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Reviewer: Hannah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2008 - 04:03 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

really glad you finally addressed the issue that had been bothering me (condoms!)
the idea that Spike would be a first timer at any sexual activity when his job is to please women seems unbelievable to me. surely there's some women who love giving head and would get off on giving their escort a bj (aside from buffy, that is). but in the interest of some good plot and smut, i will suspend my disbelief.
looking forward to reading the rest of this, but figured i'd drop a review on by right now. :)
good story!

Author's Response: Yup - condom issue addressed, and as for the subject of BJ's, well, remember, 9 inches is a lot to take and can intimidate some women. Not all, I know, but for the sake of this fic - Buffy's particular character personality plus Spike's short amount of time spent as a escort - that's the way I painted it. Personally? 9 inches would intimidate me in the BJ area, especially if I was paying for it. I'd want to BE pleased, not the other way around. Thanks for the review darling - hugs.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 12:37 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Still love them. Great chapter. She's really getting to him. Can't wait to see where they go.

Author's Response: SHe's definietly crawling under his skin in the most intimate of ways, huh? GLad you like that. Thanks for the review hon - hugs.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 07:55 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

MARRY HIM! MARRY HIM NOW!!!! *points at English* if she doesn't i'm gonna!!! and bring on the damn chocolate cake!! don't like chocolate much but if he made it, maybe he'll agree to be my plate. *takes a deep breath. inhale. exhale. inhale. exhale.* MARRY HIM!

Author's Response: Hahahahahhaha, I kinow I'd marry him if I weren't already. I'm so thrilled oyu enjoyed it darling - thanks for the awesome review - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2007 - 09:25 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Just one more chapter :) then I'll read more tomorrow :)

Author's Response: Gotcha, take your time hon, I'm pleased you like it. Thanks for the review, hugs.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2007 - 08:19 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Ummmm, yummy snack! I'm jealous of Buffy lol He should have told her he works at that restaurant and made that cake she loves so much. It's so sweet.

Author's Response: Oh yes - but such is our dimwitted thinking when it comes to men, lol. Glad you liked the chappy - thanks for the review . Hugs.

Reviewer: DoWnEr Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 - 08:09 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

The 20 "Are you sures?" from Spike was pretty annoying. Didn't make him look more vulnerable, made him look more like a woman. I can see asking once.. mabe twice.... but more than that?

And the apology for the condom is understandable but the way he did it......

Author's Response: Again, this is not the fic for you sweety, you may want to stop reading now cuz I gaurantee you won't like the rest of it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2006 - 10:10 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Yay! Loved Spike's oral deflowering.

Author's Response: Tis sweet, is it not? Yum, glad you enjoyed it hon, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 03:04 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Even outside the bedroom the chemistry between them is great!
I like the dialogue between them in the kitchen, it makes them seem more vulnerable, and even more real than they already seem to be.
You're so colorfully (that a word? Well you are anyway :-) descriptive, makes it easy to picture in my mind everything that's going on, like watching a good movie.
Great story!
And I see there's another chapter to read, goody!


Author's Response: LOL, that's wonderful, I think I've captured another reader. Please, go on, read more and let me know what you think. I'm happy you can easily picture them in your mind, that's part of my goal as a writer. Thanks again sweety, please leave more reviews.

Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2006 - 08:40 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

I can't believe Spike has held out this long! I would have blown it by now. Lord have mercy, another pair of pants into the wash.

Author's Response: tehee, too funny bro

Reviewer: anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2006 - 01:10 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

really, reallllly good chapter. but poor spikey has yet to come. i hope you'll have some mercy for him in the next chap... or not. hehe, why not make him suffer *wink*. looking forward to their next heated encounter, so keep them coming. (pun intended ;D)

Author's Response: Glad you like it, and yes, I'll take some pity on Spike next chappy. He got off twice before he started teasing her anyway, so I felt it was just and fair this chapter to make him suffer a little. Thanks for the awesome review and let me know what you think of the next chappy.

Reviewer: lustygirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Snack? More like a mouthful, a very delicious mouthful. More please, soon.

Author's Response: Indeed, probably, 2 mouthfuls. You bet hon, I'm getting my next chappy beta'd right now, thanks for the freview.

Reviewer: spike's mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 01:19 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

I need more now pleaseeeee........................this bloody fantastic it's like I'm really there...

Author's Response: That is so great, that's what I aim to do, make readers feel like they're 'there', watching. I loved your review sweety, thanks so much. And soon, I'll post soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 08:35 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

At last.. this is my third try to read but now I'm doing it :)
Got distracted again now, I was hunting the link for some debart's icons I found on my computer. NOW on to your story :)
Loved Buffy's inner conversation. She got distracted too, huh? And both with thinking of the other as girlfriend / boyfriend. Awe, and the chocolate cake :) And now Buffy will be a 'first' for him too. ~ Loved the update and looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Debart's art is distracting isn't it? Tee hee, I know I've got a favorite, lol. Yup, Buffy's becoming distracted, and she's only semi-aware of it. She may think she doesn't want a boyfriend but underneath, we all want someone special in our lives. I got me some plans for that chocolate cake that you'll find quite surprising, lol, I'm teasing you to stick with me. I had to have her make an impression on him in as many ways as possible - with the BJ thing - she just had to do it. Thanks so much for the review sweety. I'll be going home next week, back to DSL and LJ... it's been fun here, but I'm ready to be back in my own house.

