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Reviewer: roo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

u kept saying shows instead of shoes
but great story so far loved it

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

really can't wait to see how buffy reacts to this. this is gonna be so good. greatjob.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I like where you're going so far! Great plot so far as well! I wonder what will happen next!

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 06:05 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Don't understand ballet....seems like a way to torture your poor feet ;)

Hmm hope you don't make Spike all remorsfull and shit as the story goes on, I would like a more "Godfather" feeling to it. I would imagine it to be very hard to quit such a business as Spike is in.

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I think I'm starting to slowly but surely fall in love with your story. ;:) I still stand by my comment earlier about a beta but otherwise I love the story. :) It's amazing! Oh I'm gonna enjoy the action when you get to them soon.

Hope to hear from you soon!

Reviewer: joey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 11:18 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

great job! I love this story really much please update soon!:D

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

GOOD UPDATE

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Really enjoying this fic and love the fast updates....wonder how our Buffy will take the news about being Spikes mistress? Cant wait hurry up already and update*hint hint*:)

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Ok!" So buffy knows what daddy dose.And in no way likes it.But yet Blue eyes creeps in her thoughts.Oh if she only knew.Come on lets pick this up.3ed chapter update.You have got me now.

Reviewer: Livia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 05:31 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I'm just loving this story more and more. After the first chapter, I was like interesting story line. And now with the dancing, I couldn't be more thrilled. I am a dancer and I understood all and I hope that you add more of it into the rest of the story. Please update this soon. I just love it. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 03:40 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Excellent chapter!
I can't wait to read more!
Updata soon! (",)

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 03:09 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I really like your story but I do have to say this: You need a beta or you need to check your story yourself. I hope this doesn't offend you, it's only meant as constructive critisism. You forget words quite often. You also use words like -your- when you want to say -you're- (another ex.: their when it should be they are). If you look your story over, you can rid a lot of these mistakes.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 02:14 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I like the ballet dancing angle! Can't wait for Spike to find out.
I'm always up for a good mafia story too...
I hope you update often.
spuf

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 01:42 pm Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Love how Buffy is already daydreaming about Spike! Great chapter!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:55 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

I love that Buffy is a ballet dancer! Ballet dancers are so graceful, and beautiful..They all seem to have the inate tranquility.. I can see a character like Spike in this story being even MORE taken when he sees her dance. I imagine that Spike will fall for Buffy very quickly. At least I hope he does.. Loving this story..keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:48 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

Great chapter. I actually feel sorry for Hank (just a little)

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:45 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

great

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 11:33 am Title: Decisions and Day Dreams

It was fun to meet Willow. I really want to know how Buffy will react when her father tells her. I hope to meet Dawn and Joyce soon.

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