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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 04:29 am Title: Turn up the Heat

Getting them so hot I think I might melt. Love all the ways they play. Amazing.

Author's Response: Giggles - glad you enjoy the hotness hon - thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

I don't have a choice, well I do *giggles* but I can't resist.... Love your fic so far! :)

Author's Response: Awesome, glad you're liking it so much, its a bit long but of course the spuffy at the end will be worth it, I promise. Thank you sweety. Smoochies.

Reviewer: DoWnEr Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 07:48 am Title: Turn up the Heat

How many times does he got to prime her because of his lack of control and skill at sex. The more i read the less Spike seems like an experienced lover and more like a pimple faced nerd trying to have sex for the first time. Sure a nerd knows what to do from reading stories and articles but when it comes time to act he's a new york minute man.

I keep seeing him as a little whiny school girl which is not what i want. Spike is one of my favotire characters and seeing him so low is hard.

4 chapters of nothing but Spike jacking off and lacking self control is pushing it.

Author's Response: Okay, apprentely this isn't the fic for you sweety. If you like Spike as Spike, I suggest perhaps another story b/c you won't get him here. You're more than welcome to try another fic of mine entitled In the ARMY Now or there are plenty of vampire fics out there that are canon or original works. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2006 - 05:20 am Title: Turn up the Heat

And it just keeps on coming. Can't wait to Buffy does.

Author's Response: Tee hee, thanks hon.

Reviewer: Tam/spikeslovebite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 05:36 am Title: Turn up the Heat

LMAO I see cordykitten came thru with the info in Deborah for you! Awesome that she has agreed to lt you continue to use it but then she's a sweet person that way.

Killer smut, girl. I'm enthralled *grin*

Author's Response: LOL, thanks hon. Cordykitten always has the answer... she's like the yoda of spikedom. Glad you enjoyed hon, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 08:34 am Title: Turn up the Heat

Lord have mercy! I wanna boot Buffy right outta bed and have that stud all to myself!

Author's Response: LMFAO, too f'in funny.

Reviewer: spikesmrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

god i'm glad my friend eve sent me here this great stuff.it hot and very smutty my thing thank you and now to chapter 8

Author's Response: Oh, let me know what you think, and tell your friend thanks for sending you my way. Makes me all warm and fuzzy inside that you both enjoy my little ditty. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: spikesmrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

god i'm glad my friend eve sent me here this great stuff.it hot and very smutty my thing thank you and now to chapter 8

Author's Response: Is there an echo in here? LOL. You must have liked it so much you entered twice.

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2006 - 02:33 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

OMG this is hot, I am beyond impressed. I cannot believe this is your first sex scene you've ever written. Totally reads like a pro.

Author's Response: Well that's great, thank you. SO many compliments from the readers are truly wonderful. Thanks again sweety.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2006 - 02:29 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

.... and just when I thought that Spike couldn't be any more awesome ... YOU really write/create wonderful/multifaceted characters. I adore your Spike.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the awesome review. I'm really glad you like all my characters. It makes me feel good that the hard work pays off.

Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 04:01 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

oh... my... gawd...
now you went and did it. My pants are all sticky!

Author's Response: LOL, you're funny. Thanks for the great review and for enjoying it.

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Turn up the Heat

Wow! What a story!
They might have some negative tension there, but you can see that they're good together and were made for each other. The comical moments help lighten the mood some, that's good. You have a great sense of humor.
Hope they end up being able to sit on that couch watching movies together, that would be nice, I like happy endings. Of course it's much too early for an ending, and who would want it to end now it's just getting started!
And what a start, wow!


Author's Response: Yeah, a little negative tension never hurt though, and yes, much too early for an ending. Glad you enjoy the comical moments. I didn't want it too serious. Thanks for the awesome review, the lovely comments/compliments, and I'm happy you like it so far.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

V ery well done. I like how you carried on. Now on to 8

Author's Response: Thanks hon, you're the best.

Reviewer: rauwolfia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 05:18 am Title: Turn up the Heat

First story you've ever written huh? Well, no one would know it,
good story! Keep writin' and you'll make it to the bestseller's list before long, no doubt about it.


