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Reviewer: CrazyCatLady402 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2023 - 02:14 am Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

This is one of the best fanfic I have ever read!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 06:35 pm Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

Even though your not updating this right now, I thought I'd give it a try. Really like it so far, can't wait to see what happened to this slayer that her friends and watcher are now a part of her past. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 08:43 am Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

Great start looking forward to more.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 02:49 am Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

What exactly happened? I'm so into it already! Hehe

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 01:17 am Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

I love this! Excellent premise--very unique! I'm dying to find out what happened between Buffy and the Scoobies, and (of course) how the prologue ties in...this is really awesome!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 01:17 am Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

I love this! Excellent premise--very unique! I'm dying to find out what happened between Buffy and the Scoobies, and (of course) how the prologue ties in...this is really awesome!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2006 - 10:23 am Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

I totally missed that story when you post the first chapter. But I'm gonna read it now :)
You're right; if you (we) don't have read much more the epilogue (what Charissa did, where she is) doesn't make much sense yet. I wonder how she fits into the rest of the story. ~
Drove straight into the sign? Yeah that can only be Spike :)
And Buffy had been called at the age of fourteen? And she didn't find a lot of happiness yet (or since then). Otherwise she wouldn't be bitter. She dropped out of school too? Interesting too that a slayer and watcher have a bond. ~ But Buffy was lucky to have found the job she has now. Could have been a lot worse. I wonder what's the what with her feeling shortly she arrived at her work (the dropping of temperature etc.).

Author's Response: I wanted to create a bond between Buffy and Giles simply because later I want something she can go back on. I had been watching School Hard and had remembered the feeling Joyce got when Buffy had been fighting Spike. I wanted to create something similar because of the fact that Buffy and Giles watcher/slayer relationship is much more different than any before. I'm glad you picked up on the dropping of temperature. The Charissa was confusing and exactly how I wanted it to be. Don't fret about it, she probably won't be mentioned again until later into the story. Hope you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 04:21 pm Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

hey i've been reading ur other story "mafia misstress" and am really enjoying it and hope that u update soon. i thought i would take a look at ur other stories and noticed this one i really like it and think that it will b a great story if u continue with it. i noticed that u haven't updated this story for a while and i really hope u decide to !!!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

So far so good. Ok, I like it. Sorry for teasing :)

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 07:01 pm Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

catcing start, looking forward to more..

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

It's a good start, I'm intriqued. hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 09:58 am Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

Hey sweetie! :) I missed this story too, I check "Recently Updated" daily so I couldn't *have* missed it... I only found it when I did a search on your name.

Huh. It's all so confusing.

Reviewer: Syl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

I just noticed this fic--not sure why it slipped through the cracks but I'm glad that I was able to find and read it. I like the beginningand am wondering what happened to make Buffy stay away from everyone. Did Joyce die during that horrible 18th birthday slayer "test" and is that why Buffy split off from the Scoobies? Please update soon!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 06:06 am Title: Prologue / Welcome to Sunnydale

I liked it. It's different and that's a good thing plus while Buffy's circumstances are difficult and not what we might wish for her you've allowed her to maintain her dignity (by being a bartender - that's a respectable job) and still have an edge (slayer working in a skin joint? That's definitely got teeth). More soon please...I'm very interested. 8-)

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