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Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Good reviews refse to form in my brain when I'm tired, so......I liked this chapter lots...poor Buffy though :(

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

ok now there is something def. wrong in her past.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 01:30 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

What an emotional roller coaster. William's attentions and insights are a bit overwhelming. The passionate aftermath of the "job interview" was vivid and emotional. I'm enjoying the push and pull of Buffy's response to being romanced.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

That was really sweet!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 07:39 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Poor Buffy is desperately trying to hold on to that control...Afraid that is she lets herself go she'll be lost. And the truth is... if she does let herself...she WILL be lost. She just doesn't get that she will be lost in Will..and that is a good thing. You can't help but ache for her....*sigh* Very emotionaly charged chapter!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Let's hope this break-down Buffy is ready to share some of her past with him-- to explain why she's so closed off. Maybe she'll even be so brave as to share her feelings with him! Really looking forward to more!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Great chapter! More soon please.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Loved the chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: mark evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Thanks for the chapter :D .

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

See how he is, just so hot and sexy and then, the moment she get scared, the second she objects, he becomes this sweet tender comforting sweetheart. She's gotta give into him sooner or later beause he's just so perfect (even if he is a bit devious at times). Wonderful update. more please.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Well yeah: Buffy taking the work would have been too easy, huh? And then it got hot... but the snogging was too much for Buffy after this day. Good that Spike isn't leaving her. ~ Good chapter! :)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

loved it. glad buffy had her a good cry in this chapter. she needed it. glad william was there to hold her. love this story lots. post soon. great job.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Hopefully this is not two steps back for Buffy.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

It seems like he might be getting through to her. I hope this makes them closer. Poor Buffy is so scared of what she's feeling. I hope she accepts it and William. Update soon please!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I had a feeling it might be too soon for that, but it was still a pretty hot chapter. Can't wait for more=)

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