omg the picture! THE PICTURE! :: runs to take cold shower:: it's not working!!! there will be NO sleeping tonight. it's one thing to write it but to show it! my mouth waters just looking at it! and FYI i saved it and blew it up! now it sits on my desktop in all his *ahem* glory.

and foreshame! u made Mr. Gordo nasty! he was the only pure and innocent thing in her life....oh well! Good Job! A+! now back to reading and some fudge!

p.s. ignore the comments from Downer. first of all : YOU HAVE PORN! THIS IS OURS (but with WAY better SL)!! and he should let his GF *rolls eyes W!E!* read it and then get her opinion! i bet she'll like it!

Author's Response: LOL, glad you liked the drool worthy pic. I couldn't resist. As for Mr. Gordo..... that's my twisted sense of humor at play, guilty as charged, hee hee. Yes, I ignored the downer - shhe got too touchy for her own good and forgot this is just a fic. Glad you enjoyed the steamy-goodness of the chapter darling. Thank you for the review - it made me smile. Hugs.

Another dissapointing chapter. The beggining was so great i had to keep reading but i don't know anymore. Why are you making Spike so .... weak? Had to jack off twice? I don't know about vampires but humans don't have super recuperative powers. Plus after the first one the rest of the orgasms pale in comparison no matter what you read.

Thats from personal experience. Used to go 3 to 5 times in one night with my girlfriend. I geuss being a guy i don't understand why Spike would waste the greater orgasm by using his hand. The rest won't be as intense anymore.

I geuss a woman wouldn't understand. Kind of sucks since i'm a huge fan of Fanfiction, BTVS, and Spuffy and most of the stories are written by women who can't understand men.

Most people seem to prefer post chip Spike which annoys me because it makes me look at them like Kathie Bates in Misery. If you love the character why do prfer the fake version thats being tortured? Meh got side tracked. Well i'm going to keep reading hoping it gets better.

Author's Response: Well, this may not be the fic for you. It certainly isn't going to appeal to everyone and I accept that. As for Spike being weak, again, this is a story of William not so much as Spike. As for the stamina issue, well, since this is fiction and we have ourselves a gigolo, that's what I went with however unrealistic. Since your a guy I appreciate you coming out and giving some insight, its very refreshing actually because most authors here are female and of course we don't know, except from experience and what we're told, how men, ahem, 'function' down there. Again, this story is not canon nor is it meant to be in any way. You may find after a couple more chapters its not the fic for you and that's fine. THere's definetely plenty out there to choose from. Thanks for the review.

The pic you have posted is a manipulation by deborahm (foodandart) if you would like to give her credit for using the picture. i'm a huge fan of her work. there is a much larger FULL VIEW!! manip of it at her yahoo groups site, plus tons of other fantastic James/Spike manips. If you would like the details to join her group, feel free to email me at raizingkain2001@gmail.com.

Am playing catch up, but thoroughly enjoying your fic!

Author's Response: Hmmmm, interesting. I'll have to email you. I found the pic at darkwaifs site and emailed her for the permission. I did join debarts groups, but this pic wasn't there. Glad you're getting caught up and enjoying it sweety, thanks for the review.

Hee! You're almost as bad as Spike, you tease.. Anyway, I'm enjoying the ride enormously. I think Spike might have found his match now. And I can't wait to read what else you have in store for us, so more pretty please?

Author's Response: Yes, I guess I'm teasing here too. It's just that this particular night is about her fullfillment and breaking down sexual barriers. So in essence, it's going to be a long night full of many games/sexcapades in order to give her her monies worth. This will be the longest series of chapters involving sex b/c of it and future chapters will be more isolated/shorter when they 'encounter' one another again. Thanks for the awesome review hon. See ya next chappy.

U ROCK!
Keep it coming!

Author's Response: You got it... thanks

loved the picture.
can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you like it, it is drool worthy isn't it, tee hee. Chapter 7 to come soon, thanks for the great review hon.

interesting chapter. I have to say, not quite what I expected, but I enjoyed it all the same. Thanks for a good update

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. Hope it wasn't too much a disappointment from your expectations. I realize my style may not appeal to everyone but still glad you liked it thus far. Thanks so much for the nice review and hope you like 7 better.

update soon please.


Author's Response: You betcha, won't be anywhere's near as long as before, thanks for the review.

So I got to thinkin' about the possible reasons Spike is a whore and nothing I can come up with justifies anything that isn't ego driven. Out of what necessity would he feel he HAS to do this? Whoa, another thought just occured so now I have to retract the first statement. Perhaps he was emotionaly abused by someone and his self worth (William) is being repressed by the Spike persona that was created by....ah...I don't know. But I would like to know. :)

Author's Response: Aha, you're a thinker, good I like that. Not to worry, it will be explained in roughly two chapters I promise. Spike is egocentric, but it's more of a byproduct really. I know I sound cryptic here, but it's all I can say for now besides perhaps this: We often have many sides to our personality that need to shine through at different times, marrying them all into one person is to know thyself as a human being wholly. I hope that makes sense, as it's my only explanation, and yes, I just made that cornball statement up in my head just now, lol. I love that it's got you thinking, and found it funny when you said 'that was created by....ah...I don't know. But I would like to know'.

wowowowowowowowowow! i am in love with this fic. first your perspective on what it must feel like to be an escort (a male one at that) seems very true to me, and i love the whole pretty woman 'no kissing thing', i find it is more personal then sex most of the time. I like how youve seperated Spike from william mentally and the sex scenes are hot, i really cant wait to read more of this its amazing! Ill be back as soon as you post again!
xxx
Linz

Author's Response: That's awesome, I'm happy you like it so much. It's good to know Spike's character role comes across well too. With his purpose and direction that I want him to take, it makes for a decent challenge, so I'm thrilled you like that aspect of him. Oh yeah, I think kissing is way more personal too. Thank you so much for the stellar review, see you next chappy.

where do you come up with this stuff?? lol. loved it lots. literally begging for more. please post soon. great job.

Author's Response: lmao, well, some of it pops into my head when I least expect it, other times I just START writing and it flows like milk and honey. You should know girl, you're stories are awesome too. Thanks for the nice review and stay tuned.

Well that was another amazing chap, and let me tell you the pic was a nice touch ;) great for the visual *saucy grin!*

Well I am dying alreay for the next chap so you're gonna have to hurry and post so we know what happens next!!!!! Great job sweets! Kuddos!

Author's Response: Yeah, it's nice when we visualize things in our heads while we read, but I thought... hey, wouldn't it be nice to actually see something right where it's intended? I'm working my hardest before the muse leaves so I can get the next chappy posted. Thanks for the great review and glad you enjoy ed it.