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Reviewer: spike4buffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 11:45 am Title: A version of the past

OHHHHHH..*wipes tears* Thats the sweatest thing Xanders ever said in any story ive read.. THANKU.. I bow down to u

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 12:15 am Title: Epilogue

Lovely story, liked the Spike Xander friendship that was a nice touch. Really wish that the slayers would have brought some heavy weapons to the fight, set traps and had some more modern day weapons. Flamethrowers would probably be a killer weapon to use against them :)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 11:24 pm Title: A battle commences

Damn I love this story but when reading up about this battle one thing struck me as not very smart. Why the hell are they not taking advantage of the fact that in an all out battle modern tech could be used, I mean why not call Riley and have the army standing by. I mean 2000 soldiers or so walking in a tight formation.....I'm telling you some mortars a couple of Bradleys and some hummers with 50 cal machine guns and that lot is dead before the fight even starts. Hell why not a couple of Apache helos set loose on them.....I know one of those hercules gunships that can circle from high above and just rain down death on the demons would probably be enough to kill them all.

Reviewer: bitchee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2006 - 01:43 am Title: A Perfect Life

Love stories where Spike does'nt remember Buffy or rejects her ... Dont get me wrong I'm all about the Spuffy its just that I like it when Buffy recieves a wakeup call.
Adored the whole story and especialy loved how you made it Dawn that he remembered first.
And Buffy's jealousy over it.
Let out a large YES! when she chose to be with him, even minus the soul.
More long ones like this please...
You do it so well.

Reviewer: bigbird2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 05:59 pm Title: Epilogue

Read the whole thing in one go! dont review offen but really wanted to say this was excellent really enjoyed it - well done xx

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2005 - 05:18 pm Title: Epilogue

Wonderful story, it was great ! Thanks

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2004 - 03:47 am Title: Epilogue

The End? Life just isn't fair! Okay, forget the fact that you wrote this amazing story, gave us the Spuffy luvin' (which btw was perfect, although I would have had Spike with the rough and tumble, but we already know that I like it rough). You gave us action, and suspense, and alot of chappies. But you know me I'm hard to please! How dare you end this! OK its out of my system. You did a great job, and I'm sure everyone will agree with me on saying, "What's next?" Kisses Lizzy

Reviewer: jodi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2004 - 02:58 am Title: Epilogue

Awesome story with a happy ending! So when are starting on your next masterpiece? :)

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2004 - 01:53 am Title: Epilogue

Sniff...sniff...looks like our love affair is at an end. I have enjoyed every chapter & all of your kisses...sloppy & otherwise. This story was my chocolate cake. I am glad to see that Buffy & Spike's love affair lives on in your reality. Thanks for giving me the chance to walk & babble throughout my visit to your reality. I really truly loved it. I will miss looking forward to another chapter from you. Hope to have a chance to read another story from you sometime in the future. You entertained me a lot.

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2004 - 11:24 am Title: A love reclaimed

I knew Angel had it coming from the first line of this chapter. I liked that Buffy was practically dismissive of Angel's objections...no long drawn out scene. You made me laugh with this..."She guided a perplexed looking Spike to a free chair and plonked herself down on his lap, one arm around his neck."...then this...“Is that it?” Buffy interrupted incredulously, “No ‘what’s wrong with you Buffy?’ ‘Have you lost your mind?’ No ‘What have you done to her Spike?’ Not even a little ‘Buffy, do you really think this is a good idea?’”...adored this...“Plus” Xander continued with a magnanimous shrug, “Spike saved my life which puts him right at the top of my, ‘Demons who can date Buffy ‘ list”...last but not least this... “Can you lot pack that in” Spikes annoyed voice broke them apart after several long moments spent holding each other in silence, “it’s enough to make a fella nauseous”...giggle. Thank you for giving me a good dose of Sexy Spike...can never have too much of that...ever. Enjoyed the playful quality that you gave to Buffy & Spike. Loved that you had Buffy do this..."she felt the tension in his body, the residual uncertainty as he opened his mouth to speak. “I love you” she beat him to it, a hurried declaration designed to make his own easier." I found the rest of the chapter to have emotional depth while still delievering the sexy. Felt it was right that it should be more about making love the first time than the wild sex. I thought it was perfect. Thank you for another long chapter. I am sad that the story is at an end but so happy with the way everything turned out.

