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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 05:15 am Title: Falling Deep

Happy for a peaceful stopping place. Love that they are together, at least this once, for real. Indeed happy for them. Shows there could be a future. More for later... time for bed. Still loving it.

Author's Response: Yup, it does show that there is a chance for a real future - glad you noticed it sweety and slep tight - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2007 - 08:43 pm Title: Falling Deep

True feelings :) Now they both know :) Very sweet, loved this chapter.

Author's Response: GLad you enjoyed it darling, thanks so much. Huggles.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 03:33 am Title: Falling Deep

Such a beautiful chapter! I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: spike's mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 09:39 am Title: Falling Deep

Wow that's all I can say Wow....Another great chapter .....Wow I'm just gob smacked and thats saying alot for me I'm a little behind with my reading so now I'm off to the next chapter......SmileyCentral.com

Author's Response: Thanks hon, that's good in a way that your behind cuz you won't have to wait, right? Thanks for the review, and I love your smileys.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2006 - 05:06 am Title: Falling Deep

Wonderful, wonderful chapter. Liked how she slipped his real name in there like that.

Author's Response: Ah yes, she had to do that. Wanted him to know she was making love to the man, not the gigolo. Glad you liked it hon, thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 12:13 am Title: Falling Deep

I know I already told you via email that I loved this chapter but I still feel the need to leave a review. Gotta leave a review...

I LOVED this chapter. It was SO intense. From the running in the rain to the whispered words to the mutual respect and consideration that they really, truly showed each other at each and every juncture of the evening. It was so magical.
You are doing such a wonderful job of laying the foundation of the "finding of one's true soul mate". They are it for each other.

Author's Response: Awww, thanks my friend. I"m glad you enjoyed the tender moments of them coming together, finding eachother, and of course loving eachother. It was meant to be a magical night of bonding and deep feelings and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Oh yes, they are meant for one another, but it wouldn't be spuffy without a struggle to obtain that love. Thanks for a lovely review as always sweety.

Reviewer: Brenda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 08:31 pm Title: Falling Deep

It just Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please update now!?!?

Author's Response: Well, I'll certainly do my best, it;s already 3/4 written so not too much longer. Thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 02:57 pm Title: Falling Deep

Oh my god... 2 cold showers and I'm still overdone! Absolutely loved it! You go girl!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks bro.

Reviewer: Kitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 10:50 am Title: Falling Deep

Hell woman! That was such a hot and also romantic chapter. You know that I love your stories! *giggles*
And I'm all jealous and so want to be in Buffys place. *pouts*
This was really a great and intense chapter. Beautiful!
*hugs ya*


Author's Response: Hi sweety. Glad you enjoyed the hotness and the romance... had to have a little of both. Thanks for the review, I hope to chat with ya soon, ta ta for now.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Falling Deep

What can I say.You send us into the realm,so intense that it is only what dreams are made of.You just reach into the souls of lovers.And you dig deep.You leveall exsposed.And you do it so Beautifully.What more can I say.

Author's Response: WOw, I think I"m going to blush myself straight into next week. I think that's what my muse tried to go for when he took over for this chapter. DIg in, pull out the raw emotions and put them on display for all to see. So it thrills me that you enjoyed the chapter, and of course thanks for the lovely review hon.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Falling Deep

well done :D

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2006 - 02:18 am Title: Falling Deep

I just loved them together! What's going to happen next? Doesn't he still need money? Update soon please!

Author's Response: Aren't they adorable? I just loved writing these last couple happy chapters, and I'm glad you enjoyed it hon. Yes, he still needs the money, and as for what happens next...... al I can say is the angst will pick up after the next chapter. Sorry, no spoilers here hon. Thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2006 - 10:48 am Title: Falling Deep

Delicious , just delicious , dear ! The perfect follow-up after the beginning of what looks like the most gorgeous , romantic , sexy evening they ever had.

Their return home under the rain was a lovely moment. And of course they're making love , truly , completely , and it's beautiful emotions that you're offering us.
I'm ready for a bit more angst to come , since i guess that the spuffy love will win in the end.

Thank you for another wonderful reading.

