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Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

I really liked this cahppie! I love this Anya, she is just too funny. So the time has come for Mom to meet Will huh, well I can't wait to see what he thinks of the new and improved Buffy! Great job sweetie and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 09:31 am Title: chapter 3

This is a good start and definetely a good premise for the story. My only problem is that it all seems to formal. It's written primarily in very formal english, it would be nice to have it a bit more casual, it makes it seem more real.

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments

Reviewer: spikeshunny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 05:56 am Title: chapter 3

Oh i'm liking this V.

Can't wait for you to update. Would you like me to make you a banner or may i just suprise you ?

K

Author's Response: If you have time I'd love it but you may want to wait a few more chapters to see what others are in here or email on the side.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 02:27 am Title: chapter 3

Oh, now I feel a little bad about wanting Will to get with Buffy already! Ha, oh well. I'm sure this will be an excellently crafted work, and I trust your judgement completely. More, ASAP!

Author's Response: Thanks and have patience it will all work out.

Reviewer: ugh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: chapter 3

i tried to read this, but i just can't get into it. it's just too wrong and disturbing for me. he's 40 for crying out loud, not to mention the fact that he was her teacher. i don't know why he can't just date someone his own age and even if he does end up with buffy, going from the daughter to the mother is just too jerry springer for me. and just that one spawn kiss is making me gag, sorry, really don't think i can continue.

Author's Response: sorry it made you gag. There are plenty more spuffy fics for you to read out there.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 08:16 pm Title: chapter 3

good story! but dawn and spike just eww! hope they have not been groiny. also hope dawn does not get hurt when buffy and will get together. cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Don't worry about Dawn, she will be well taken care of :)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: chapter 3

As much as I like spuffy I can't help but feel that stealing your daughters boyfriend is just....wll rude :)

Author's Response: It is rude and she is bad but so is Dawn. You'll have to wait and see if you are still interested

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: chapter 3

How old is Will? I think you had something bout him being 21 years older, so that 40? If so, he's a year older than her own mom!?! Wow...
Update soon!

Author's Response: He is a year older than her mom. Very common now a adays for older men to date women that could be their daughters.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 05:12 pm Title: chapter 3

Well what can I say but Buffy has to be the crappest parent on the planet. I mean your nineteen year old daughter brings home her 39 year old ex teacher boyfriend, and all you think is he's hot. I mean come on he's practicaly a pervert. You'd have him pinned against the wall by his bollocks. No offense but she's still a kid, it's only when you've been nineteen going on forty, that you know how young that is. You'd flip. For this to be more believeable there has got to be more concern over Dawns emotional needs, by her mother. Bugger the grades. You've already indicated that she's not as mature as Will thought, but her mum should know that. It's a challenging subject, but you're gonna need to work harder to make it work.

Author's Response: Well I am trying to convey my dislike of older men/younger women relationships. I am over 40 and we would flip if our girls brought home guys that age. Remember though, Dawn lost her father when she was young and may be looking for that father figure.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 04:18 pm Title: chapter 3

I just skipped the chapter... I can read it :)

For me? Loved the internal connection at first sight of the electrical kind. Now back home with her mom it seems that Dawn is acting more child like indeed. Thank god William noticed it. Apparently he didn't fall for Dawn's mind.. more for her good looks. (Because Dawn wasn't able to keep track with the talk Buffy and William had had.) And William didn't kiss Dawn on the lips. Seems he did feel a bit awkward. First sign of the end I hope. (Even if I had no problem to read the chapter the whole Spawn thing puts me off *shudder* Sorry, but for me it's just simply wrong. But whoever wants to read the pairing, they shall feel free to read it. I'll try the next chapter again till I come to a point where I have to wait how it ends. I'm still unsure how it can and in a good way the is not awkward. We'll see.)

Author's Response: Thanks for still reading and it is the beginning of the end. Dawn will revert to a minor character for a while.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 03:39 pm Title: chapter 3

Can't help but wonder what Will is thinking from his end ..lol..

Funny how Dawn reverts to her little girl, whinny persona when around her Mom..Not exactly a turn on for the much older professor. (Well maybe for some sicko types it would be) Bet one of the things that attracted Will to Dawn was her maturity. hmmm.. Loving this story!

Author's Response: Thank you. It's the beginning of the end. Hehe

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 - 02:49 pm Title: chapter 3

Hmm..what IS that about Will? LOL

Author's Response: Hey you write about it too. LOL

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, I sense things will heat up soon between our favorite couple! This is great so far, keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you. It may take a bit to heat up but please continue to read and review.

