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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2011 - 02:14 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

The scene in the Bronze that this chapter was inspired by was definitely one of the hottest Spuffy moments. Loved your version of it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2010 - 10:56 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

I have just started reading this and i love it, it's so different to any of the other fics i have read but i am getting conflicted lol i feel like a part of me hates this Spike but loves him too, my heart is breaking for Buffy too i feel like she is being forced into this and that breaks my heart.... as i said conflicted but still 100% interested so off i go to read more.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2007 - 12:18 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

That was great! Excellent rework of the balcony scene. She's so conflicted. She wants him but morally she can't let herself go. Great work. thanks.

Reviewer: Ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 01:33 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

i like how you took the scene from Dead Things and made it your own!
update soon please!!

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Fantastic job with the balcony scene , so very erotic and I loved how you wrote Spike , dark , seductive , threatening but so possessive!
I hope you update soon , i'm completely hooked. :)

Reviewer: Peanut Butter Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

good chapter. Can't wait till she moves in, I hope you update soon. Still a little surprised no one came out after her, but hey still really good.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

wow that was hot. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that buffy starts to have feelings for spike and that she comes to love him. also i really hope that spike starts to be more caring to buffy and that he controls his anger around her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chpater. thanx

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 06:46 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

wow still grinning spike persona is great please dont turn him into some whipped milksop. I like him nasty.
Story is wonderful, dont let anyone make you change your story it is your story to tell. Thank you. more please and soon

Reviewer: Livia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 06:35 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

I just can't tell you how much i love this story. It is just amazing. And again I love the dancing. Please update soon.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 05:12 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Wonderfully done - the story is smooth and flowing. That and the slow seduction of a young, innocent Buffy is practically intoxicating.

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

AWESOME!!!!!

Reviewer: joey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 10:29 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

omg that was wonderfull!:D great job! can't wait to see the next chapter,updte soon please!

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 09:16 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Gotta love a hot balcony scene...cigarette anyone??...roll on the next update, cant wait to see the sparks fly when she moves in...felt a bit sad for our girl in this chapter...I think she was very humiliated...hope Spike is gentle( but not toooooo gentle)*tee hee*:)

Reviewer: Amarysso Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 08:40 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

This was great! Luxferi is right: the smuttier the better! *lol*

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 05:32 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Hot chapter with Spike asserting his rights to her body and showing her what he plans for them in the immediate future. Poor Buffy, and innocent who is warring with her situation. Can't wait to read the next chapter. This one was great.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 04:00 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

I can't believe Spike didn't go after her! I hope he at least checks on her in the morning... not that she probably won't jack him in the nose or something.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 03:51 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Yes you did take some of the lines of dead things.But I believe you when you say its going to get more intense When Buffy moves in with him ,next chapter.And that is what i have been waiting for.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 03:34 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

i am loving your story! i can't wait to read more spuffy and more fighting! that's the best part, unless someone gets really hurt, anyway, please update soon? i can't wait to read more!!!!!1

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 03:03 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

I feel bad for Buffy. Spike shouldn't lose his temper like that. I think that Buffy should off struggled more to get out of Spike's arms. Why didn't he (spike) run after her? I can't wait to read chapter 9, please update soon. I love Spike's attire. when is this moving day?

Reviewer: shel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 01:51 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

i am officially in love with this story. i love that while spike is still a hardcore bad boy (which is SO hot) he still obviously has a really sweet and gentle side (which makes it even hotter). keep updating!!

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 01:40 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Top Notch scene....fantastic!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 01:31 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

absolutely loved the intimate scene...you did a fantastic job on it

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2006 - 12:12 am Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Wow...I can't wait for Buffy to accdept him for who and what he is! I have a feeling it's gonna be soooo interesting when that happens! Can't wait to read more Spuffy as well! Great chapter! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 10:40 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Yep..I reconized tones from Dead Things right off the bat. That was always one of my favorite scenes between Buffy and Spike. I like how you utilized it here.

I do see that Spike is force to be reckoned with here..but I hope that Buffy is able to hold on to her "light"..Whatever you decide to do wtih this story, it's going to be interesting..

BTW..I noticed a mention of Dru here...I can't help but wonder if she will be a problem for Spike and Buffy..(one of many) lol Great work..Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: She'll be a little problem but not in the way most people are thinking.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chaos Part II: Balcony

Great chapter!

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