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Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter VII

Good chapter. I wonder if Giles will figure out that William Pratt and Spike are one in the same. I am glad that Buffy is interested in Spike although she is in denial about it.

Author's Response: Hmm, I don't think at this point Giles knows any more of Spike than what's on the Watcher's Diaries. And Spike was never too keen on sharing his background, so there's your answer. ;) Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter VIII

*waves* I'm still here.. I just may fall sometimes behind reading.
Uh-huh.. Buffy was making fun of Joyce.. lying she was with Spike? Joyce loved it.. the thought I mean. And a bit Buffy is lying to herself, huh? And Joyce tries very hard to convince Buffy of Spike's qualities. Loved the mother/daughter talk :-D
Hehe and now Buffy has to go again and see him because she forgot to tell Spike her mom's message. And both (Buffy and Spike) are very busy to deny that they don't like each other ;-) Loved the update! Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: *waves back* I'm glad you still are! I know perfectly well about falling behind writing and reading. *sighs* Hopefully we're back in full now.
I'm glad you liked the mother/daughter interaction, we loved writing that and that you enjoyed the update. Thank you very much!

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 05:05 am Title: Chapter VIII

Hello!

Yes, enough hinting. *lol* These innuendos are so much fun. Love these parts most. But what do you mean by your last part...I think Cecily can do as much as she wants but she doesn´t get it. That´s life.
And Jouce speech... God, how she wishes them both together. I´m curios what she wants to talk about with Spike.
So, hush hush with the writing and we see each other.
Hugs

Author's Response: I'm glad that's enough hinting for you. ;) And I meant that Cecily might try to sway William into something but he wouldn't be as naive as to believe her or to fall for her again.
You'll find out soon about Joyce and Spike's conversation, me too, hopefully since Lu is writing that. ;)
Thank you for your review and hopefully we'll have another update this next sunday. *hugs*

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter VIII

Hmmm. If I were Buffy, and Spike removed a notebook in front of me and placed it where it was difficult to reach, I'd be curious as to what was in said notebook. And you know if she reads it, she's gonna be paying more attention to the writing style than the words (unless she recognizes something that William wrote and now Spike is writing). I can't wait to read more this. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: *lol* I think I'd be too, but she was too worried trying not to feel what she was feeling or trying to deny it to care that much about the notebook for the moment. ;) Thank you very much for reviewing, we hope to have another chapter to post this Sunday.

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter VIII

I loved how Buffy's joke led into such a heartfelt mother and daughter talk between Joyce and Buffy. Joyce's reasons for playing matchmaker were very touching. I enjoyed reading Buffy's conflicted inner thoughts throughout the chapter. And the Spuffy interaction was just plain fun. Wonderful update! :D

Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Amelia, we're glad you enjoyed their talk and the chapter. I'm sorry it took me so long to answer the review. *hugs*

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter VIII

This is getting good. Damn juicy with the conflicting feelings going on between both of them. I loved Spike's reaction when she called his bluff. I read your last response to my review for chappy 7 and laughed when you 'hit the wrong key'. I though I was the only one who did that kinda stuff. Take your time on the updates, life gets in the way sometimes I know. This story is freakin brilliant, I love the light touch you're taking with it... I still can't get over how original and fresh the whole plot is. On this chappy I began to think that maybe Joyce isn't up to something, or under a spell, or whatever. I'm sold on her speech, but I guess I'm still looking for something else going on with her - like maybe she set up the whole 'thru time thing' herself for her daughter if she indeed truly likes Spike (as a future son-in-law). Still got me guessing girl. Hmmmm, wonder what kind of 'talk' she'll have with Spike when he shows up for the furniture. Oh, and hey, while I'm babbling here, how is all this happening without it's effects in the present day. I mean would Spike know what's going on if he's lived his life already - wouldn't he know about the letters, even if only up until now??? (I mean girl from the future named Buffy?) Or is it not at a point between William and Buffy for Spike to be aware of his past. So glad you're considering the picture idea. Perhaps Buffy could go snooping around in Spike's crypt one day and come across a photo of herself all 'aged' from him carrying it for a 100 yearts??? Me and my wishful thinking. Loved it, love the update, more please. Oh and thanks for your awesome review on TE and for the mention in your a/n here.