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2004 - 10:46 am Title: A moment in the aftermath

I LOVE this...“If you gotta do this, then ok, go I won’t try to stop you. But you have to be doing it for you” she paused looking deeply into his eyes, “not for me”...OH yes yes yes...kiss the author. Loved Buffy's mad dash. The way that you had Buffy use Spike's soulful speech on him...was just brilliant. You gave my heart a twist a couple of times in this chapter. Spike breaks my heart when he comes over all vunerable. You have found a soft side to Faith. Lovely lovely chapter...so worth the pain & the wait to get here.

Reviewer: nip1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2004 - 02:02 pm Title: A moment in the aftermath

I am tearing...and I am supposed to be very happy! Good job in geting the same dialogue that Spike had for Buffy!

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2004 - 08:31 am Title: A power struggle

Oh no you said the three letter word that starts with an E. I don't want it to...I don't want it to...your avid reader whimpers/whines. Another outstanding chapter...no surprise there. You carried the amazing tension from the last chapter right over into this one. You had me pretty worried about what was going to happen. You made me nervous when Willow's dark side made an appearance. What she did to the shaman was...all kinds of ewwww. You had me scared when Faith went down. I am selfishly relieved that none of the main characters were lost. Have the impression that you would not have hesitated if you needed someone to die for the story. Faith's grief over the Slayers that lost their lives was so moving. I loved the moment of intense connection that Buffy experienced with Willow, Dawn & Spike...especially everything that Buffy realized about Spike. I loved the contrast of Angel wanting to rush in to protect Buffy while Spike wanted to revel in Buffy's strength. Angel still seems in so many ways to see the girl that Buffy was not the woman that she has become. I found that many of your words & lines were beautifully visual in this chapter. These were a few... "in the cloying magic of this deceptively ordinary looking man, like a mosquito trapped in solidifying amber"..."It cried for joy at it’s renewed freedom, swirling and rushing through her body"..."She was the power, pure, savage and blacker than the darkest midnight."..."She spun the shaman’s body like a fly in the web of her magic, silken and deceptively beautiful, deadly and unbreakable." Now you have me geared up to see the after affects of the battle. Wanna say thanks for the extra long chapter too.

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2004 - 03:01 am Title: A power struggle

Hey its me again! My computer is totally down for the count, and so I was on hiatus,until withdrawl symptoms appered and my hubby put me on his lap, uh, i mean laptop! Anyway, so I have had alot reading to do, not like i am complainin'. You remember how I moaned bout the spuffy luvin' ! Forget it! This story is doin' so great I hate to see it end, but in the mean time you'll keep me busy right! You are the goddess of spuffy, i bow down toyour feet, and if i could i would give my first born, but i'm 3 too late! So have i sucked up enough for some treats! Kisses Lizzy

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2004 - 08:49 pm Title: A battle commences

I loved this chapter as always. You have made & kept your characters complex especially Buffy & Spike. It is one of the reasons that you have me reading your story so avidly. I prefer my stories & characters with complexity. It makes me think & inspires me to comment. Think it is obvious by my reviews that your story does just that. This chapter jittered with right before the battle nerves. I love Faith here so much. I love the visual of the slayers decked out in commando wear. I am fascinated by Angel's & Spike's confused contemplation of Buffy wearing the duster. My heart aches & cheers that Spike has such confidence in their side's ability to win & his need for his soul. It makes me smile that Buffy is in Slayer mode yet naturally aware of Spike. Think this is a great line..."There had only been two things Spike and Buffy had ever done right together, one of them, well that was the obvious, and the other was fighting, whether they be side by side or face to face, when they danced, the music cut to their tune." I love when you show this happening when they fight beside each other. You paint such wonderful pictures of your scenes that I can visualize everything so easily. So with my stomach in knots the battle begins...

