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Reviewer: Mars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2014 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter One, The Grass

Kinda confused. Spike is from regular timeline but was a gladiator?

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2006 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter One, The Grass

ooooh!.. interesting :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Valery Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter One, The Grass

Good story, I love the mistery. It's something new but is refreshing to know that some authors has the creativity to write something so diferent. I know is going to be a great fiction

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope it will be a good story. It is different, and I'm glad you appreciate it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter One, The Grass

Uh-huh.. seems as if Spike got himself in trouble; he is a prisoner now. And this Buffy is pregnant? *wonders who the father of the child is* And she lives in a cave. A friend of mine still has this morning sickness too. And she is due in June. ~ Must say Xander is very brave, taking over Buffy's duties. I see: Buffy doesn't know who the father is too. So that's part of the Mars-Verse. ~ Wow.. Spike had contact with Buffy (Buffy's rock)? *on to the next chapter*

Author's Response: Spike was in trouble, yes. He never managed to leave the caves after getting his soul. Yep, you are dead on the money with the Mars-verse. Buffy has no idea who the father is. I think you might be the first? To see that little detail. Next chapter I haven't done yet, but probably work on it tomorrow. Hopefully Spike/Buffy meet.

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 09:18 am Title: Chapter One, The Grass

WTF? Sorry but I just dont get it...maybe with the next update it may become clearer, or not!! Anyway I am sure someone will explain it to me...

Author's Response: Sorry you don't get it. Maybe it's just not your thing. If not, no problem. I can't write for everyone. Take care.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter One, The Grass

okay......that was very....interesting. i'm really curious as to how this story is gonna play out. great start. pleaase post soon.

Author's Response: I just did so. Thank you, I'm glad you are intrigued. I did all that last week, so stay tuned for more this week, I guess.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter One, The Grass

good so far

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you are liking it.

Reviewer: angela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter One, The Grass

very interesting so far. a bit unusual for this site i think but i'm looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm hearing it is unusual for here. I just plunked it here out of curiosity. I was talking to another writer friend who's work is here and she wasn't sure it would fit in either. I have no idea. But I put it here for now and I guess we'll see.

Reviewer: Greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter One, The Grass

Okay, this is rather different and i've not read enough of it yet to form a solid oppinion of where it's going to lead me. It has si-fi overtones, which isn't too surprising for an alternative universe story, it's certainlly not the usual type of story I've seen posted here on the Spuffy Realm in the last year, but i'm vastly intrigued and really hope you'll stick it out and post whenever you can. I don't think I've read anything of yours before...and if this one chapter is the quality I can expect, then I'm sure I'm in for a good read. So far the story doesn't seem to have attracted too much attention, but I hope you won't let that put you off, as I belive it might just require a few more chapters added to come to the readers notice. Keep going pet, I'll read AND review...more soon please :-)

Author's Response: Thank you. It's lovely meeting you, so I'm one up from not having that experience. I'm glad you are intrigued, it has had a very strong response with those who know my work, so I'm fortunate. I put it here as an experiment, but possibly I/it won't fit in here and this isn't what spuffy readers want. That's okay, since I can't really control that. I can only write what I write, but I'm one up for having met you! I'll put up chapter two, and we'll see how it goes. Thanks for responding.

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