Author's Response: *lol* Oh, we sure hope it is getting good. ;) We're loving to write the conflicting and growing feelings between them.
And about hitting the wrong key, now you know you're not the only one who does that kind of things. At least it wasn't the whole chapter. ;) We're taking our time, life kind of gets in the way of writing and muses were in vacation, seems they're back now, at least we hope they are. ;)
And thank you for your comment over the story, we're very happy you think so. Hopefully it will be light and fluffy until the end, with just a few touches of angst as I can't seem to write without a little bit of that.
I'm very glad you were sold to Joyce's speech as it was inspired by your comment a few chapters ago, I wanted to clarify why she was acting like she was and I think it turned out all right in the end...She isn't the one behind the whole 'thru time thing' though. *hint hint* Hee, I'm looking forward to reading that talk too, since it's Lu's turn.
About how this is happening without its effects in the present day? Well, it's all part of a master plan, there is going to be something that will create a sort of chain reaction. Spike will remember, in due time, and remember Buffy is signing her letters Elizabeth, so that's why he can't relate them both. ;)
Oh, I love that idea about the pic, I'll try to talk Lu into it, I promise. :D
Thank you so much for your wonderful review, sorry it took me so long to answer. And you're welcome over TE, I love your story so much. :D

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter VIII

loved the chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: .... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter VIII

grr, they're both so infuriating. i don't know why they can't just admit what they feel and stop denying it already. and i have to say that buffy is especially annoying. it seems like she's still in high school with the way she acts, and why doesn't she live in the dorm? i'm hoping she'll find out the truth soon. you think something would have clicked with them both being named william. well, i'm glad to see an update. more soon!

Author's Response: *lol* Well, what can we say? I know it can be infuriating, although on the other hand, we're trying to make this story as believable as we can. In the story it has only been a week and a half since the spell and 4 days or so since they began seeing each other and Buffy got the desk, so we would find it highly unlikely that Buffy would be all over Spike declaring her undying love for him. ;) And about her living on her dorm, she lives there, but at the moment she prefers to stay home because that way she can be near the desk. I think the name hasn't clicked because how can she relate William the Bloody with her sweet William?
Thanks for reviewing and hopefully there'll be more soon.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2006 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter VII

GREAT STORY!!!! Cannot wait for the update(s). !!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter VII

I liked Buffy's interaction with Giles, how thoughtful of him to try to get a salary for her. The patrol was so much fun! I really enjoyed reading Buffy and Spike's musings. It was so naughty of Spike to play a joke on Buffy like that, but at least it ended well... loved the Spuffy kissage. And William handled himself beautifully with Cicely. But his meeting with her seems kind of omnious, I can't help but wonder what horrible thing she's gonna to to him. Fantastic chapter! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, honey! Hee, we're glad you enjoyed that, we had much fun writing it. ;) Oh, don't worry about William that much, she might try to do something to him but I don't think he's going to allow her to hurt him anymore. ;)

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter VII

OMG, I am sooooo behind on all the stories I'm following and the reviews I want to leave, so right there with ya ladies. Wow, love how protective buffy is about her letters and the desk - hell, I would be too. Hmm, seems spike is slowly liking buffy a little more as we go along - btw great inner dialogue he has and Buffy too - we're kinda running parallel here between this and my fic... lol. Very well done too if I may say so.
Ooooh, hot moment - "are we still talking about your news?" (kiss her damnit kiss her - lol). After he tried distracting her with the line.. isn't that a frakar demon - I died laughing. Don't know why it struck me as being that funny, but it did, I'm still giggling. I thought there little chase and the "boo" was kinda cute - like a couple playing. She actually straddled him? God that whole scene was a wonderful combo of hotness and comedy. Made me laugh, made me tingle in all the right places. LOL, bout time Cecily got a taste of her own medicine. Oh and I agree on the sending pictures issue, shouldn't happen right away, but it would be nice to work it in there somehow - me and my wishful thinking. I love this chappy, thanks.

Author's Response: *lol* Good thing that I'm not the only one then. ;) And since I got sickly last week, I'm even more behind this week, with reading and writing and everything. *sighs*

Hee, it was very fun to write her being so protective of those. :D And yes, Spike's liking her much more than he thought he would. And you're right, there seem to be some parallels, I noticed that after catching up with your story, which I'm loving, btw.

