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Date: 07/07/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: chapter 21

Tara thinks Dawn will come around Buffy dating Will? I hope she's right. :)

Author's Response: Tara is always right.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2006 - 03:17 pm Title: chapter 21

Great chapter, things are moving along, curious to see what Dawn will do now.

Author's Response: I am moving it very quickly now. Stay tuned.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2006 - 04:10 am Title: chapter 20

Uh oh...
Well technically, if Dawn had stuck more to her age group they wouldn't have this problem. But I guess, if dawn hadn't dated him, Buffy and he may have never met. Hmmm.....
Update soon please!

Author's Response: all so true.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: chapter 20

Well, I guess it could have gone worst. I just hope that once she calms down, she realizes that her mom has a right to happiness too. It sucks that it's with her ex, but when you've been single for that long, it's just good to fall in love again and Dawn should try to look past the weirdness and be happy for her mother. I hope she'll calm down.

Author's Response: I hope so too. :)

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 09:15 pm Title: chapter 19

I hope Dawn loves her mom enough not to freak out too much. I wouldn't want to be in Will's shoes right now. Telling your ex that you're dating her mom, that would be kinda awkward lol Good chapter.

Author's Response: Let's hope.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: chapter 20

On my way to read ch. 20 ;-) The big day.. (You know that I think that Spike/Dawn is weird.. and the contrary to Dawn this creeps my out. But who wants to read it may do it.) Now Dawn is angry. Well.. I see it mostly with my Spuffy glasses... maybe if we would talk about other people here I would think different. In a way I can understand that Dawn is angry. Yet when you see that Spike/William wasn't able to tell her everything you'll know they don't belong together. She was too young. If Dawn had been more mature here.. maybe they would and Spike wouldn't have fallen for Buffy. Till next chapter! Looking forward to Buffy reaction, especially the bit that Dawn doesn't want to talk to Buffy.

Author's Response: Buffy will have a very calm reaction and that is all I can say.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 03:46 pm Title: chapter 20

Have to say, can't really blame Dawn for her reaction. I'd be pissed too. Beyond pissed. Not sure exactly what I'd do and if I'd be able to get over it...curious to see where you take this :)

Author's Response: If you had a boyfriend in the wings, you'd get over it eventually.

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 03:30 pm Title: chapter 20

Not surprised that Dawn is acting like the whiny little brat that she is - please don't let her come between Buffy & Will.

Author's Response: There is no way I would do that. Spuffy all the way.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 12:12 am Title: chapter 19

Excellent update. So glad they have a plan for telling Dawn. I truly hope Dawn will take it well and be happy for them, afterall, She and William were NOT a good match. Can't wait tor more.

Author's Response: Well she is a whiner so she can't take it too well.;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 09:53 pm Title: chapter 19

Time for telling the truth (to Dawn) soonish :) I wonder how it will goes.

Author's Response: Go read chapter 20.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: chapter 19

Can't wait to read bout the dinner and Will's conversation with dawn.
Update soon please!

Author's Response: Updated now.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2006 - 03:50 pm Title: chapter 19

Oooh...on the edge of my seat with the big reveal ...more please!

Author's Response: It's there now.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2006 - 12:45 am Title: chapter 18

I'm confused. I thought they actually wanted Dawn to be at the showing so they could tell her there? Now Buffy doesn't seem to want Dawn to go to the showing anymore. Oh well, I must have missed something. Good chapter. I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: It's more about how she finds out about them not so much the showing. Buffy is just being avoidy

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2006 - 12:18 am Title: chapter 15

Yum, chocolate sauce. Will definitely knows what to do with that stuff lol

Author's Response: Yes he does.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2006 - 12:07 am Title: chapter 14

That was hot. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: chapter 18

Great chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: I will update wed. Thanks

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 05:36 pm Title: chapter 11

Well the fact that Dawn is interested in someone else is a good thing, but how will she feel if Buffy and Will decide later on to hook up? I have a feeling she won't be too grown up about it and will pull a typical Dawn fit, right? Well sweetie you've definitely got my attention on this one. Kuddos!

Author's Response: I have a good example to follow in you.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: chapter 10

Yep, major boo-boo. Oh Buffy you've got yourself in a pickle this time for sure. Looks like going out for a night on the town may have not been such a good idea after all. WEll I'm beyond curious how you paln to see this one threw. Kuddos!

Author's Response: Thanks dear.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 05:21 pm Title: chapter 9

ahhh...Will to the rescue. So Will Buffy be the good little drunk and go home and pass out or will she throw herself in Will's arms and potentially make a big boo-boo? Well, on to the next chap!

Author's Response: drunk buffy is always funny

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 05:13 pm Title: chapter 8

Why is it that I think this may lead to trouble, LOL! Well I think this will give Buffy the push she's lookin' for but maybe not in the direction she's thinkin'. Hmmm....will there just happen to be a certain bleached blond in the waiting? I guess I'll have to go and see ;)

Author's Response: keep reading

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 05:06 pm Title: chapter 7

LOL!!!! Ahhh, nothing like a little dream Spuffy to get the readers goin' ;)

So how long 'til we find out iif real Spike is anything like dream Spike? Ohhh, the suspence is killin' me!

Author's Response: keep reading

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: chapter 18

Dawn brings Connor with her to her mom for a dinner? Too bad she didn't do it with Spike before she did get involved *translation: slept with* him. This would have made it less awkward now. So Dawn said: Will and you did get along in terms of your interest in art - that’s the kind of person you need. But I bet she didn't have Will in mind for her mom. She said 'kind of person'; she didn't say: Take Will! ~ Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: no i am sure she did not.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: chapter 6

Well it looks like Willow and Tara are able to see the sparks as well.....

So I guess the real question now is what are they going to do? I really like where this is going and I can't wait to read more. Kuddos!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2006 - 02:41 pm Title: chapter 18

The big reveal is getting closer...biting my nails here! Dawn was helpful with thinking Buffy needed someone like Will...so maybe....but, then again, maybe not! Should be interesting--can't wait!

Author's Response: look for an update wed.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: chapter 17

The guilt has settled in. While they have valid points concerning Dawn, I can understand Buffy's concern just the same. I'm thinking when the unwritten rule for hooking up with your friends exboyfriends came out, that included sleeping your daughters ex boyfriend as well lol. Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: I would think so but hey this is fiction and I can write how I want it to go.

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