm Title: The Meetings

I come on this site so rarely now, and I'm glad that when I did I saw you had finally updated. I followed you on tumblr, so I will for sure be bugging to update more.

I'm glad that Buffy is finally taking control of the situation, and she is willing to learn. Of course she's a natural at shooting. Plus love the subtle Spuffy moments.

Reviewer: VickyT2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2012 - 06:00 am Title: The Meetings

Okay, I just have to say that I am absolutely in love with this story and cannot wait for you to finish it. I'm so hooked! Please please please post more soon! :) :)

Reviewer: kelizabeth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2012 - 03:20 pm Title: The Meetings

I've read this story three or four times over the past couple of years because it is so well written and intriguing. I LOVE IT! I can't wait for you to finish it because I can't get enough. Thank you very much for continuing it

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 11:49 pm Title: The Meetings

Hey,
So, I've tried to find the finished version of this story, but I can't find it anywhere. I was just wondering if you were still working on this. If you are, please please please e-mail me to tell me what website it is you're using for this and such. Please and thank you.

Emma

Author's Response: You weren't able to find a finished version because this story is far from being finished. This and fanfiction.net is one of the only two sites I post this story on. I barely began to write the next chapter, and it's nowhere near being finished.

Reviewer: Wikka Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 11:33 pm Title: The Meetings

OMG!!! I love this fic! I can't wait to see how it goes!

Reviewer: RussianGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2006 - 02:14 pm Title: The Meetings

I realy love this story! Contine it please :))))

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: The Meetings

i love this story, but you haven't posted in like a month. im getting anxious.

Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 03:58 am Title: The Meetings

Okay. Chapter 10 is still not showing up, yet there is an actual REVIEW for it here. How did that happen? And where did chapter 10, the chapter you are obviously updating right now, go???? Confuzzled. :-(

Author's Response: Don't worry I am as confused as you are. I contacted the administrators about it but have yet to get a reply.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: The Meetings

leave it to spike to do something like that. loved it. great start.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 06:57 pm Title: The Meetings

ooooo! I wonder what Hank will say next!!!!!!1

Reviewer: joey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:06 pm Title: The Meetings

I love this story realy *really *much! please update soon, can't wait the next chapter!:D

Reviewer: Janelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: The Meetings

Love this story, hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Ebontier Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 09:29 pm Title: The Meetings

You know...I'm put off by your description. You say that Spike needs to 'tame' Buffy. I find that offensive that her independence and failure to fit into the mold of the perfect wife/mistress means she needs to be 'tamed' or somehow trained to exercise appropriate behavior...

Author's Response: I am sorry that my story/descriptioon offended you in anyway. The only angle that I'm going at is because of Buffy's want to be independent she's not going to fit with the being agreeable to what Spike what ever wants of her. Throughout the story she's going to fight with him because he's trying to sadly tame her so she'll be able to ease into his lifestyle more easily. Though I'm trying not to give away the story too much but Spike will find he likes the Buffy he fell for the first time he met her rather than his tamed version of her. Again I'm very sorry that my description of how he wants her is offensive and I hope that I what I just said kind of made it better. Spuffy_obsessed P.S. Thank you very much for your opinion.

Reviewer: joey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 11:17 am Title: The Meetings

great job! I love this story really much please update soon!:D

Reviewer: Sarie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: The Meetings

I luv this story!! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: vitalis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:33 am Title: The Meetings

cue dramatic music LOL

Good first chapter, cant wait for more

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 07:46 am Title: The Meetings

i really hope that buffy can kick some ass in this story? please? i am loving your first chapter, especially reading about buffy's reaction to the whole situation.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 03:15 am Title: The Meetings

Well that was a start!"Mmmm we shall see.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 03:08 am Title: The Meetings

good so far

Reviewer: PK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 01:58 am Title: The Meetings

ooooo, sweet start, im gonna enjoy this ride. Great work, your becoming one of my favorite authors to read.

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 01:58 am Title: The Meetings

I loved it. I can't wait to read more, as the story develop.
HA! GO Buffy. I'm glad she didn't fall for Spike's charms. Men are to damn arrogant., They think they can get anything just by snapping their fingers. I'm glad she's not an easy girl, like in most of the other stories i've read. Keep the good work up. update soon!

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 12:44 am Title: The Meetings

more updates! this story is really good, and you are an amazing writeer. i can tell you take time to think out the smaller details. i love the bad-boy persona spike has too..its really hot!!

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