Author's Response: Awwwww, I'm blushing. I'm happy you enjoyed it, truly... couldn't have a romantic night without some intense loving. Ther serious stuff can wait till the next day. Yeah, despite the upcoming angst, it will be a most happy ending indeed. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2006 - 06:13 am Title: Falling Deep

Very sweet and sexy. Loved the walking home in the rain. Loved that Buffy leveled him by using his given name. A nice chapter to read after a long weekend away with the in-laws. And I loved your author's note-- It's nice to know there are other thirty-something moms out there who think there is a serious squeel factor in all this stuff at times! ;)

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it hon, yeah, Buffy really did floor him on that one. *giggles*, as mature as I am, I'm not ashamed to admit there is most definetely a serious squeel factor when it comes to this stuff. Hey, its a tension breaker/escape for me. THanks for the lovely review hon.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2006 - 04:59 am Title: Falling Deep

FANTASTIC! Buffy crying out William's name was PERFECT! Really pulled it all together to show how much they mean to each other even though they are still trying to "feel the waters" of their emotions for one another! Can't wait for more (even though I know there's angst ahead). They were so cute with each other after they got back to the house, both kinda walking on emotional eggshells. more please!

Author's Response: LOL, I couldn't resist her doing that. He had to be given a 'crumb'. Yup, they know they mean something to each other, but hey, still waaaaaaaay too early in the game to go all 'proclaimy' with the feelings. I'm happy to hear you're willing to get through the angst - cuz ya know when they make up it's gonna be hot. Thanks so much for the wonderful review hon.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2006 - 03:50 am Title: Falling Deep

The rainstorm and the drying off at home were well described and set the stage for the erotic, romantic bedroom scene. You painted a vivid picture of the raging storm and the electricity coming and going. I'm looking forward to these two finally having a talk about their emotions and William's job as an escort.

Author's Response: Oh that is sooooooo good to hear. I agonized over creating that scene, trying to get enough, yet not too much, of the right amount of description of everything pulled together. Okay, I'm glad you liked the chapter hon, but I don't want you to be too disappointed about what doesn't get talked about the next day - especially since I adore your reviews and hope you stay the duration of the fic. WIthout offering too many spoilers, let's just say that this heavy revelation combined with new and fragile emotions, William's sudden decision to quit the biz and desire to not say a word, 'remain in the dark', until all is settled......... well, there's a lot of factors (also the time frame they have known each other is really not that long) that will come into play as to what they will and won't talk about. That being said, just trust me sweety, the upcoming angst is necessary for the development. Buffy is way too 'thinky-girl' right now. She needs another 'shove' so to speak. Thank you so much for the review sweety and I do hope you continue to enjoy, yes, even the angst.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Falling Deep

Yay! She used his name!!! His real name!! I love the happy chapters--and this one was especially excellent!!! :-)

Author's Response: Tee hee, yup, she got him there. Glad you liked the chapter hon, thanks so much for the great review.

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Falling Deep

Oh, this was so nice. I love reading it. You did a great job. And btw ... you´re muse is male?!?! *gg*
They are that great together, they really belong together, why do there has to be more angst???? Couldn´t you let it be this way?? No, I know, than we don´t need to read this any longer. But I´m happy to hear that the next one will be a happy one too. So I´m happy with this and when there is coming too much angst I have to read these ones and think of the better times they had together.
Hope it was understandable, if not ask me. *gg*

Have a wonderful day and I go to bed now. Smooooooooooooooch.
Caro

Author's Response: Oh yes, my muse is a male... he comes at the most unpredicted times and has his wicked way with me. Also, I have a 5'10" cardboard standup of him to in my living room, lol. Oh, I understand your feelings on the angst, I do. Just keep the good times in mind and know that making up can be just as much fun. If it gets to be too much for you, there's always the option to skip reading for awhile until things get better. I'll miss you but understand if that's the way you go. Just come back or my muse will cry. Thanks for the lovvely review hon, *hugs*.

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 06:52 pm Title: Falling Deep

Alright! Chapter 19! Yay, had something good to read when I checked today!!
Love the story!
Keep 'em coming, can't get enough!


Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it hon. Hopefully I'll have 20 ready by the weekend, we shall see. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Estrella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Falling Deep

This is such a great story! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!

