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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: chapter 12

Maybe it's better I don't comment on Dawn's behavior. I did it enough in every chapter I fear (because Spawn ). And Buffy knows too that it is awkward. It's too early for her to met William again. I hope William can convince her otherwise. Yet I know it's (if you think about mother/daughter) too early. Looking forward to read what you'll do with it. Maybe Dawn can move to the Mars? Or the Moon? ;-)

Author's Response: Dawn already has someone else. Now it's time for drunk Buffy fun.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: chapter 12

Follow your heart, yes, but then comes Dawn...and how she'll feel...and that's got to make a mom worry. And William...lol... just like a man to think "well, now I can pursue Buffy". They just don't get it things do they? LOL. Great job hon.

Author's Response: Guys always think with one part of their anatomy, don't they.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2006 - 02:37 pm Title: chapter 12

Now, this is why I missed Tara so in the show.
She's so darned grounded and smart!
Great chapter,
spuf

Author's Response: I always loved Tara.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: chapter 11

Hmmm..wonder what will happen next and how Will will take it. Great chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: You can go read it now. I have updated.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 07:28 pm Title: chapter 11

Well, Connor would be a better choice for Dawn, that's for damn sure. And it would make things easier too. Although, it would still be awkward if Buffy ends up dating her daughter's ex. Don't know how they can deal with this situation. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: You will have to wait and see.:)

Reviewer: Chrissnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 06:58 pm Title: chapter 11

It's great that Dawn made her own decision. But it's still going to be wierd when mom comes home with her ex. Great chapter. Thanks for making it NC-17

Chriss

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 05:01 pm Title: chapter 11

Yeah, Dawn has to decide on her own if she'll end the relationship *shudder* with Spike. Think of what would happen if Buffy told her to do it and then she would get together with Spike ~ that would be awkward too. ~ Looking forward to the next part.. hopefully with the end of the relationship between Dawn and Spike (Sorry, die hard Spuffy fan here who thinks Spawn is just wrong. Just my opinion, everybody is free to have a different one. That's simply me).

Author's Response: Soon it will all be over. And hey I don't like Spawn in any way or form, she just fit the age correctly.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 03:44 pm Title: chapter 11

oh i see a mess on the horizon..

Author's Response: maybe a little one :)

Reviewer: Jass Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: chapter 11

Wow !
This fic is so great. Keep writing. Can't wait to see What happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks and I hope to update again tomorrow.

Reviewer: opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2006 - 01:51 am Title: chapter 10

i love this fic....keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 08:09 pm Title: chapter 9

How did I manage to miss a chapter? lol After reading chapter 10, I was like: "How did she get there? Why is she drunk?" I'm such a loser lol. Great chapter. Anya is always fun.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: chapter 10

Wow, go Buffy! Though I don't like cheating.
Great chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Don't like the cheating either but I hate Spawn more.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: chapter 10

Naughy, naughy, Buffy. I think my exact reaction at the end of this was "Wow". lol

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: chapter 10

Wooo, sexy and wrong. I like :)

Author's Response: I felt bad writing that cause I think it is wrong to cheat but Spawn is so wrong that I felt it was ok.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: chapter 10

Oops.. I wasn't able to type last time. ~ *nods* Buffy was indeed a bit too drunk. I don't think she would have dared to do it if she hadn't been drunk. But at the end she got a bit more sober. Well at last (and that I'm glad about) Spike thinks about breaking up with Dawn. :) Because yeah.. you know my opainion about that.

Author's Response: It will get better soon. I promise

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 02:43 pm Title: chapter 10

Slutty Buffy has made an apperance :)

Author's Response: what can I say? She will was drunk.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2006 - 03:16 am Title: chapter 9

Awwwww, how boring of him!
Update soon please!

Author's Response: It won't be boring for long.;)

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 04:11 pm Title: chapter 9

Oh dear, let the games begin. We all know about drunk Buffy. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Yes we do. Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 04:09 pm Title: chapter 9

BTW: When you look at the story index this chapter counts as "Ch. 1". On to the story: Anya's shop.. so Buffy bought 'Mr. Big'. And there I wondered if she would the it with her and somebody would notice but then they ran into William. And in combination with Anya it's always fun :-D. But now Anya made Buffy drunk.. and William came to 'her rescue' as it seems :). ~ Looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks and I fixed chapt.9. I love Anya, she is so funny.

Reviewer: brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 03:41 pm Title: chapter 9

uh oh...wonder what's gonna happen at home...God that Anya has a big mouth lol. But it's funny! :)

Author's Response: There''s more to happen before Buffy gets home. She's gonna be a bad mom in the next chapter. ;)

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: chapter 8

Great chapter! Update soon please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 05:26 pm Title: chapter 8

Good! Dawn's interested in someone else. Hope she sticks to it. Now what kind of trouble will Anya get Buffy into?

Author's Response: You know Anya. It will be interesting.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 05:21 pm Title: chapter 8

Oh my... I'm very glad that Spike is retreating from Dawn. But Dawn noticed it; and now she wants to have a talk with her mom about it? "Well, honey, you are half his age" or more like he is older and I am... ;-) Oh thank god.. Dawn met another one. (And I repeat: it is still awkward to think of her having been with Spike *shudder*). Girls night out? Sounds good. I wonder if William goes to clubs.. I don't really think so. He is still official together with Dawn. Well, we'll see, right? And hopefully Spawn will be over now (official *shudder* again). ;-) I liked the chapter, don't worry.

Author's Response: Will can't pass up a new club, can he? In his mind he is not with Dawn anymore but he hasn't said anything. Thanks for your kind words.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 03:57 pm Title: chapter 8

Oh boy, wonder if Will is going to be making an appearance at the new club? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: you will have to wait and see. :)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2006 - 07:51 am Title: chapter 7

Oh total dream smut chapter....love it

Author's Response: thanks

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