Date: 05/28/2008 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 14
You're doing great - the characters are spot on.
Date: 10/05/2006 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 14
Fantastic.
Breath-takingly fantastic.
I was giggling along with the best of 'em- the idea of Spike strolling around in the buff [excuse the pun] was just too darn funny!
Brilliant chapter!!
Date: 09/29/2006 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 14
much love! much love! excellent chapter, with the laughing and the kissing and...well, the love. now that I know there's gonna be a sweaty situation, though...very psyched ;-)
Date: 09/08/2006 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
i just read it all the way thru and LOVE IT!!!!!!!
more please....this is a great original spuffy story. i love how you worked the poetry in.
Date: 09/07/2006 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh! Over for now? I didn't realize when I started reading that this story hasn't been finished yet... Alright, I will wait then.. :)
By the way, I'm not unsatisfied at all that it goes that slowly. Keeps the tension and all. ;)
Well-written chapter - Spike and Buffy are just so cute!
Date: 09/04/2006 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
LOVELY SCENE, MORE PLEASE
Date: 09/03/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 14
Very nice story, looking forward to more, might want to work on your transitions. Seems like they are acting and feeling one way, then the next they switch without enough explaination as to why. Sweaty situations will be nice, but take as much time as they need to get there, makes them soo much better!
Author's Response: Thanks. I've had some concerns about the transitions too. Spike and Buffy can run hot and cold, but I don't necessarily need to give readers whip lash. I think I'll wait til it'd one and then go back over the whole thing and fix some of the bumpy bits. I'm new to this and writing in episodes has tricks I've yet to master. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I love hearing from readers and constructive comments are always welcome. Sd
Date: 09/03/2006 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 14
I think you are doing a great job. This is turing out quite well, don't give up. Sweaty situations are pretty tricky that's what makes them so much fun to write!!!!
Date: 09/02/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 14
this is such a sweet story, i love the point at which they are just discovering their feelings for each other, and big anticipation for what could come next. i don't mind the slow pace - it suits the stage they are at and you write this with humour and intelligence. it's just so good. i luv it.
Date: 09/02/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
I was sent here by the wonderful Addie Logan on a recommendation she put on her website; and now after reading, i see she had great reason to recommend. This a great story. I am glad that you have take your time in developping Buffy and Spike's relationship. In earlier chapters you had shown the bit of William in Spike, and I like how you have now incorperated the demons part in Spike's personality as well. You have balanced this story very well, and it flows very naturally. Super fic, and I am impressed when you say you are new to this. You have demonstrated great maturity in writing. Good job =D
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm finding that the characters are beginning to write the story for me. It helps to have protagonists with strong traits. These two are always just a little bit too insecure for their own good. You know? So we'll see where they take us. Sd
Date: 09/02/2006 - 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
yeah kissage! i wonder what clothes she will find in there? anyway i hope maybe she'll stay the night or is it morning? anyway that would be SO cute but whatever, awsome update and can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: Oh keep reading. I think you'll like the outfits I pick out for them. Sd
Date: 09/02/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hehe.. Spike forgot that he didn't wear any clothes? Moving statue then *gg*. My first thought when Buffy tried to keep her countenance ... but maybe she had to keep herself from laughing? Loved it :) Even more because they were able to talk without the misunderstanding. And don't worry that you take it too slowly. I think as the writer you must know the pace you're going that is right for it. ~ Till next chapter :)
Date: 09/02/2006 - 01:09 am Title: Chapter 14
nope not slow at all..loved the chapter..love the story..cant wait for more!!
Date: 09/02/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter 14
Slow & steady wins the race! Great story- please continue....
Date: 09/01/2006 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
Terrific job! And no, I don't think it's going too slowly. I loved every chapter and would have stopped to leave you more reviews only I wanted to rush and get to the end of what you've written so far. Now that I am there I think I will pout. Please update soon.
Date: 09/01/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
cant wait to see what happens next!!
Date: 09/01/2006 - 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
good story sweetie keep it and update soon please i need more :D
Date: 09/01/2006 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 14
Poor Spike.......it doesn't help a man's ego one bit to get laughed at while they're naked.
At least she's not mad at him anymore.