Date: 06/06/2006 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: They may be part of the crew, men will be men
Oh dear, not very believable to be honest about how she comes abord the ship and then has to prove herself. I mean I highly doubt that fencing lessons would be top priority there. If you have to prove yourself that usually means that you start at the bottom, swabbing the decks and then learning how to tie knots, help with the setting of the sails and all that. If this continues the way it is she'll be captain in the next chapter and after that rear Admiral of a pirate fleet in a week or so. Please she is not the slayer with god given strength and stuff like that and it would take a long time to become a good sailor in itself.
Date: 04/30/2006 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 6: They may be part of the crew, men will be men
Omg i totally totally adore this story, fast paced and quick witted with brilliant writing, keep it up and cant wait for more
Date: 04/30/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 6: They may be part of the crew, men will be men
eh... shouldn't she be asking questions like "why did you not come back when you promised?" or "what have you been doing for the last 5 years" ?
Date: 04/26/2006 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 6: They may be part of the crew, men will be men
Well Hoo ho ho and a bottle of rum.So buffy ishappy to be on spikes ship.Cant wait for more action.
Date: 04/26/2006 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 6: They may be part of the crew, men will be men
Great chapter! I hope Buffy does well and can stay on Spike's ship.
Date: 04/25/2006 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 6: They may be part of the crew, men will be men
Is chapter seven chapter six? You have the first chapter as a prologue so the chapters normally one number down... ~ Good that Buffy had some training before at that other ship. And I wonder too about William's (Spike's) past (how and when he became a pirate but I think it will come later). Maybe Spike was on a military ship? Looking forward to find out. :)