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2004 - 07:44 pm Title: A small victory

Wow...two chapters got by me. How did that happen? Thank you...loved both of them. This chapter was amazing. You managed to keep me right there with everyone in the battle & not lose the tension building & rolling through the chapter. There was an element of sadness too that so many of the slayers & others were losing...sacrificing their lives. You gave the scenes emotional depth by showing what everyone was thinking during the battle. My eyes were glued to my computer screen. I loved the small moments between Buffy & Spike...those moments revealed a lot. Loved this..."He was at her side when she came to her feet, hell he was always at her side, always had been"...followed a couple of lines later by this..."She followed him in; maybe it was her that was always at his side." A lovely moment of clarity during battle. Angel made me laugh & roll my eyes with scenes like these..."He moved to follow, drawn as always to protect her, his beautiful fragile Buffy." He is a bit clueless, isn't he? You created an excellent action packed & emotional chapter. I am more than “Ready” for more.

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2004 - 08:53 pm Title: A battle commences

Exciting update! I love how you siipped in that Buffy was distracted by Spike's lips close to her ear, even though they were all in imminent danger! Ooooh tingly! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2004 - 04:06 am Title: A gift of power

Bad Blind Buffy! Getting a bit upset at her with all of this "Spike needs a soul" nonsense. Don't blame her at all for needing to work through what Spike (the big stupid head) sprung on her about Dawn but thinking that a soul is the answer? Bad Blind Buffy...open up your eyes so you can really love Spike. Spike managed not to hurt Dawn even without his memories of her. Buffy thinks it herself right here..."His arms were not a prison around her sister's delicate frame but an unbreakable protective circle, his possessive growl claimed her as his, but not as prey, for she was his, his to love, to care for and most of all to protect. His Dawn, his little bit, no demonic instinct could overcome the unremitting protectiveness of his affection. He had proved it already, even with all memories of her eclipsed from his mind, still his heart had known"...I might add that you have Buffy think it rather gorgeously too. Would a souled Spike without memories yet fed a diet of hate by the Evil a Foot have attacked Dawn at all? Hmmm...Oh no...now I am having soul having thoughts. Spike is tearing himelf up enough...he doesn't seem to need a soul to do that at all. Spike is acting very much like his soul having self to me. If only Spike would regain his confidence/memories so that he can see his actions in a straight forward Spike way. Why wasn't he bothered by his actions with Dawn before Buffy/Buffy memories got involved? Could Buffy be acting as his soul? I really thought that Buffy had straightened out her "having a soul solves everything" thinking. Buffy redeemed herself a bit when right in front of Spike(whoo hoo)she stood up to Angel being his big old control freak self. I admit that the woman in Buffy is trying...think maybe it is the Slayer in Buffy that refuses to trust Spike's demon. Speaking of Spike's demon...Whew...Spike bite...lucky oops I mean poor Dawn. Time for battle with the Evil a Foot. OH no...a sense of forboding & unease coupled with nervous knots in the stomach is never good...never. Trying to scare me? You know this just makes me want the next chapter that much more, right? Of course, you do. This may have been my longest babble yet.

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2004 - 04:17 pm Title: A gift of power

Excellent, excellent chapter! I just loved how you described the bite. It was wonderful! I also thought it was good that Buffy told Angel that she needs Spike, especially while Spike was there to hear it. I know that Angel is concerned about Buffy, but it's still irritating that he feels he can just dictate what happens in her life. He needs to trust her decisions if he respects her. I just wish that Buffy & Spike could work through their issues surrounding what happened with Dawn. They're both in so much pain that it's suffocating them. I hope that Spike doesn't run off and leave them! I can't wait to read the next chappie to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2004 - 04:51 pm Title: A plan explained

I think this chapter moved the story along quite well! You're building the excitement/nervousness for the upcoming battle and you provided us with a really good understanding of the slayers feelings regarding Buffy, Spike and the rest of the "Sunnydale gang". I think you did a great job and I can't wait to read what happens next! More soon please!

