This was my first Spuffy fic ever, and Im an original fan This was everything I ever hoped for in a Spuffy fic so far Thank you so much for writing it!

Love that she's getting to him too. Know there will be more to their meeting. Loving it so far. Time for bed, though.

Author's Response: Yup, they do slowly get to know one another and that's ultimately what draws them even closer. Sleep tight my friend and thanks for the review. Snuggles.

Well, when I started to read this, I planned to only read a few chapters tonight, but I'm hooked :)

Author's Response: LOL, that's awesome though, I can't tell you how thrilled I am you're truly enjoying it darling. I simply can't wait to see your thoughts on the next few chapters. Thank you very much, I'm really enjoying your reviews. SMooches to you.

Wow. That was fantastic. I'm sitting here with a goofy grin on my face. Can't wait to get to the next chapter.

One thing writing wise. Skipping back in time constantly in order to give the thoughts and feelings of both characters is very jarring for the reader. Having to keep skipping back all the time tends to pull you out of the story and believe me, this chapter is so hot we readers don't want anything to pull us out. Plus, we know a lot of what a person is feeling from their words and actions so we don't necessarily need to be privy to every thought to know what they're thinking. Just something to think about in the future.

Onto the next hot hot chapter. Yay!

Author's Response: Oh good, glad you enjoyed it sweety. Thanks for the advice, I appreciate it. It makes good sense what ou said. At the time I wrote the chapter it was, of course, my first time writing that sort of material and because there wasn't much 'background' on either of them that's why I did it. I think (it was several months ago so I'm trying to recollect) that I wanted the readers to know what they were thinking because what was happening between them was very different for each of them b/c of their past so I wanted the action to have more of an impact on them and the readers at the same time. If I had just wrote the sex then went into the past, I don't know if it would have worked. In either case the whole writing process was, still is in many senses, very new to me and I'm learning from my mistakes as I go. I do agree with you though, who wants to get interrupted by the trivial thoughts when they are talking and such, thanks again hon, I love constructive criticism, it's very helpful indeed. Hope you like the next chappy too hon, thanks for the awesome review.

You sure nailed the title on the head - I'm feeling pretty breathless here :P

Author's Response: Tee hee, thanks hon.

OH!!! My jeans are sticky now!
:o)
More, more, more!!!!

Author's Response: LMAO, if there sticky now, I fear for your pants during the next chappy!!! Thanks for great review.

GHAAAA Woman you sure can write.!"Yes I can see why this had to be a two parter.And with that said I will wait fo the next chapter with bated breath,God girl this was HOT!" Liked hell,I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks, your so sweet. Yes, it is rather long, but I wanted to do it right... not rush it for the sake of a chapter's size. I think you're going to enjoy the next chappy even more than this one, so stay tuned and have your significant other handy... Thanks for the awesome review, I love seeing you back here to let me know what you thought.

I had to react to your complaining on getting a negative review - and deleting it. Sorry, but a real author must be able to handle criticism and evolve along with that. If you're incapable of anything but throwing a hissyfit over criticism you might want to reconsider your constant commments in your notes about how authors should be treated. When all comes down to it, you only write fanfiction. This story is so far quite well-written but if you're not able to handle criticism your work will never improve.


