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Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 24

Thought that's what is was, I even put it in a review. If not here than on EF.
Plus yay another Spuffy baby.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh what a tangle web we weave when first we practice to deceive! Looks like Buffy has sure put herself into a pickle, even if she doesn't remember doing it! I don't think William is going to be too happy with her about being undercover. Another excellent chapter, I was so happy when I saw that it was updated! Love the scenes with the kids, they are just too darn cute. :-) With another baby on the way, looks like they'll sure have their hands full!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 24

I know I've said it many times, but I want to reiterate that I love the kids in this story. They're cute and funny and you've captured the minor squabbles and sibling rivalry beautifully.

I'm happy that the gaps Tara has filled in aren't about an affair though Buffy working to bring down the man who caused her to lose her first baby is not going to sit well with William. Buffy's confidence that she wouldn't be working on the case without cause is a bright note. Hopefully William will understand. The news about a new baby is happy news, but Buffy putting herself in danger is worrisome.

Tara's enigmatic "People who can help makes me wonder if this memory loss is, indeed, mystical. It's all very entertaining.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 24

Thank goodness it was just about the Angel case. However, I don't think William will be very pleased with Buffy. Maybe losing her memory was for the best...now she can be sensible and not go after Angel...

And Tara knowing people to help with her memory? Hmmm...I think i have a clue on what will happen there....however, i could be way wrong.

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 23

I just found this! Oh man, I remember this story and I'm so excited that you are updating it again!

Now I wonder if Willow has something to do with Buffy's amnesia, that she confessed something to Willow and in her Willow-fix-everything way, she did some kind of forgetting spell.

Looking forward to the confrontation. Also, I'm with William, I totally didn't think about him being the father. Very interesting all around!

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2010 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter 23

I just found this story and I love it! Lol and now I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!

Reviewer: Pixiecorn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 23

i'm really interested to find out what the present is... and what the secret of Buffy's is that Tara knows..


Update again soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 23

Clever reason why not using a dishwasher. Great opportunity to talk.
Weird... I wonder what Buffy wanted with the key. Indeed a secret (connected to the one Tara knows of?).
And the other secret Buffy spilled by chance? Good that she did, Spike isn't mad because of it. But now to the really big secret - I hope telling will go well too.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 23

You're doing an excellent job striking a balance between light hearted banter and real, earth shaking revelations. These two have a deep bond, but as in every marriage there are dark places. Buffy's news about the paternity of her baby and her plan to fool Finn was shattering, but she didn't go through with it. That means something, right? I love that William is able to look at their past and forgive her for even not telling him. It hurts, but it's something she did out of self preservation.

I hope that was the big secret Tara was worried about, but I have a feeling there's more drama to come.

Thanks for updating this emotional, entertaining story. it's always fun to see what's going on in this household!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 22

So, Buffy's been keeping something from William. I wonder if the stress of finally doing something about that triggered the amnesia. It was nice to get some more back story on William's persistence after the shooting. I wonder what Tara's role in all the romance was.

Buffy's rivalry with Tara seems more seated in the other woman's domestic comfort with her family. She has a history with William and the kids that Buffy craves. Her love and affection for the family is building by leaps and bounds, but she wants memories of their lives together. Looking in on this happy group, who can blame her?

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 23

Ohh, I have to know what the secret is! I love this story! Update soon :D

Reviewer: Oh-Em- Gee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter 22

great chapter, but please no affair or perhaps secret abortion/not miscarriage issue.....i know its probably something bad but its gonna suck to know what because i dont want spike to get hurt. please update soon and take me out of my suspense!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 22

Hope Buffy's betrayal isn't as bad as Buffy thinks! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 22

Ooh more intrigue! I hope as well that she's not cheating. In my heart I don't believe so, but you never know! Maybe the baby she lost was actually Spikes? Love this story! Wasn't expecting an update so soon so this totally made my day. :-)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 22

Mmmh more secrets. I wonder what Tara meant with the betrayal, if she meant it literally or figuratively .... kind of an evil cliffhanger. ;))
I hope we get to know more soon. Enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 22

Betrayal? Oh this is so not good...please oh please don't make Buffy be seeing someone on the side. Please let it be something else...maybe Buffy is going after Angel behind William's back or something. Anything but an affair.

Reviewer: Oh-Em-Gee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 21

that was a really good chapter! please write more soon! it feels like it's been forever!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter 21

Glad to see this updated! Really loving this!

Reviewer: Lo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter 21

Glad you updated. I just love this story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2010 - 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 21

Grrrr. I can't post hearts here like I used too. I'm sorry I forget. TSR is a bit heartless. ;)). The rest of the comment gets always eaten. *sigh*
*goes looking for the real code, not only the ("3" code.*
are I just was busy to read the old chapters. I totally forgot that the story takes place around Christmas. to see the update.
And loved to read it. It's good to see Buffy accepting her family and William, even with the memory loss.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2010 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 21

I just was busy to read the old chapters. I totally forgot that the story takes place around Christmas.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2010 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 21

I thought I was seeing things for a minute....this story...up in the recent stories section? No...impossible...hehe...sorry, just teasing. Like i'm any better at updating.

Yay, your back!!!! Can't wait to see how this story continues now that you had a second look at it and saw that it is a great plot :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2010 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 21

This was a light, charming update to this fast paced, entertaining story. Buffy finally relaxing into this whole marriage thing and grabbing her husband for a quickie in the family car was delightful. I like how playful these two are, rolling with the amnesia as though it was just a minor hiccup. Buffy had trusted William as her partner, so choosing to trust him as her husband and the father of their children works.

Like William, I hope Buffy treads lightly with Tara. A good nanny is worth their weight in gold!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'd forgotten how much I love this story. Buffy's amnesia has taken a back seat to the wild attraction sparkling between them, and I love how completely goofy their kids are. You beautifully captured the family's excitement at present time, and I know that's how parents feel when they're watching their happy, delighted children. It was charming.

Buffy's thoughtful gifts were also charming, though I'm sure her normal self would have had a bit of hesitation at the motorcycle. This man is the father of her children and she wants to keep him safe. I bet the look on his face at opening that package was priceless. Here's hoping this amnesia clears up at some point and William can thank the Buffy that actually bought those thoughtful gifts!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2009 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 20

Sad, no more chapters to read.

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