Date: 11/06/2006 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I'm really enjoying this story so far and hope you'll update fast and often...
It's always fun to meet Spike's inner William and a good dose of poetry doesn't hurt, either.
Let's just hope that the demon learns when to shut the f*** up while William courts Buffy... *beat* Nah....
Date: 11/03/2006 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I love this story! I really like the part where she found him in the library reading. Just one thing though, where's Riley? I mean, not that I like him or anything - hate him, in fact. But he's like this weird stalker guy who shows up at Buffy's house everyday...okay maybe that's a bit exaggerated, but shouldn't she at least remember him in the "Who? Riley? ...oh right... he's still my .boyfriend, sort of." way, while thinking of giving Spike a chance?
Author's Response: Yeah, you're right. I just hate Riley so much that I "forget" to put him in. But you'll see him soon, if briefly. My goal is to let him make an appearance and then get rid of him as soon as possible. (lol) I really can't stand him!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. My readers all seem to have respect for the series and that makes me better about trying to be true to the characters even when I HATE them....
Sd
Date: 11/02/2006 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Well then review you shall have! This is a great story and I really love how you are dragging out the Spuffiness. Your characterization of Dawn is super and i cannot wait for more of your work : )
P.S. My sincerest sympathies for your son's change of heart. Quite the annoyance!
Date: 11/02/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Love this story! Can't wait for more. The UST is reaching fever-pitch you know.
Date: 11/02/2006 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh my.. Spike sounds as if he gets depressed. But maybe being invited to stay will reassure him.
Even if he didn't stay... but he was happy at the end of the chapter :) Maybe looking forward to help Buffy with her poetry?
Date: 11/02/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Well done :)
Date: 11/02/2006 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Brilliant update, but yes, I missed this one. Kids are like that, though. :) Loved, loved, *loved* how frustrated she was when he didn't kiss her. And I love how she sees the man inside that he tries to protect with his "Spike" bravado. Great update!
Date: 11/02/2006 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
THIS IS A REALLY GREAT STORY, THANK YOU SO MUCH, AND UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Date: 11/02/2006 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
loved this chapter!!! cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Date: 11/01/2006 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
loved the chapter cant wait till the poetry lesson!!!
you must be must be good with your hands to make a costume!..what'd he go as?
Author's Response: He went at Henchman #24 from the Venture Brothers. By the way, he's 6'4".
Date: 11/01/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Excellent chapter! Glad that Spike left before Buffy ended up kicking him out (not that it seemed like she would have, but with Buffy, you never know...) can't wait to see them start the poetry lessons!
Date: 11/01/2006 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I loooooooove this chapter. This Spike has a lot of his human self coming out and believable. Cannot wait for the update.
Date: 11/01/2006 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
That went rather well!