Author's Response: This wasn't just a negative review - that I can handle, especially if it helps me as a writer and I welcome it. After all, that’s what my betas are for and do – so yeah, bring it on so I can become a better author. What that person complained about was rape in general being used in ANY fic, not just mine. I can't remember her exact words or I'd put them here so you can see. I'm pretty laid back and the last person who'll throw a hissy-fit over a review even if they wrote "I think this fic sucks" - that's just a negative review, no big deal and I'd leave that posted. But I actually got attacked for her issues with rape in general, or rather I happened to be in her line of fire for all authors who write about rape in any manner. Now I wish I'd kept it b/c it wasn't a complaint, or criticism, or even constructive criticism, it was a direct flame - even my beta's and a couple other author friends thought so. So I accept and won't delete negative reviews or just plain criticism as long as it not a flame of that nature. I just don't want to waste my time responding to flame, do you know what I mean? I'm not trying to be a smart-alec here or arrogant (not my style), but I hope you understand it really was an un-called for thing and why I deleted it upon suggestion and made a decision to delete all flames – even if a flamer thinks they have the right. It’s my opinion that flaming is immature IF there’s nothing legitimate within it. If she had come out and said: "look, aside from me not liking to read anything with rape in it, your story implies something that may not be tasteful and I personally refuse to read this anymore b/c I'm offended". Now that's going about it in a diplomatic and mature way - it's NOT what she did. So again, no, I don't throw hissy-fits over negative reviews and perhaps I should have put more thought into my author's note or you may not have misconstrued that, that is my fault, and b/c of your constructive criticism on my author's note I will revamp it. I stand by defending authors. In my opinion (and I emphasize opinion) people like her should email rather than flame. Some things are better discussed there rather than on the internet. So thanks for pointing out the flaw in my author’s note and for the positive comment on my writing, very, very much appreciated.

i think this story is very good . keep up the good work .

Author's Response: Thank you hon and I hope you stick around for the next chapter.

Wow, that's hot. I think this story is just fantastic. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review hon, glad you're enjoying it, stick around.

I never had a doubt in my mind that this was going to turn into a rape story. After all Buffy is paying for something, right ? Great chapture by the way. Take your time and keep up the good work .

Author's Response: Thanks for the review hon. It surprised the hell outta me when this woman just went bollistic, I mean come on, there are so many stories out there where the rape actually takes place. She was pissed that I used it as a means of seduction... for like what, 5 actual minutes of Buffy and Spike's time? It wasn't like I'd planned for him to keep up that persona either. I'm glad it was clear to you that Spike wasn't going to do that. And you're right, she's paying for it so that would just plain be stupid. Thanks again hon.

Spike's seduction was a bit forceful in the beginning, but I relaxed as soon as he let Buffy in on his "real" identity. The physical connection is certainly erotic, and I'm really enjoying the inner struggle of Spike and William. Spike's teasing is fun to read, and I'll bet the pay off is going to be worth waiting for.

Author's Response: Yes I'll admit it was but remember what Lorne said - forceful coaxing is necessary to awaken the passionate woman within. So bear that in mind as he may still be somewhat forceful with her, but for her own good. It's not my intention to upset anyone with this or the intruder bit. Just trying to set the scene, plus Spike WILL not do anything to Buffy to hurt her - unless of course she likes it, tee hee. The inner-struggle of Spike/William is elemental to the story and his teasing may continue... you'll just have to read to find out, tee hee. Thanks for the review and for sticking with me and giving it a chance past the intruder part.

Author's Response: Yes I'll admit it was but remember what Lorne said - forceful coaxing is necessary to awaken the passionate woman within. So bear that in mind as he may still be somewhat forceful with her, but for her own good. It's not my intention to upset anyone with this or the intruder bit. Just trying to set the scene, plus Spike WILL not do anything to Buffy to hurt her - unless of course she likes it, tee hee. The inner-struggle of Spike/William is elemental to the story and his teasing may continue... you'll just have to read to find out, tee hee. Thanks for the review and for sticking with me and giving it a chance past the intruder part.

Girl, you are such a talented author that never fails to impress! This chapter was godly, and no need to coo over it because I'm sure you can get an idea from all the reviews it got! Honestly though, I love it, and can't wait for the next update! Take your time if needed though because this chapter is worth a couple more reads!

Author's Response: Honestly??? I still can't get over people's reaction to it, perhaps b/c I am my own worst critic. Since this is my first time writing (their) first sexual encounter, I'm shooting for a stellar 'encounter'. The more I write the easier it will get I'm sure. I've already learned so much between my beta's and the readers reviews... it helps a lot. I'm glad you like it, I really really am. Thanks for the review and the encouragement hon.