Reviewer: brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm on the edge of my seat!! I know exactly how Buffy feels...I love getting a new haircut/color. Makes me feel so good about myself. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate that coming for you.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well watta' ya know?! A Spuffy story with an older Spike AND Buffy! I don't mind the stories where Buffy is in her twenties or younger..,But it is nice to read a story where Buffy is a bit more mature in age..

As far as the Spawn thing..No I don't like Spawn, BUT if you promise that Buffy gets her Spuffy lovin' I can just ignore that! : D Really enjoying this story alot!

Author's Response: Oh yes Spuffy lovin but not for a few chapters.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

When I read the first chapter it didn't really occur to me that I would have to read Spawn. I don't read that pairing, normally. I liked the first to chapters though... because it was only Buffy and Dawn. In the first chapter Dawn said: He waited until I had finished his class before asking me out so as to not cause any problems, and we have been dating ever since. Yeah, I know I'm silly. But I saw the answer to the other review: They were intimate but there will be no spawn in this fic. Anything that happened before will not be discussed. Maybe I'll chicken out. I can't stand Spawn. I hoped they hadn't reached that level, silly me. Because to me? It makes it even more ick, sorry. I'll check in to the next chapter but when it gets too much for me I skip or stop reading. Or wait till the end of the story. Yeah, maybe this. It would still be a bit awkward for both if Spike was married to Joyce, she dies; and Buffy his stepdaughter and she fall in love. But Dawn is alive. They'll meet all the time after Buffy and Spike gets together. I'll decide with the next chapter I think. Not now... have to think more. Till now I loved your other story more. But that's me, this isn't about your story. It's written good so far.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. Believe when I say I hate Spawn too. Pretty much hate any pairing other then Spuffy. I don't want to give too much away so I don't want to say too much now. I understand if you want to wait till the end though.

Reviewer: spikeshunny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

oooh i'm really intrigued, you know the sparks are gonna fly

Can't wait to read more hun x


Kris

Author's Response: Thanks. That means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Gloria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Just to clarify--have Spike and Dawn been sexually intimate or not? Because that makes a big difference in the ick factor when Buffy and Spike get together.

Author's Response: They were intimate but there will be no spawn in this fic. Anything that happened before will not be discussed.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2006 - 12:13 am Title: chapter 1

I can't wait for Buffy to meet William. I can't believe he's with Dawn though. She soooo much younger than him and a student. This is gonna complicate things. If Buffy and him get together, I hope there are no hard feelings between mother and daughter.
Still though, kinda ewww. I never thought of Spike/William and Dawn being together as something pleasant. Not like Spuffy!
Still, I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Update soon pelase!

Author's Response: I don't like spawn either that's why I won't get graphic with it. I just needed a daughter for Buffy and Dawn is the first that came to mind.

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: chapter 1

okay, well, don't think i'll be getting into this story much because of the spawn. no matter how far you take it, i just can't stand that pairing. and the fact that buffy is the mother of a 19 year old is just a bit too weird for me. and i don't think she would be okay with dawn dating someone so much older than her and who happens to be a professor, but her eventually taking her daughter's boyfriend doesn't seem right either. sorry, not really feeling this one.

Author's Response: sorry it's not to your liking but then there are plenty more fics to chose from.

Reviewer: BEASLEYSMOM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: chapter 1

I REALLY LIKE HOW THIS IS STARTIN' OFF! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW BUFFY WILL REACT TO WILL ;)

GREAT JOB SWEETIE AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

Author's Response: Coming from you that means a lot.

Reviewer: ahigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 06:15 pm Title: chapter 1

This is a cool take on the "age difference" setup. I don't think I've seen another story like it. Good job so far, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope to post another chapter tomorrow

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 05:21 pm Title: chapter 1

Oh boy this is going to be tons of fun. :) I can't wait!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: chapter 1

Oh.. Dawn's new boyfriend is one year older than her mother? When he and Buffy are attracted to one another it must be awkward, thinking your boyfriend slept with your daughter too, first was her boyfriend. (I thought the same as Buffy: Dawn was looking for a father figure; but I think she sees it different.) Looking forward how it will go.. so Buffy gets a full treatment, a massage, facial, manicure, and pedicure too. Looking forward to see what William will say about Buffy :)

Author's Response: I could use some of those treatmenst now to get ready for summer. Glad you like it.

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