LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOOOVE IT!!!!

Author's Response: Giggles, YAY, I'm so very thrilled you enjoyed it darling and that you took the time to leave me a review - thank you sweety - huggles.

You write really good! :) I'm so glad I started reading this. You leave me stunned with admiration. Can this fic get even hotter?

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the compliment darling. I have to admit I'm an nc17 only kinda author - I love writing sex, giggles.

Ok.. starting to get back into the swing of the story.

It's just.... your really overdoing vulnerable Spike. It makes him look pathetic. You don't have to go to the most extreme version of William to have a vulnerable Spike.

Author's Response: This is an all human story that doesn't require Spike to be strong when he's William underneath it all. It's fine to have an opinion and I respect that, but remember there are many people out here who do enjoy the fic and the extreme vulnerability - its a matter of taste. Again, I think you might be wasting time here when there are other fics out there that are better suited to the kind of Spike or William you prefer. I'm but one author who can't please everyone all the time. Thanks for the review.

Totally hott! Wish I had this Spike all to mself!

Author's Response: LOL, doesn't everyone? The looks, the moves, the SIZE, whewwwww. Thanks so much for the great review sweety. As of right now, next chappy is in the beta process... shoudn't be much longer.

Hey, there's still been plot..really there has....just with you know, lots of smut in there too......but that can be necessary (says the girl who still can't really believe how she started out her own fic)...Really loving this fic though and sorry I took so long to read this chapter--stupid flu......but hey, maybe it means new chapter sooner? Ang yay for being back home, too--that's always good :-)

Author's Response: Hey girl, I'm sooooo glad to hear from you. Sorry to hear you had the flu, hope all is better. And yes, it feels great to be back home after nearly 2 months, thanks. Back at ya, I'm getting caught up on all the lovely wip's out there, especially yours, gahhhhh. I soooo can't wait for your next update, your bloody brilliant. It's good to hear you see there really is a plot, cuz, well, there really is. But hey, nc17 fan here, so I have to writesome quality smut (is there such a thing?). God I adore your work... Just A Thing was so bloody brilliant it's ridiculous. Thanks so much sweety for the awesome review. We'll have to chat sometime on LJ.

Wow, electifying!
Can't wait to see what comes when she wakes
up. Sugar or Spike, Spike with sugar, what a nice way for her to wake up.
With the steam they create, anything can happen! :-)
Good job!




Author's Response: Thanks sweety, so glad you liked the chappy. Stick around for more.

Oh my gawd! Some banter, some oral, what a mix! I got so excited I was hyperventilating, then I threw up and passed out. Whatta story! My socks are stuck to the floor.

Author's Response: Too funny jayman. Ewww, you puked. Ok, I don't know whether to be flattered or grossed out. LOL, thanks bro. Sorry about your socks.

Hey no stealing Spike Joss made him for sharing, I'll leave a review okay !!

Okay this is turning out to be one of the most wonderful fic I've read in a long time. The scenes between Buffy and Spike are just beautifully written it's as if you could actually be living the parts, although there is sex it's not written at all in a pornographic way but with love and compassion for what they are both feeling deep down for each other...As I'm an English lit teacher; I give this fiction full marks for grammar and sentence construction , it is well written and thought out leaving the reader wanting for more....I'd like to see more as soon as it's ready for posting please....AA++

Author's Response: Holy crap, are you serious??????? No way, I find it hard to comprehend. Then again when I read your review I felt like I was back in highschool... 'oh my god, I just got graded', lol. turning out to be one of the most wonderful fic I've read in a long time. Now that's a true compliment coming from an english teacher. I'm so flattered it's ridiculous. I never took writing classes, other than english comp. in college - I loved that class though, did pretty well too, maybe I should have switched my major. It's music to my ears that you feel you're 'there' with the characters. That's my aim... to have readers 'feel' the characters and to 'see' what's going on exactly in their mind. I'm also pleased to hear you say that it's not written in a pornographic way. I'd feel awful if the readers didn't feel as if they were reading a 'story' vs just a sex scene. I'm always aiming to leave the reader wanting more too, so I'm glad I've achieved that... or else I'd give up. I'm always so worried about sentence structure and grammar, constantly, so to hear your 'grade' really made my day. Naturally, I owe a lot of my gratitude to my betas, without them, well, it mught be pure shiite. I always respond to reviews and say which ones made my day. And it's true, but THIS review is like a gift, it REALLY made my day. Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart... I'm on a high now.

now how can i not review with an offer like that!!!

loved the chapter. i don't want their night to end!!!

more please!

p.s. now where's my sugar and spike? ;)

Author's Response: I know, their night has to come to a close though, or else suffer raw parts, lol. One sugar and spike coming up, tee hee. Next chapter will deliver a little more of what your asking for, then we'll get back to the plot. Thanks for the great review.

Mmm jealous Spike (Buffy going back to Riley). So he wants to make him unforgettable. As Buffy doesn't like the thought she would have to share Spike with other women. ~ Gah.. they managed another misunderstanding. Glad that Spike did talk to her before he stormed out...
Oh I really loved to read a new chapter. So both Spike and William are enchanted by Buffy. As Buffy likes his both sides. Looking forward to the next chapter :) If I could I would this story add to my favorites too. Just imaged I did it (because I can't do it any longer).

Author's Response: Oh yeah, you know it girl. They got the jealous vibes going on big time, lots of firsts to feel prtoective about. I won't make too much of a problem out of Riley - just enough. But he'll get his, wait and see. Yes, I had to break up the fluff with another argument, can't stand to much sweetness. Plus, it gave them an opportunity to see a little more of the other side to themselves as individuals. So sorry you can't add it to favorites, but you always leave reviews and that's enough for me sweety. So glad ou liked it and thanks so much for the awesome review.

Great story.Great Chapter. This is fast becoming one of my favorites stories. Please update soon. The story is as hot as it can be. :-))

Author's Response: Squeee, I love to hear that. So happy you have been enjoying it so far and are looking for more. Thanks so much, you made my day.

loved it!!!!! LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!! is buffy going to give spike another go...or a third go....or....you know what? i've lost count how many times spike got her off! lol. anyway, really loved the chapter. it was fluffier than the last couple of chapters. it didn't look like it was ALL about sex with this update.....not that i woud've minded if it was. lol. great job. post soon.

Author's Response: Teehee, I love it when you review, it's always so sweet and funny. In answer to your question, maybe... we'll see. I figured they deserved a break and would be tired after all that. That's so funny, you lost count. Yes, I had to move into some fluff area here as we are nearing the nights end. I kinda cringe, but it was necessary. That and it can't be about sex all the time, right? Then it would be just smut, lol. Thanks for the review hon.

That's "there are no words." See, you made me lose my train of thought completely.

Author's Response: LMAO, so, is that a good thing??? Gotcha unhinged eh??? Your so funny. Take care.