Name: gdo (Anonymous) · Date: 04/05/2010 - 03:20 am · Chapter: Chapter 13
I love Buffy talking to Joy about "interlockiong parts."

Name: BuffyRat (Anonymous) · Date: 03/26/2010 - 07:39 am · Chapter: Chapter 28
So glad we got to the bottom of that phone call. And I love Spikes plan to finally use the magic to get them something they need. Wonderful. Update when you can.

Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 03/25/2010 - 10:09 pm · Chapter: Chapter 28
Awe, enjoyed the chapter again. Love the way Buffy and William are together.
Can't wait to find out if William's plan to catch Angel with a spell will work.
Enjoy your vacation.

Name: demona424 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/25/2010 - 07:04 pm · Chapter: Chapter 28
I love Buffy with her memory back! So many holes have been filled. It would be great to see Angel get his comeuppance considering what he did. You write them so cute, sweet, wonderful, hot, and other great adjectives. I was so happy to see an update. Can't wait for the next!

Name: Brunettepet (Anonymous) · Date: 03/25/2010 - 03:20 pm · Chapter: Chapter 28
This was another tightly written, entertaining chapter. I love the domestic scenes you paint. Buffy and William's parenting is charming to read and feels very real. That pancake ritual was a delight. Willow's arrival was an unpleasant surprise and I think William handled it just right. He needed time to pull himself together because I bet his first instinct was screaming at the witch. Who can blame him? She's overstepped again.

Buffy filling in just what exactly had her in such a dither was clear and entertaining. She'd confronted Angel on her own. It's no wonder she was afraid of angering her husband. He would have been frightened that she'd put herself in danger.

The two of them planning for the future was an interesting conversation, working through their options calmly and rationally gave me a happy smile. The lines of communication are well and truly open. It's making me smile and hate Willow a bit less.

Now, what the frilly heck does William have up his sleeve to finally put Angel behind bars? I can't wait to find out!

Name: Brunettepet (Anonymous) · Date: 03/25/2010 - 02:05 pm · Chapter: Chapter 27
This was a wonderful chapter. Buffy getting her memories back seamlessly filled in a lot of meaty back story. I enjoyed reading the progression of their life together. Buffy's right, this spell has allowed them both to see how important their family is and it's made their love for one another even stronger. William getting distracted by that motorcycle was hilarious.

I love how William just jumps to the truth here: “Don’t. Don’t ‘oh, William’ me. You’re always trying to look after me and my precious emotions. It’s nothing new. I know you won’t change. I don’t even want you to. We balance each other out, Buffy. You come unglued when you’re protecting my Nancy-boy feelings and I do the same when I think you’re putting yourself in harm’s way.” If they're just honest with one another, everything will work itself out.

This made me laugh out loud: “Honey, are my boobs really this important to you?”

William has his priorities in place. Well, until the thwarted blow job.

Name: Vette (Anonymous) · Date: 03/25/2010 - 07:39 am · Chapter: Chapter 28
Like William's plan to use Willow and Tara to help with their case against Angel. Buffy and William need closure with Angel and if magic can help, then hocus pocus him into telling the truth, imagine the possibilities! Anyhow, have a good time on your trip, look forward to the next chapter.

Name: BuffyRat (Anonymous) · Date: 03/11/2010 - 05:59 am · Chapter: Chapter 27
"William, I will never leave you. I can be shot at; I can have my memory erased by magical nanny witches… I need you with me everyday. Every single day."

Glad she's back to herself. Love them filling in the final pieces. A beautiful, loving puzzle, with just the right amount of smut. :) Awesome. Update soon!

Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 03/10/2010 - 09:24 pm · Chapter: Chapter 27
We balance each other out, Buffy. They are very lucky to have that.
Heh heh, William was indeed very thoughtful to take care that Buffy is comfortable. *gg*
Awe, it's so good that Buffy has her memories back now. :) And that they 'found' the motorbike *gg*.
Loved the update very much.

Name: Pam S (Anonymous) · Date: 03/10/2010 - 03:55 pm · Chapter: Chapter 27
Memory back.. and more about William's past.. enjoyed.

Name: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: 03/10/2010 - 03:25 pm · Chapter: Chapter 27
I don't want this to eeeeeeeeeeeeend

Name: albie (Anonymous) · Date: 02/25/2010 - 11:48 pm · Chapter: Chapter 26
Of course Willow was behind it and considering what Willow accidentally did with Sarah, you'd think Tara would be more careful with what she told Willow.