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2004 - 11:48 am Title: A plan explained

Hey, ya missed me? Thank you for leaving me couple of chappies to read to my return. Great job as always. This last chapter was really good, you felt to tension of getting ready to fight. Very cool. Also nice bonding moment with the Scoobies and Spike. I still want my luvin', but since you've got me all ready for a fight, I can wait. But I may be begging for those infamous teasers if I have to wait too much longer! Kisses Liz

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2004 - 09:17 am Title: A plan explained

I thought this chapter did just what you needed it to do...setting the scene for the battle to come. This chapter had some parts that I really liked & others that I really loved too. I liked the scene with Dawn reassuring Spike then Willow & Xander thanking Spike. I loved this...“Starting without me pet?” His voice was honey and fine wine, suggestive and assured as he swaggered across the room towards the stage."...helloooo Spike... and this..."Buffy Summers was legend, William the Bloody was myth." Buffy's dream about baking cookies & Spike made me laugh. I liked Buffy being a strong woman by making the right decision in her personal life & being the slayer by putting aside her personal life to win. Hmmm...I think the story is moving right along. I am definitely still feeling the love...point in fact...I would love another chapter.

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2004 - 08:46 pm Title: A healing touch

I just love this story & I have to say I really enjoyed Buffy's "Pfffft" to Angel. Priceless! Also, I think I sense a Buffy meltdown coming on (after Angel's comment about the ring). As if Angel has a right to make judgements about her love life anymore! (I'm pretty sure I'd be outraged if I was her). Or maybe she'll just be dismissive....hmmmm. Anyway, like I said, I love the story and can't wait for more! By the way, I totally understand about work. I'm happy just to get new chapters!

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2004 - 01:42 am Title: A healing touch

Oh so glad to see a new chapter. I was starting to get withdrawal symptoms. I loved...adored...really really liked Buffy reaction to Spike's lack of soul. Can't remember if I knew before then that Spike's soul was gone...it never seemed to matter much to me, I guess. Even better Buffy let Angel have it. It is really good to know that Spike will be on his feet again soon...I have to give Angel thanks for making that possible. Curious to see Spike's reaction to Angel doing that...even though Angel did it to prevent Buffy from doing it. Xander gives Buffy more really good advice...hope she is listening...think she is...maybe. Hmmm...why is Buffy still wearing the engagement ring? Things seem like they are about to get heated up & crazy in Cleveland...can't wait. Hate that things are getting crazy for you in real life...thanks for getting this chapter to me.

Reviewer: Cali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2004 - 06:35 pm Title: A welcoming committee

Wow, this was an emotional & kinda depressing chapter for me. I am not sure how I feel about all of it. I wish Buffy, Spike & Dawn had all talked about what happened in the motel. Things went from bad to oh so worse with Buffy & Spike not communicating. I am glad that Dawn at least gave both Spike & Buffy her perspective on things. I like that you show Buffy struggling to come to an understanding about the true nature of Spike. I hate to see Spike so emotionally beat down...not to mention physically hurt badly again...feels like he just recovered. I loved that you had Xander give Spike...& accidently Buffy...such good advice. I hope they take it. The big evil has struck out twice so far...something tells me the big evil won't be too happy about this. Now comes Angel, the ramifications of Spike saving Xander's life, more Buffy & Spike angst, the Cleveland Hellmouth, big evil plans to be thwarted, & much much more...can't wait for a new chapter...cause I can honestly say I do not know what is going to happen.

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