*lol* We're trying to keep things light in this story, which is why you'll find more comedy than angst, and it makes Lu and I very happy to know that we made you laugh with this chapter. Hee, yeah, Cecily sure got that taste and probably will have some more of that before this story ends. ;) I think we can work something with the sending pictures issue, just have to find the right place. Thank you for reviewing!First of all, we’re sorry for the delay in posting this chapter and the next two, at least. Our schedules are a bit too busy right now and it will be a while until we can go back to the writing rhythm we had established, although we’ll try our best to keep on posting as we had been after things get settled for us. That said, we want to thank Dawn Mitchells, spikesangel, RED and Carol for reviewing. It makes us very happy to know you are still enjoying the story. :D In this chapter: Another mother/daughter conversation and Buffy goes to Spike's crypt to deliver him a message. Mari


Author's Response: Disregard all the last part after Thank you for reviewing!, pretty please? I hit the wrong key. *blushes*

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter VII

Uh-huh.. Buffy is very protective of her letters (and her desk). Loved the patrol :) Starting from Buffy being distracted with thought of Spike, getting clothes for patrol till the end when Buffy was reminded on the spell or short: The snogging. Loved the dialog including the thoughts. ~ And Cecily doesn't like to be second. I wonder what she can do to William. ~ Till next chapter!

Author's Response: Yep, Buffy is awfully protective of anything she considers William related. We're very happy you enjoyed the patrol and the snogging and the dialogue and their thoughts. :D And yes, you're right Cecily doesn't like being second, but I don't think she'll ever regain any ground with William. ;) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter VII

And the kissing begins. Giles knows about the letter, finally. I think it´s a question of time till Spike get to see them, am I right? Please, give me a hint.....
And William isn´t interested in Cecily anymore, that´s great. I ask myself what she is going to do to get his attention back.

We hear each other on the next chap. Hugs.

Caro

Author's Response: Hee, yes, the kissing begins, they just didn't want to wait any longer. ;) And yes, you're right, it's just a question of time until Spike sees them, hopefully not too long, that enough hinting for you? *weg*

Hee, Cecily can do lots of things, but is she ever going to get his attention back now that he has someone that actually might return her feelings? More hints, see? ;)

Hugs, Mari

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter VI

Ok, something is up with Joyce. I mean yeah she's always like Spike, but this is just a little toooooooo much - especially with prompting her daughter to date the living impaired here. Also, I'd love to see if Buffy would send a picture of herself in her next letter to William and vice-versa. It'd get VERRRRRY interesting after that huh? Love this story to death, such a wonderful job. Great development, great pace. Keep up the wonderful work, I am soooooo looking forward to the next chappy.

Author's Response: Hee, yeah, something is up with Joyce and you'll find what on chapter VIII, we promise. ;) Hmm, about sending pictures, well, maybe a bit later? We want to move things along a bit before Buffy discovers who William really is. ;) Thank you, sweetie, for reviewing and hopefully I'll have a little time today to catch up with your story. I'm so behind in my reading. *hugs* Mari

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter VI

It's really interesting that William noticed that his personality is changing. Buffy's letter to William was so sweet, I loved his reaction to it. I really liked William's conversation with his mother. And I think it's great Buffy shared her secret with her mother. I'm really looking forward to finding out what Giles has to say. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hee, you'll find out what Giles has to say very soon. :D And we're glad you enjoyed the rest of the chapter. It makes us very happy to know what you liked especially. :D Thank you, sweetie! *hugs*

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter VI

Hello!

Of course I´m with you two. This is such a lovely story I have to read it.
It´s nice that Joyce is such stubborn. I love it how she can push Buffy the way she likes. And Buffy does it without recognizing. And why calls Joyce Spike always William? And when will Buffy discover that William and William are the same person?????

So, I´m waiting for the next chapter and hope that I will not swim away because it´s sooooo hot in Germany....

Hugs Caro

Author's Response: Thank you. We're glad you're still with us in this story. :D Hee, yeah, Joyce's quite stubborn here. You'll find out very soon about your questions, we promise. ;)

Hugs, Mari and Lu

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter VI

This is a great story. It is funny how Buffy has not made the connection between Spike and William. I really like how you keep Spike in Buffy's thoughts even though she believes she is in love with William.

Author's Response: Thank you and well, Spike is quite different now, a far cry from his William persona so it's not that difficult to believe that she hasn't made the connection...yet. ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter VI

Hi there again, update! Yay :) Living a dream, huh? And now, too late for being spotted the first time, Buffy is worried about her clothes *gg* Good to see Buffy is so smitten with William (and his letters). But as William's mother said: incentive to keep her beloved son far away from Cecily Addams and the bad, very bad things that she was sure that that spoiled and unpleasant girl would eventually bring him with her unbearable attitude I wonder if William doesn't get hurt, he won't met Drusilla and become a vampire. Just rambling here. But it's good to see William happy :) And yet Buffy is looking forward to see Spike :) As I am to the next chapter *g*

Author's Response: Thank you, Cordykitten and very good observations, they'll be answered soon we hope. ;)

Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter VI

Ack! wait do'nt end! I need to see what happens ahhhhhhhh!!!

