Date: 03/13/2007 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
brilliant. love the slow build up can't wait for the rest
Date: 10/26/2006 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Sweet story keep it up
Date: 10/22/2006 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I started to read your story today and I could not stop. I love thes new Buffy and Spike. I love what you are doing with them.
Date: 10/21/2006 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Good Buffy is back (conscious again). What a fool.. not drinking much or eating for 24 hours but going on patrol? No wonder she fainted.
Awe, Spike really acts like a Victorian gentleman. But it seems Buffy don't want him to go, he'll have now to enjoy some time with his two girls. But I'm sure he'll love it :)
Date: 10/20/2006 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Loved this :D
Date: 10/20/2006 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
its gorgeous. really. WONDERFUL, I think you've mentioned once or twice that you're a new writer but I would never have been able to tell had you not said anything. One thing though, Just a suggestion, I thought you might want to Make Buffy play on the idea of calling Spike, "William". Unless you're saving that for later. Either way, I'm over stepping my bounds. You're Fic is delightful, update soon.
Author's Response: I like your idea. So far I've had Spike occasionally think of himself as "William" but Buffy hasn't yet named the man she keeps seeing in glimpses. Keep reading, I may just use your suggestion to indicate when Buffy finally realizes that the vampire she's known is still intimately connected to the man he once was. Sd
Date: 10/20/2006 - 08:24 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Hee hee hee- loved it =]
Date: 10/20/2006 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Life size Spikes are great, aren't they? I have a life-size poster.
Date: 10/20/2006 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Ah, the life-size cardboard cutout of Spike. I've had mine for years, always helps with inspiration...lol! This was a cute chapter, I would say there was still some Spuffy goodness involved. Not the smutty kind, but I don't always need that. I'm still enjoying this story, that banner is just gorgeous. Keep up the good work=)
Date: 10/20/2006 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
You got a life size cardboard cut-out??? I want one of those!!! And this chapter was perfect for the Spuffiness, with the arm-linking and all around sweetness--not that I would complain if there was more...;-) Love this! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 10/20/2006 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh oh oh! Life-sized Spikey goodness?? I need me one of them!
Anywayz... Congratulations on the Judges Pick at the Spuffy Awards! Good for you. Great chappie once again, and I like the slow and steady way you're dragging this out= ) It's sweet, and I understand how important it is to not rush a story, characters and plots take you there when they need to be taken. Can't wait for more!
Date: 10/20/2006 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!! :D