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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2008 - 03:35 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Love the cosmic torture bit. Guess the poor girl need a bit more practice at that. Or Mr. Gordo. Of all the things to pull them together. Gotta wonder what tomorrow will bring. :)

Author's Response: Hee hee, I found it rather amusing myself to write it like that. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2007 - 08:46 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Wonderful :) Off to next chapter...

Author's Response: Glad to hear it darling, thank you. Kisses.

Reviewer: Kirsi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 05:14 am Title: The Best of Intentions

I really like this chapter!! :D It's hot and yet, not too easy.

Author's Response: Thank you sweety, I really tried not to lean too heavily one way or another - keep it balanced. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2007 - 09:05 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Damn you! I was hoping for Spuffy baby love and you dashed my dreams all to bits.... *wags finger at you* Just be glad I love your stories too much to threaten a walk out, lol

Author's Response: Sorry sweety. Happy ending isn't for a few more chapters, bad Tina, I know. Giggles, I loved your review, I feel properly scolded... walk away hanging head in shame. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 08:12 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

Great chapter :D

Author's Response: Thank you sweety, glad you enjoyed it, hugs.

Reviewer: cheysma2000 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 09:31 am Title: The Best of Intentions

I loved this please let me know when you update. my email is cheysma2000@hotmail.com.
Have a Great Holiday!!
Tammy

Author's Response: Hi sweety, *waves*. You got it, I'll add your address to my email ring. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review and have a very pleasant holidays, smooches.

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 01:08 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

Delicious chapter , dear !
Wishing you a wonderful time with your husband , and a lovely Christmas .:)

Author's Response: Thanks sweety. Glad you liked the chappy. Wishing you and yours a happy holidays, hugs and kissess.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2006 - 12:04 am Title: The Best of Intentions

CLIFFHANGER! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LOL, glad you liked it. Thanks or the review sweety.

Reviewer: darynthe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 10:28 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

*Trying again this swallowed my review*

I have read only till chapter 22 but I am fascinated with your writing. The smut is the best I've read in a fanfiction, you should go professional seriously. Excellent quality. :) Count me as your biggest fan!

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you so very much. I'm really flattered as this is my first fic. Who knows what the future may hold, maybe at some point I can e-publish a fic, time will tell. I'm working on bettering my writing through tons of reading and taking a creative writing course this spring. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, it's been so much fun to write. Have a happy holidays sweety and thanks for such a kind and lovely review.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 01:02 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

Yes, I had wondered about the pregnancy comment last chapter and just forgot to say anything. I agree that these two have too much to deal with to throw a baby in the mix (I don't think I could handle that much angst.) This chapter started off with me again feeling torn about bitchy Buffy. I can definitely get why she was pissed (he was not listening to her and respecting her wishes), but at the same time what he was doing was very sweet (which probably would tend to piss me off more), but she did apologize for being so bitchy. I also think her distaste for his line of work had alot to do with being jealous of him sleeping with other women ( although, I could be projecting. I have a tendency to do that with her.) William needs to realize that telling a woman to wait for an explanation is like waiving a red flag in front of a bull. Our minds start to wonder what exactly he could be hiding and the reality is going to be so much tamer than what the mind can make up. Hopefully, it is not too late when he tells her (but I know you would not do that to us.) It was nice to finish it up with some sexy fun!! Thanks for that!! Congratulations about getting to see your sweety. My husband and I had been married for about ten years when due to a job thing we were forced to live 2000 miles away from each other for 14 months. It was the most miserable 14 months of my life, so I can sympothize with how you feel. Don't worry about your readers, they will be here when you get back. After all it is the holiday season, I am sure site hits will go down some. Enjoy your time with your family, that is the most important thing!!

Author's Response: Yup, I screwed up with last chapter's a/n. The last chapter and this chapter were originally one big chapter that I ended up having to split into two, due to the size limitation of the site. In one sense, Buffy had every right to be angry because she did need her space, but of course poor William was trying so hard that when she finally saw that, she gave into it and saw it for what it was and how it was intended. Buffy is most definetely jealous of the fact he sleeps with women for a living, she knows she has no right, but those feelings are there all the same. If she would accept the fact she loves him it would make things a tad easier, but he's not giving her reason enough to see it that way. They're both so stubborn. LOL, oh yes, I agree with you, about the red flag comment, we women are geared that way. Thanks for the well wishes, sweety, I appreciate it. It's nice to see that you understand my situation from a first hand experience point of view. It's definetely not an easy task playing single parent and being responsable for everything on a daily basis. I hope you never have to be seperated from your husband again. Happy holidays sweety and thanks for such a wonderful review, smooches.