Author's Response: Hee, well you'll find out in a little while ;)

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2006 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter V

Those two are just too funny. The banter is great. When Spike made Buffy tell Giles how he tried to kill her was especially funny. Great job ladies :)

Author's Response: Hee! We're glad you think they're funny, we're having a blast writing them like that. :D Thank you so much, Jen!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter V

I found my own heart palpitating when she got the letter. Wow, Ithe romanticism is really well written, I squeeee'd when I'd found you posted. Is it my imagination or is there something 'magical' happening between Spike and Buffy, ya know, increasing their flirting and all. Maybe the more letters written between Buffy and William, the more flirting goes on with Spike - like a natural consequence??? God I can't wait to see what Buffy writes back - now that she knows what she'll say. Have a great weekend and I can't wait till you post again... I'm dying to read more. Stupendous job.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Tina! We're very glad you like the romanticism in this story, because there will be plenty more. ;) Hmm, not sure if what's happening between Buffy and Spike could be considered 'magical' exactly, but you might have a point with what you're thinking. *weg* And you'll read Buffy's response on the next chapter, which hopefully will be posted this sunday. Thank you again for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 02:54 pm Title: Chapter V

Hehe.. I can totally understand Buffy that she check Spike out when he was fighting :) And William answered her letter but Buffy was interrupted answering hers. Loved the banter again (the foreplay *gg*) And it seems not only Spike has a Vamp!Sitter, Buffy has a Slayer!Sitter now :-D Loved it.

Author's Response: Yeah, we could understand that too, very easily. ;) And yes, I guess bantering could be considered foreplay for them. *lol* We're glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter V

Oh yeah, this is going to be very interesting. He´s the only one who can kill the demon???? That´s great.
And she isn´t able to write this letter because of the interruptions. That´s so sweet. And she don´t know how to write this one.
I´m waiting for the time when Spike realizes that it was Buffy who wrote these letters. It must be him who knows it first. I´m waiting for the Spuffyness.

But for now nobody can stop the flirting. That´s genial.

Lovely hugs Caro

Author's Response: Yep, Spike is the only one, well the only vampire willing to do it at least. ;)

Hee, yes, it was a bit difficult for her to decide how she wanted to answer to William. I imagine that even if she's open to the idea of communicating through the desk, the idea of corresponding/falling for someone you don't know is not easy.

Oh, he'll find out...eventually. ;)

And Spuffyness is coming, not too soon, but it's coming. ;)

We're glad you're enjoying the flirting, we're enjoying writing it. ;)

Thanks for your review, Caro!

hugs, Mari and Lu

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 02:02 pm Title: Chapter V

Awww... Buffy's reaction to William's letter was so sweet. I love the fact that Spike is gonna be Buffy's slayer-sitter. I really enjoyed Spike and Buffy's bantering, and their mutual flirting. Spike's version of rescuing Buffy was really funny. Fantastic chapter... I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Amelia! We're very glad you're enjoying this story, and especially Spike and Buffy's flirting/bantering, we're having a great time writing it. ;)

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2006 - 09:37 am Title: Chapter IV

I couldn´t wait till you post this on Indi´s page. So I read this one here and give a comment. I´m happy that you understand everything. This story is so interesting. I couldn´t wait. There was no way.

I loved how Joyce made Buffy go to Giles to get Spike out of there. And than Giles only did it when he gets his only "bodyguard". But for God´s sake spike knows that he can fight demons at least. But I laughed so loud as he tried to fight Buffy and didn´t recongnize that he only can hurt demons, that was great.

I think this whole desk-thing is great. And it´s even better that both of them sign the letter with their real names. William (he didn´t had an other name at that time) and Elizabeth.

Want more... definitly. Hope you update soon.

hugs Caro

Author's Response: Oh, Caro, I can't begin to tell you how happy it makes Lu and I that you were so eager to read the rest of our story. :D

Hee, Joyce is going to be a very valuable asset in the story. We're enjoying writing her so much. :D I'm glad you liked that part with Spike not realizing he could only hurt demons. ;)

Thank you so much for reviewing, Caro and this week you will have an earlier update. ;)

hugs, Mari

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