Author's Response: THanks hon, I'll do my best, promise.

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Falling Deep

Oh very sweet, indeed. I like that song as well. Seems they are both trying to say something without saying it. Torture.

It was a lovely evening of follow-up to their very romantic date. It all so wistful. Makes my heart sing and sad at the same time. You wrote their emotions so beautifully and managed to make even their insecurities to be sweet.

Just a lovely chapter. I can't wait for the next.

Cheers!
Nina

PS. I am catching up from being out of town, so forgive my cross posting, but the last chapter of LiL totally rawked my socks. Dude, you keep on with your bad self. That was HOT!!! *glee*

Author's Response: That's exactly it, trying to communicate without words and confessions. Tee hee, thanks, I'll keep rockin on then, can never have too much spuffy luvin in my opinion. THanks for the awesome review sweety.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Falling Deep

Yep, still have chills, LOL! You're very welcome for the help hon, always there for a fellow Spuffy author *At least one of us is able to get some damn writing done, GRRRRR......* . Like I told you the other night on the phone, this chappie is absolutely amamzing. You have taken all the raw emotions of Spike and Buffy and brought them to life keeping us drooling for more. I am anxiously awaiting to see what you have instore for aour fav couple and am always here to lend a helping hand when you need one. Kuddos!

Author's Response: Tee hee, echo?

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Falling Deep

Yep, still have chills, LOL! You're very welcome for the help hon, always there for a fellow Spuffy author *At least one of us is able to get some damn writing done, GRRRRR......* . Like I told you the other night on the phone, this chappie is absolutely amamzing. You have taken all the raw emotions of Spike and Buffy and brought them to life keeping us drooling for more. I am anxiously awaiting to see what you have instore for aour fav couple and am always here to lend a helping hand when you need one. Kuddos!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you sweety for all your help. We'll getcha writing... just gotta get the muse going. Glad your goosebumps responded to the chappy, lol. Thanks for the review hon, talk to you soon.

Reviewer: Katriina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 03:04 pm Title: Falling Deep

Hmm, weird reviewing at this site, but ST doesn't let us "anonymous types" reviewing at this point so had to come here for it... Well, what wouldn't I do to please your muse, he's so my favorite one EVER!!! So to the point of this already...

Awww!!! My heart was about to burst while reading this! Just so damn great, powerful, beautiful, heartfelt (I'm running out of appropriate adjectives to use here...) chapter! You just keep delivering amazing chapter after another! What really gets me all green with envy and struck with awe, is that you write as brilliant "serious feelings" stuff as you do "hot-hot-hot smut" stuff! I find that quite rare, because majority of the writers I've read, are better at the other. I just have to humbly raise my imaginary hat to you and wish to have another chapter of your fanfictiony-goodnes soon!

Oh, I'm so behind in reviewing Lessons In Love (read that too at the ST and couldn't review), but don't you worry dear muse, that will be my next stop ;)
-Katriina-

Author's Response: Hi there friend. Yeah, the mod at ST had to temporarily block anonymous reviews... someone (spammer) kept leaving reviews for chapter 5 of TE that were nothing more than babbling random (crude)words that were direct links to porn sites. They kept rolling in like every five minutes.... so after about 35 of them, the mod had to do something until she can figure out how to stop it. But I am so glad you liked the chapter enough to take the time to stop over here and review. It really means a lot, to me and my muse. And of course I'm pleased that you're enjoying LOL and LIL as well. They're posted here at TSR as well. I am blushing five shades of red here. I'm glad to hear that the efforts of my muse are paying off.... in the dept. of describing the emotions as well as the sex scenes. I do try to pour as much as possible into it to get the readers to feel what they feel. So thank you so much for the kind words and the lovely review, hugs and kisses hon.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2006 - 12:08 pm Title: Falling Deep

Oh I love this story soooo much. Thank you for writing such a fab chapter. I love the way you write Spike/William. It just seems so spot on. More soon please.


Author's Response: Awww, thanks honey, you're so sweet. Glad you enjoy the William/Spike thoughts... he's still insecure, but his conviction and Buffy's action will defintetely help him to be more confident.

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