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Reviewer: apikesangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Conversations

wow...wow...and wow. i was expecting something like the first did and about the whole rape part but i guess that was Dawn's part. wow... i don't really know what to say. i am pissed but yet not cause this is what i expected but i didn't even think of using the immortal. yeah that was worse then the first. when they finally save Spike he will need to go through a LOT of healing and i hope Buffy can convince him that what happened isn't what she truely feels. but thats later. so on i go...

Author's Response: Let's wait and see. Hard times are still to come. Hope you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: nmcil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:24 am Title: Conversations

there is no reason why you need to justifiy your choices in story treatment to your readers, you must and should always have the needs of your story be the first consideration. I thought that the character/guilt memories are some of the strongest elements in this work, and they are the perfect way to break down the ensouled Spike and the killing of his soul. His love for Buffy and Dawn sit at the very foundation of the the "Spike Journey of Redemption" theme.

I like these last two chapeters best so far.

Author's Response: Hi, thank you for your criticism. That is what authors expect from the readers. Their honest feedback. I said that because I didn't want to offend anyone who only wants fluffy stuff. Anyways, keep reading and let me know what you think in each chapter so that I can improve in the future.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 10:03 pm Title: Conversations

Please have someone help Spike before he loses his soul! Great chapters!

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