Reviewer: Katriina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 08:07 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Oh, I just love the way you included both William and Spike sides to this chapter. Sweet William taking care of Buffy and wicked Spike making her all hot and bothered...*LOL*. It's obvious that William needs to realize that Spike really is a part of him, and not just a "job-personality". Buffy does need them both, William alone would be too sweet and soft to be able to "handle" her... I can totally relate to that, since I really hate "too nice" people *LOL*. This was yet another excellent chapter, you never disappoint!
-Katriina-
P.S It was good that you told that Buffy isn't pregnant... what a relief, since I stay as far away from stories like that as I can :)

Author's Response: Nope, no prego Buffy. They have enough problems as it is. I'm so glad you liked the William/Spike combo. Now if only he could see how he integrated them, he'd be closer to accepting himself as is. Yes, I'm being a tad cryptic. Personally I don't like the too sweet type either, nor the extreme opposite. Just a man that can take charge when needed and still be tender is the perfect man in my mind. I'm so happy you liked the chappy sweety, thanks so much for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 06:05 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Wonderful chapter again!!

Happy holidays to your family and enjoy your husband... being home for the holidays! :D

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it sweety. Thanks for the well wishes, I hope your holidays bring you much joy and love. Thanks so much for the great review, hugs.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 05:47 am Title: The Best of Intentions

As always hun, loved the chappie and thank you for lettin' me give my two cents, LOL!!!! You know you're my way of gettin' the creative bug out. Kuddos as always for an amazin' job.

Author's Response: Thank you sweety. I love getting your two cents, cuz to me it seems like a million dollars. Thanks for the review my friend, smooches.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

Loved it! William is evil! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Giggles, I thought Buffy deserved a little payback. Glad you liked it hon and thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

At last Spike has Buffy in his apartment now. Maybe she'll speak to him now.
And he almost told her but he stopped. Good then that Buffy got dizzy or she would have left. And because she would have been driving back, it was good he stopped her, she could have had an accident. Instead he's making her something to eat, so caring (and cute) :)
And at last he opened a little bit to her / promised to open up more.
And Buffy is testing him... Hehe I think he passed the test and Buffy got more than she bargained for ;-)
~ To you A/N, as a reader I'm a bit sorry we have to wait. Don't worry, we'll live. But for you, I'm happy. Enjoy the time! And anticipation joy is the best joy :) (Sadly I'm not able to translate the saying correctly.)
As for the email announcement: you could do your own or use Yahoo by example. Another site I knew of gives you announcements like her if you're signed in. But that wouldn't be an option for everybody. Email or a Group sounds good. Let us know what you're decide.

Author's Response: Yup, he caught himself before saying too much. Glad you liked how he cared for her, he was truly concerned and basically took charge since she was being stubborn. Buffy was a bit of a naughty girl testing him and for being a tad nasty too, I felt she deserved a little payback, lol. Thank you for the wonderful review sweety, and for the holiday wishes. I definetely plan on just kicking back and enjoying my time with family. I hope your christmas and new years brings you much love and happiness, smoochies.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 06:30 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Well, at least they reached some kind of truce. And she's spending the night and not running away, so that's good.

I didn't realize your hubby was in Iraq. I'm glad you get to spend some time with him, and no one will begrudge you a story update for that!

Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Yeah, they really did. There may be some discussion in the morning but Buffy knows asking him anything more would be pointless until he's ready. Yup, this is my hubby's second tour to the middle east, and unfortunetely not the last, according to his unit's orders, but we're hanging in there as best we can. I'm fine with what he has to do even if it makes life harder by having to take over all houselhold and legal responsibilities. It's my kids (ages 4 and 7) that make it hard. The tears and uncertainty that daddy will ever come home breaks my heart. Despite having talks with them to help them understand that it's just a job and he'll come back for good, well, in their tiny minds the concept of time isn't really there. All they know is he isn't here and they have a very close relationship with him and can't understand that if daddy loves them then why doesn't he just come home. So we'll all be grateful to see him over the holidays, I just fear the difficulty that will come when he goes to leave again. I hope you enjoy your holidays sweety. THank you so much for the lovely review and for your understanding too. Big hugs and kisses my friend.