Reviewer: jennybear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 10:34 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Was wondering how you were going to work it out that he has had so many women before Buffy. But, what you did was perfect. For her to be his first at that, well, that was a stroke, lol, of genius. Great, great chapter. I really loved it. Amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it was tough, believe me. In the end I guess because it IS spuffy that anything goes, but I wanted to deliver it in a somewhat realistic way. LMAO, your pun is too funny, I loved it... 'stroke of genius', lmao again. Hope you like the next chappie as well. Thanks so much for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

I am in love with this story. You write so animatically and flowing that I cannot do anything other than embrace the words and dive in:-)
Thank you for the snack, bet you had maincourse (english not my mainlanguage, but hope my spelling doesn't leave you a big questionmark as to what I mean) over and over between these two chapters *wink wink in a very not-so-discret way* lol.. Sorry, couldn't help it. One more thing about this story: just brings out the playful side once in a awhile :-)
I still just wanna hug them both. They are so sweet :-)
Thanks for the great update, really looking forward to follow this story further :-)

Author's Response: I am on a high right now from your kind words, you are so sweet. I like to write as 'visually' as I can, you know, really get the readers wrapped up so they feel like they're actually watching it in their mind. I liked you 'not so discreet remark', my kinda humor. Oh yes, the night's not over yet. Maybe I should have said this was an appetizer. I'm happy you like their characters, I wanted a light-hearted fic as a first. Thanks again for the stellar review, let me know how you like the next chapter once it's posted.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Please PLEASE tell me Buffy won't break up with Riley in the restaurant where Spike will see! Oh no! Great update!

Author's Response: Oh yes, you know it's gonna happen - ooops, did I let that slip??? LOL, I'm sure everyone's expecting it. Thanks for the great review sweety.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 04:55 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

I enjoyed VERY much! I couldn't imagine someone as hot as Spike never having a woman give him fellatio! Not possible...lol...but it serves the story great.. He is going to be head over heals by the time he has to leave, and vice versa. Also, his day job, and her love of his chocolate cake was a wonderful way to connect them outside of this situation. Great job!

Author's Response: I know, it is pretty fantastical about him not ever having a bj, but the fact he's only had one lover/girlfriend before this 'profession coupled with the fact his duties are to please women, not necessarily BE pleased, is hopefully ok with everyone. Me personally... I'd give him one in a heart beat, huge or not. OOOPS I just said that didn't I? Glad you like the connection outside of the bedroom and thanks so very much for the kind review.

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Enjoyed ? No , more than that : was captivated !
It was utterly delicious. I really liked how you made them talk and share something different , starting to become intimate in other areas than the sex. lovely.

But of course i won't deny that I was in awe of your descriptive talent for the sex scene.. Wow.. Insanely hot again!

I think there isn't something hotter than a woman willing to please the man with oral pleasure , especially after he has been buried deep within herself , and " his shaft still swathed in her own juices, he tasted divine"; Hum.. is a puddle.

This was fantastically written , dear , and so worth the wait. :)

Author's Response: Yes, I had to have them connect on a level beyond the sex, or it would have turned cheesy, so I'm glad you like that. Glad you like the descriptions, I hopefully pull the readers in 'see' what's going on in their mind's eye. Oh yeah, a woman who wants to please a man with THAT, is selfless and lustful. I can't say anything more w/out incriminating myself - luckily I'm speaking about my hubby. I loved your review, thanks so much... hope you enjoy the next chappy.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 12:29 pm Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Oh yes I so injoyed this fic.Yes Spike is the perfect lover for her,and it would seem she is the perfect lover for him.I am loving this more and more.And to think he is a cook also,works as head chef at her favorite restatrant.This is truning out to be more then I was exspecting.I love how you have brought both Spike and william out in this wounderful story.Want more,like right now.

Author's Response: I'm was simply ecstatic when I read your review. That you found it to be more than what's written beyond the summary. I know it seems all porn right now, but it won't be. Initially, I have to have these two be enamoured with one another - so that it sets the tone for the rest of the story. After tonight, we'll get back to the plot. Thanks so much for the stellar review sweety.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 07:23 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

glad to know that they are being health conscious. Also, I think it's really amazing that she likes him in 'real-life' when he's the cook, too. too bad that they had to meet like this.

Author's Response: Yes, but we often find what we're looking for when and where we least expect it. Yup, as just a man, she likes his personality, which will help in future chapters. Yeah, I had to attack the condom issue or I may have been crucified. I'm so glad you liked it and thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 04:21 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Wow!! I get back from vacation and I have CHAPTERS to read! Soooo sooo good!!! Can't wait for the next bit!

Author's Response: That's great, I'm glad you didn't have to wait. I love it too when I'm away and then mcome back to more than 1 chapter to read of something. Thanks so much for the review sweety.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:14 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, glad you enjoyed. See you next chappy.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:02 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Good god.... are you trying to kill us here? *LOL* I enjoy your story sooo sooo much, it's unbelievably good! Please keep going, it's so addictive!

Author's Response: LOL, glad you're still liking it, we've a couple more steamy chapters to go before getting back to the story-line. Thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: MarzBar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:24 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Yummy, yum, yum. Delicious chapter; better than my peanut butter and honey sandwiches.

Author's Response: You're too funny. But hey, 2 snacks are better than one. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 01:37 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey

Thanks for addressing the health question. That really is a genuine concern, with what he does for a side job.

They're really getting in deep with all the sharing, etc. Very sweet interlude.

Author's Response: Not a problem. Whenever there's something of that nature, I'll address it, but beyond that it's just a fun fic (aside from upcoming angst). Yup, their getting in deep after just one night, but that's the point... the unusual amount of attraction, enjoyment, etc... Thanks for the great review, see you next chappy.

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