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Reviewer: Astoria Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2008 - 01:19 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Wow, he really needs to be redeemed. But I think that it's all part of his character and background, y'know? And poor Buffy. I felt so bad for her when she called Lorne.

Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 03:36 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Read the whole thing...and boy are my eyes tired lol. It's really a great fic though. I wasn't sure about it when I first read the summary but it turned out really fantastic. Honestly when I read the summary I thought either this is gonna be really great or it's gonna suck. Lucky for me though it was great lol. I also am enjoying ballerina Buffy, like you said most people make her a ice skater which is fine, but it was nice to see her doing something different. So thank you for sharing your lovely piece of work!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

When I first read the summary of this (sometime ago), I didn't think I'd like to ready about a mafia so I gave it a pass. Then I saw it again a few days ago and said, what the heck! I love it. I'm so glad I decided to give it a go. I love how you are instilling all the characters and their personalities into a "family" situation. I love that Buffy is attracted sexually, but determined to keep her heart cold, and how Spike is longing for someone to love him - just so much like BtVS. More please. I'm hooked.

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 03:48 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

You kind of freaked me out when he raised his hand the second time but good job with the story so far!!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Great chapter! Not too thrilled with Spike right now!

Reviewer: marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 02:28 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

wow great update im hooked to ur story more please!!!

Reviewer: chance Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 02:27 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

hey lovin ur story so far its great!!!im glad Buffy's still goin to be dancing!!! please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 11:49 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

So glad to see an update on this story!!!!

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 10:26 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

i love this fic. glad to see an update. cant wait for more

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 08:57 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

hey lol i dont hate u i think ur new chap is great and ur right at keast he didn't hit her. its great that Buffy stands up for herself!! im really glad that Spike is gonna let her continue her ballet!!! i love ur Lorne at the end of the chap he just seems to lighten the whole thing up , break the tension in the chap !! well i really hope u update real soon!!! coz i can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 07:04 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Good to have you back, and with a great addition, no less! Good update, and I'm glad that Spike didn't hit her- if you've ever seen the Soprano's- it happens a lot. Glad to see that Spike is better than that!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 05:34 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Sooo relieved that Spike didn't follow through and hit her. Buffy shouldn't have hit him either. Though...he has to understand that she is human..and she is under a great deal of stress.

If Spike would listen to her..he could actually learn some things from Buffy. In his line of work..would he really want to talk about killing people around his wife or children. I'm thinking not. Don't think Spike is used to having someone with a little more "couth" around..Great update!

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 03:12 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

yay your back... Please keep updating I couldn't handle it if you disappeared again lol, are you going to update 'together they protect her' because these 2 are 2 of my favourite stories and i really wanna see how they end

Reviewer: rett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 02:48 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

i loved this chapter , whens the next update

Author's Response: Possibly tomorrow or the next day.

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 01:32 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

GOD I AM SO GLAD YOUR BACK . I HAVE MISSED THIS STORY SO MUCH AND THE TENSION YOUR BUILDING UP IS EXPLOSIVE. I CAN'T WAIT TIL SHE DOES FALL FOR HIM SO SHE CAN EAT HER OWN WORDS WELCOME BACK AND I'LL BE CHECKING FOR MORE UPDATES.

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it. Lol. Things though will definately be a roller coater for Spuffy that much I can say.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 01:27 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

No complaints here, it's your story. But I would be happier of you updated it more frequently.

Author's Response: Don't worry I definately will be updating more. Hopefully I'll post chapter 13 by tomorrow. Possibly.

Reviewer: Sheree Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 01:16 am Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Loved the update, cant wait for more.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 11:32 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

Oh wow...I really thought he was gonig to hit her back for a second there. Update soon please!

Reviewer: smiley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 11:27 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

that was so good i cant wait for the next confrontation between spike and buffy

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: A rasied hand to your raised voice

So glad you are back, and the promise of more chapters makes me so excited !!! I am glad that Spike had his moment of clarity, before he struck Buffy. At least now he knows how much he frightens her, but she still stood up to him. And by the way, I think discussing a "hit" in front of her shows how insensitive he has become to the business he is in. I really like the interaction between Anya and Faith, and Buffy needed that girl time. I cannot wait for things to "look up", great chapter and thanks

Author's Response: I'm gald you liked it. I was going to add Andrew to the mix with Faith and Anya but that would have seemed odd.

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