Reviewer: elle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 04:15 am Title: The Best of Intentions

lol poor buffy, naughty will for teasing her, update soon sweetie!

Author's Response: I couldn't resist, My muse and I agreed it was too delicious not to write. Glad you liked it darlin, thanks for the review, big hugs.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2006 - 01:25 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Great chapter. William is so deliciously evil. Loved the couch scene.

Author's Response: Giggles, he was pretty evil huh? Ah well, I felt Buffy deserved a little payback. Glad you enjoyed it hun, thanks so very much for the great review, hugs.

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 05:38 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

lol love the story great chapter. but i dont understand why spike dosent want her to knoe what his goal is? about the restaurant

Author's Response: Well, look at it this way. Right now he feels he is the bottom of the barrel, the last person who is worthy of Buffy. He's old fashioned and he wants to get his ducks all in a row before he even thinks about pursuing her. He's afraid if he tells her one thing, he'll have to tell all. So it's better she knows all the bad and good once he has nothing more to do with the shady biz he's had to partake in. I hope that helps answer your questions sweety. Thank you so much for the great review and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Happy holidays sweety, kisses.

Reviewer: Iza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 04:54 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

Now that was fun !
I really did enjoy this chapter, caring William feeding her and how you can understand both their feelings and reasons though you want to slap them hard to make them come to their senses ! I also liked Buffy's little tease game, how wicked but humanly and femininely understanble. And William's big tease game, of course, waow ! I love your sense of humour.
I hope you and your husband and your family enjoy this much awaited holiday ;-)))

Author's Response: Oh indeed, they both need a good slap upside the head and one in the ass for good measure. But, that's typical Buffy and Spike for you. Tee hee, yeah, Buffy tested him a bit, but what goes around 'cums' around, eh??? Thank you so much for the well wishes and the lovely review. I hope you and yours have a safe and happy holidays sweety.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 04:22 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

The confrontation was excellent. William was the perfect balance of caring and forceful in keeping Buffy in the apartment. His concern was palpable, and I was delighted with Buffy's response to him. He may not have revealed all, but she was open to his nurturing and accepting of his care. The sex scene was erotic, and Buffy's voyeurism ramped up the sexual tension admirably. Have a wonderful holiday with your husband!

Author's Response: Good, glad you liked it and also glad you saw the Spike and William blend - the caring and forceful, just where it was needed. Buffy was indeed not feeling well enough to argue and in the end she appreciated how it felt to be taken care of. Of course for her being sorta mean, well, I had to let Spike tease her a bit, lol. Thanks for the totally awesome review sweets. You have a nice holidays, higs.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 12:37 pm Title: The Best of Intentions

This was a terrific chapter. I love how William and Spike seem to be melding - sweet, thoughtful and attentive, with a little side of evil!

Luv, let your man take good care of you while he is home, until he can return permanently to your side. Our prayers and thanks go out to both of you.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you liked the chapter and that you see where Spike and William are beginning to blend. It's very subtle and intentional that I wrote it and I was unsure if anyone would pick up on it, so I'm quite pleased you saw that. Oh yes, he had to dish Buffy out a little 'somethin-somethin', after all, she's been a wench lately, lol. Thank you so much for the review and for the well wishes. I hope you enjoy the holidays, hugs and kissess.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 10:54 am Title: The Best of Intentions

good update

Author's Response: Thank you hon, happy holidays.

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 10:35 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Oh have fun with your hubbie sweethearty ou both deseve it him for being in Iraq and you for being able to write us good fiction smut with no partner release....I'm wait for the update....and I'll know because I get notice from the site you being on my favourites list...



Author's Response: Thank you hon, I will most certainly enjoy myself and hope the days go by slowly. I think my muse went so crazy with LOL and LIL b/c of the past few months of well, not getting any, lol. But of course even if he's satisfied, he'll be ready to get back to work after the holidays - writing withdrawel and all. Thank you for the lovely review, I hope your holidays are wonderful for you and yours.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 10:20 am Title: The Best of Intentions

Ha. That was great...a little UST to go along with your anger. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Hee hee, yup, gotta have some balance. Buffy was being so mean that I felt she deserved it - I'm terrible, lol. Thanks for the review sweety.

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