Author's Response: Thanks so much, but I won't let it go to my head. I'm still in the crawling stages of writing. Glad you liked it and thanks for the great review hon.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

Love this story, it's so fun, hot and wonderfully written. Delightful chapter, I just love to read their thoughts and personal conversations with themselves. Off to read the rest now. Oh, and congratulations on your surprise visit. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks hon, glad you enjoy the inner talks they have. They're fun to write but also vital to the story - other than that it would just be pure smut, lol. Off to check your next review...

Reviewer: spikes_vamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:24 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

Wow.

Author's Response: Wow is good, I can do wow, thanks hon.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 01:47 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

This is one of the most erotic tales I've ever read. Spike is VERY good and I love Buffy's inner fight between could he care and he just wants the bucks. Can't wait til these two finally start admitting things to each other out loud instead of just arguing with their inner selves over all the emotion flowing between them. Totally awesome chaps and thanks for not leaving us hanging on this one.

Author's Response: Really? I definetely aspire to make the ranks of the 'greats' out there, but don't expect to until after a few more stories are written. I'm ecstactic you enjoy it this much, it makes all the hard work worth it. It may take a few chapters before everyone starts talking to eachother, rather than to themselves, but that's only half the battle. You're welcome on the end of the cliffies, I figured I'd been cruel enough. Thanks so much for the totally awesome review sweety.

Reviewer: sara m Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

so good!! thanks!!

Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks for the review, and for enjoying it. too.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 10:50 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

Oh, he's evil....

Author's Response: Indeed, lol. THanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

It was fantastic. Go you! Off to chappy 8 now!

Author's Response: Great, can't wait to see what you have to say about 8. Thanks hon.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 07:02 am Title: Turn up the Heat

Foooo... this is hot! :) still.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, it was fun writing this part. Stick around for the next chappy, and thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: CrazyInLoveWithSpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 04:57 am Title: Turn up the Heat

OMG!! are you TRYING to give us a heart attack!!! holy s**t!! come on already ...TAKE HER ALREADY spike!! this is so excruciating!!! I cant wait for the other chappy...:D

Author's Response: LOL, god I hope I'm not giving anyone a heart attack. Just wanted to build it up before the finale - makes it that much sweeter. So happy you like it, and thanks for the wonderful review sweety.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 02:28 am Title: Turn up the Heat

DEAR LORD GIRL ARE YOU TRYIN TO KILL US!!!!!!!! Man that was one of the most INTENSE chapters I have EVER read!!!!! Sweetie, belive me when I say you got nothin' to worry about. AMAZING job girl and PLEASE keep up the good work. Kuddos!

Author's Response: Nope, I'm trying to "free you", tee hee. So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the encouraging words, kind compliment and great review. Can't wait till we meet this fall - we'll have to pick eachothers brains. Who knows, perhaps there is a co-written fic in our future.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2006 - 11:33 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

THIS is the first sex scene you've written?!!! Wow! I'm actually blushing to tell you how incredibly erotic this is. I am dreading future angst, though. :( Love this story to death!

Author's Response: Yup, the very first ever. I'm very flattered you like it so much too. I tried to pay attention to other fics out there (style, structure, etc...) b/c writing this stuff is scary, especially the first time. So it mean a lot that you liked it, thanks. Don't worry about the angst. I don't want anything too intense on that end, but it wouldn't be a story without it, it would just be porn w/out plot. Thanks again hon, and don't worry, no heavy stuff when we get into the angst.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

wow....that was intense. again i ask 'where do you come up with this stuff?' lol. great job. had to leave a review for this chapter cuz it was good. light and funny in some places and heavy, sexy, intense and waaaay kinky in others. loved it. post soo-oh wait you already did post another chapter. yay me!!!! lol. okay....ging to go read it now.

Author's Response: Cool, glad you like it. Well, I guess I come up with it as I'm actually writing it. Of course I do work while using my Ipod... I tend to pick a certain song or two, depending on the content I'm writing and just zone out, or into it as the case may be. Glad you liked the funny parts as well as the kink and intenseness. I'm trying for them to be compatable - if you will - in many ways. That and too much sex is just, well, too much porn and not enough plot. Thanks for the awesome review on this chappy. I'm off to repond to your next review.

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