Glad we got a clear answer as to what was behind the whole memory loss and how Buffy could get her memories back. Unless there's another twist waiting in there ;)

Buffy was especially sweet with the kids this chapter. Looking forward to more

Name: Brunettepet (Anonymous) · Date: 02/25/2010 - 01:18 am · Chapter: Chapter 26
The interaction with the kids was wonderful and I love that Sarah stood up to Jamie and the way Buffy had her daughter's back without playing favorites. She's getting good at the parenting thing, memories or not.

Buff catching Tara skulking about was vividly drawn and her reaction was spot on. She doesn't trust the nanny and now she's hiding stuff in her pillowcase and putting things in her food. I think Tara got the reaction she deserves. It's wonderful to finally know that there's magic involved and Willow screwing up the spell is a big bonus.

Name: BuffyRat (Anonymous) · Date: 02/24/2010 - 10:50 pm · Chapter: Chapter 26
And even in this world it all comes down to magic. Interesting twist. I do hope things work out. And I kind of want to see Angel going down somewhere here, too. Hope the pouch works. Update soon.

Name: Trisha B. (Anonymous) · Date: 02/24/2010 - 08:13 pm · Chapter: Chapter 26
interesting turn of events...but i like it. :)

Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 02/24/2010 - 07:16 pm · Chapter: Chapter 26
Oh that was unexpected! I never guessed that Buffy was under a spell here.
(Before, I loved the scene with the kids, forgot to mention.)
Clever twist, though.
Enjoyed the chapter.

Name: Pam S (Anonymous) · Date: 02/24/2010 - 02:00 pm · Chapter: Chapter 26
Yuck.. Willow with the spells.. and Tara with the magical herbs..


Name: BuffyRat (Anonymous) · Date: 02/11/2010 - 02:16 am · Chapter: Chapter 25
Well, that's good that Buffy isn't flying around like a crime fighter with 3 kids and another on the way. And I love that the big memory she has is where the chew toy is. Glad they're getting along.

Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 02/11/2010 - 12:01 am · Chapter: Chapter 25
Awe, Spike took the news well. :)
At last the ones about the baby. And the maybe news that Buffy won't work (undercover) any longer.
Oh I'm glad Spike knew about the undercover job (or the not so much existing job) already. I hope they'll find a good solution that will be good for them both (enjoyable / reasonable) and still bring in the money they need. Sounds difficult.
Enjoyed the chapter very much.

Name: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: 02/10/2010 - 05:43 pm · Chapter: Chapter 25
I love this story. Buffy and William are a really sweet couple. I am glad that Buffy was not doing anything behind his back. Thanks for the update.

Name: demona424 (Anonymous) · Date: 02/10/2010 - 05:41 pm · Chapter: Chapter 25
Wonderful update! I love all the little bits with Joy, she is so cute. I also love how the more she learns (and we learn) the more we know how close they really are and how strong their relationship is. :-)

Name: Brunettepet (Anonymous) · Date: 02/10/2010 - 04:50 pm · Chapter: Chapter 25
This was another charming chapter in this entertaining story. Buffy climbing into bed with William and the baby painted a sweet domestic picture, and I'm delighted that Buffy hasn't been lying to her husband about tracking Angel. These two on stake out must be a bit like date night!

Even when Buffy's calling him an overprotective asshole, you can still feel the love and respect between these two. The just want to keep one another safe. It's quite heartwarming and lovely.

This exchange made me laugh: “Is the baby really a surprise or did you know about that too?”

“It was bound to happen sooner or later. We’ve been giving it our all, you know.”

Name: BuffyRat (Anonymous) · Date: 01/29/2010 - 01:39 am · Chapter: Chapter 24
That is a hell of a lot to take in. Poor little Buffy and William, and another baby! And going under cover again, and really where is Williams Christmas gift. What are those keys to? So much interesting story, and I think you have those two perfectly cast as young parents of three. And I love that she's already fallen in love with him again. Hard not to. A lovely story, and I look forward to more. Update soon.

Name: Kirsty (Signed) · Date: 01/28/2010 - 08:19 am · Chapter: Chapter 24
I loved the chapter. And a new baby, yay :) Love the kids, they are just too adorable, just like Spike the Dad.
Si it wasn't an affair.. thank god! (And I do hope that willl remain as the truth) But undercover.. interesting..
I bet Tara knows more about the amnesia than she let on..
Love the story, and please update soon again.

Name: cordykitten (Signed) · Date: 01/27/2010 - 09:17 pm · Chapter: Chapter 24
Clever way to get the children inside again. And this was Buffy's secret. Didn't expect that. Therefore the key, huh? Maybe the work on the case (something what happened there) caused Buffy's amnesia. Hopefully the doctor can help.
Tara is right about the present. :)

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